Kha'viath D'khalex - (Desert Wraith)

[SagaSword]

Byond ID: Sagasword

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Saga "Chopper" Madrik

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Kha'viath D'kalex

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? yes

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

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Kha'viath, unlike any of his clan people, was born to love peace and hated the times of hunt. He was wise, if not Strong in muscle, strong in wisdom and intelligent. His wisdom made his father give him a special place in the Council of Ancients even though he was 120 . But since then, things started to change, some yautjas didn't like the idea of how could a kid give orders in the Council of Ancients, a bad blood clan took advantage of this negotiation and kidnapped the Council of Ancients' Master.

Only Kha'viath found out about the kidnapping because he was a genius in hiding, so he wasn't captured with the Master. Kha'viath followed them to their encampment which was in the deserts of R'ka-Dto, he managed to trick the clan people by making them think a Desert Serpent was coming their way and freed the Master and began fighting the clan members which ended in beheading the clan Elder on the hands of Kha'viath.

Since then, the Council of Ancients gave him the name of Kha'viath D'kalex or (Desert Wraith), and a place in the Council when he ages to 500.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

I intend to play mindwise other than brutal force, scaring marines or serpents into a trap and duel them, use tactical dividing of marine forces and then take them out one by one other than barging in, i keep an eye for marines and try to negotiate (since my predator likes peace for honor more than hunting), and just make the round fun for everyone

Why should we whitelist you?

I LOVE KITTENS!!! Well. i'm not sure, being a good guy?..

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Probably no.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Yea, Paradise station, when i was 12 years old for being a general shitler. (plz don't ban me)

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? yes

[Casany]

short story, its OK, bland playstyle.... Neutral. Id recommend trying to use a unique playstyle other then "Ill hunt and duel honorably", but again thats just me

[SagaSword]

short story, its OK, bland playstyle.... Neutral. Id recommend trying to use a unique playstyle other then "Ill hunt and duel honorably", but again thats just me

I'm just going to blend in with the humans, scare them and trap them, and all that. I really don't see a unique playstyle in predators other than just that, hunting and making contact with the marines and xenomorphs, maybe i will change my playstyle when i play it, but really it's not that big of a difference.

[Skane10634]

short story, its OK, bland playstyle.... Neutral. Id recommend trying to use a unique playstyle other then "Ill hunt and duel honorably", but again thats just me

Not much more to say then this honestly

[Heckenshutze]

Forum activity is good, I like short stories but this one is too short however isn't bad I would like to see the full story of that 'rescue mission' . I agree with Casany about the playstyle it might need a tweak. Seen him InGame a few times but I'm afraid I'll need more interactions with the man. Gonna stay neutral, for now.

[LarryOrtega]

I will give my opinión if staff team dont mind;

.- The history, it´s a Little different from the other storyes, that´s good. But it´s too short and have one discrepance.

1.- ¨Kha'viath, unlike any of his clan people, was born to love peace and hated the times of hunt.¨

Hate the times of hunt?, that´s the bread and butter of the Yaujta, how can a ¨Hippie¨ predator gain a place in the council?, it´s just bullshit.


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Why should we whitelist you?

I LOVE KITTENS!!! Well. i'm not sure, being a good guy?..

You love kittens... How cute. But that´s not a mature response. ¨Dunno why you should withelist me¨. that not give staff team ANY REASON to actually whitelist you....


.- Your forum activity could be good, but you are in the forums for one year, so it lack of forum activity... (Just look Heckenshutze post counts, have the same as you, and he´s only here for six months).


I´ll go neutral, i will wait for his responses.

[LordeKilly]

This is uh, really not good. You've somehow managed to create a predator who dislikes the hunt. Every Yautja is programmed to hunt, it is the building block of their society. It's their favorite sport, no matter what. Furthermore, you've made him into some magic warrior, years ahead of his time, having a place in the Council of Ancients and somehow defeating an ENTIRE CLAN OF BAD-BLOODS.

No. This application better be a joke, because this is just bad. You've created a very vague, generic story with elements making your predator some magic ass brainchild, and you really don't seem to have taken the application seriously at all.

-1.

[Boltersam]

Saga, I won't go reviewing this application because everyone else has already expressed the flaws. You could do a LOT better than this.

[Helgraf]

Everyone else has said what I would say.

-1

[Feweh]

Denied