Nracha-dte kjuhte (Relentless Void)

[Bawws]

Byond ID: Bawws

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):

Joseph 'Liquid' Steel - I've recently been playing alien more, but I would say I play both of them equally.



Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):

Nracha-dte kjuhte (Relentless Void)



Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?

Yes, I have read it a couple of times now.



Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

The thrill of self-improvement is only understood by the individuals that take pride and motivation to the place where it is most needed. The ones who understand the thrill understand that the thrill is the gateway to true inner change. The change for the better in Yautja society revolves around the hunt. Nracha-dte kjuhte/Relentless Void is one of many blooded Yautja whom successfully has pursued their own prey and made their first honorable kill. Self-control, recognition, and respect is one of his key traits that he possesses. Relentless Void is not an arrogant Yautja individual, however, he does contain pride within himself. Pride is one of the seven deadly sins and pride is not necessarily bad, but it must be maintained properly for it not to overcome you. Although pride can potentially have negative effects in the long-run, Relentless Void uses this pride as the stepping stone to benefit his overall skill and realization. His first trophy that has earned him his place in the Blooded rank has enlightened him of the thrill of the hunt. One of many things that Relentless Void has learned through the hunt is that his skill will always be surpassed by others around him. Yautja just aren't more skillful than others for no reason. They had a reason and that reason is that they understand the thrill of the hunt brings them motivation to improve their own skill. Relentless Void understands this and he considers his prey equal in skill until the time actually comes for a fight for a death. Giving people the chance to make an effort in defeating you shows honor to you and your opponent. At the end of the fight, one person wins and the other learns from his mistake.


How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?


I don't plan on becoming the biggest and most bad ass predator. I plan on giving my opponent an equal chance as me. I show as much honor as I do to myself. I find whoever I feel is close or equal to my skill, then I hunt them as my prey, given that they are able to kill me. I don't jump into the middle of things. I take many precautions and I think it's better to be safe than sorry. I want to make an impact based on my character and through gameplay. Only one person wins at the end and the other learns from what they did wrong. I expect much of that, which reflects not only in playing a predator, but as any other species. This reflects me real life too.


Why should we whitelist you?

I'm a big fan of the Alien franchise, I don't mind the crossover of Aliens and Predators and I've always enjoyed seeing these too bad ass movie characters go at it. I don't know much of the Predator's backstory as much of the Xenomorphs, but I have been wanting to apply as a predator for a while now. Making this app has really taught me a lot of the Predator's lore and what-not. I enjoy this server and I would love to be whitelisted to experience more of the server. I find the server to be extremely immersive (minus the John Cena Queen, but it's funny hahaha).

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Not that I can recall.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

Not that I know of.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

Yes, I understand.

[Bawws]

So I understand that I don't have much activity on the forums which is why a lot of people do not know me, but I do check much of it. I'm not much of a poster, but I don't mind learning the community even more. It'll help me and it's more entertaining. Thank you guys for reading this and if you have any sort of criticism for me, feel free to say. I appreciate advice greatly and it helps me out.

[Heckenshutze]

I'm gonna stay neutral for now. I'll pay attention to your character and yourself as a forum user.

[LordeKilly]

There really isn't much to you, which is my problem. You've only found 9 things to post in the last 2 years? I'm not saying I expect you to religiously participate, but that's pretty weak activity, even for someone who lurks. In game, the name or ckey doesn't ring any bells, as you've stated you recently started playing alien more, i don't remember really anything about your character, nor really seen him for that matter, ever. The story is quite bland, very generic. Your background was more about defining why pride is good in small doses, but not much development of the character other than the fact he's an immensely inexperienced hunter.

The predator whitelist really requires more than this. -1.

[Bawws]

There really isn't much to you, which is my problem. You've only found 9 things to post in the last 2 years? I'm not saying I expect you to religiously participate, but that's pretty weak activity, even for someone who lurks. In game, the name or ckey doesn't ring any bells, as you've stated you recently started playing alien more, i don't remember really anything about your character, nor really seen him for that matter, ever. The story is quite bland, very generic. Your background was more about defining why pride is good in small doses, but not much development of the character other than the fact he's an immensely inexperienced hunter.

The predator whitelist really requires more than this. -1.

I had more posts, but I believe when the new forums were created I lost my post count I believe. It's been a while. I don't play SS13 often, because of my busy schedule. I've been playing more recently and my finals are pretty much over. I can spend more time on this server and whatnot. I plan to be more active, otherwise I wouldn't have spent some time on this app. I understand why you haven't seen me in action before. I used to go under a different marine name which was Mason "War Pig" Groves, but VERY recently I stopped using that name. I use Joseph 'Liquid' Steel from now on


I wasn't aiming for a story specifically, but more of a background of the Relentless Void. His personality and what drives him to do what he does. I understand people who whitelist for predator often create stories revolving around their predators, but no where I can find where I must have a story. I wanted to leave a void and give him a reason of why he wants to continue doing what he does. That way it can reflect more based on the gameplay.


I appreciate the criticism though. It helps out with what's wrong and what I can learn from.

[Feweh]

Denied.

See the approved apps and you'll see a trend.
You have no activity on the forums and I have no idea who you are in-game.