Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

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Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by LiquidRecluse » 02 Jan 2017, 23:08

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Borcuse 'Farsight' Girge

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Setg'in Tarei'hsan

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I would most likely play as a being in the middle of the conflict between the Marines and Aliens, not taking sides and considering them both fair game, but I would still try and RP out some situations if it's deemed necessary, I.E, Setg'in Tarei'hsan extends his combi-stick and draws a line in the sand, then pointing to the Drone.

Why should we whitelist you? I've had good personal experience with Predators as both Xeno and Marine, so I took a long, long time to think about making this whitelist and said 'aww, why the hell not?', I also want to try and see how I would do against both sides of Marines and Xenos unlike certain others who only target a certain group, from what I've seen, kind of like in AvP 2010 (minus the cheesey cloak and press E gimmick).
tl;dr, good experiences with pred so wanted to try it out, and wanted to try and fight both sides...oh yes, also to try and RP as pred.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Nope, unless people would want to ban me for my pun making.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Nope.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes.
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Borcuse ’Farsight’ Girge makes INDESCRIBABLE GIRGLING NOISES BECAUSE HE’S DEAD.
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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by Nightwolf901 » 03 Jan 2017, 07:17

I say +1. The app looks nicely made and i know you. Sadly not only for you Puns Thatweallwanttohearrightguys?, but you're a pretty nice person. My vote might mean much but its worthy than nothing!
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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by DeadLantern » 03 Jan 2017, 07:59

This reminds me of Anakin Skywalker
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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by Biolock » 03 Jan 2017, 12:44

Oh so you think that you can just walk into Crossman-Pred's clan without asking? Leave Alyssa and he shall permit it.
I'm stressing way too hard about what to put here, so I'm just gonna leave it blank.... or....

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Post by LiquidRecluse » 03 Jan 2017, 13:23

Biolock wrote:Oh so you think that you can just walk into Crossman-Pred's clan without asking? Leave Alyssa and he shall permit it.
You stole 'farsight', so that isn't my issue, GOSH.
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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by Biolock » 03 Jan 2017, 20:07

I don't know another 'farsight', but that isn't my clan name, so it wouldon't matter if it was!
I'm stressing way too hard about what to put here, so I'm just gonna leave it blank.... or....

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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by LiquidRecluse » 03 Jan 2017, 20:45

Well....well...

GIVE ME A -1 OR +1 GEEZ.
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Post by Sarah_U. » 04 Jan 2017, 12:18

Idk what to make out of this, but I'm leaned to neutral. Although, I'll give you my +1 for now... Why? Because it was 'decent'. It's bland, but the whole thing is feasible from what I saw and I don't mind it much.

Have fun, good luck. Keep a good behavior and RP a lil' around the server.
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
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Post by LiquidRecluse » 04 Jan 2017, 19:32

Sarah_U. wrote:Idk what to make out of this, but I'm leaned to neutral. Although, I'll give you my +1 for now... Why? Because it was 'decent'. It's bland, but the whole thing is feasible from what I saw and I don't mind it much.

Have fun, good luck. Keep a good behavior and RP a lil' around the server.
Mind if I ask which parts of it you found bland? Just curious.
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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by Sarah_U. » 04 Jan 2017, 23:43

Basically, it's a story I find generic like many others and it wasn't spicey or anything. The writing was good, but the story didn't leave me a mark.

You could check other applications and stories and find out they all talk about hunting xenos and having some humans there and there (Why humans too, first contact with Yautjas is on LV624 in CM), but you could speak of many other species present in the lore. Some of which require entire clans and are deemed AS WORTHY as ravagers and the likes due to their ferocity as an individual.

I just found the entire thing to be alright, but it didn't have a special flavour that I'd have liked to see.
Furthermore, I was busy at the time trying to quickly finish the review of pred apps, which I saddly didn't finish doing so I was being quick. Sorry for the lack of proper explaination on this.
Still got my +1, I like a safer approach over a quickly done impossible thing that breaks the lore, your backstory is alright by me.
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by LiquidRecluse » 05 Jan 2017, 00:44

Ah, alright, and the backstory is taking place on LV-624 (basically this is pre-CM round), sorry if it was confusing.

Thank you for the +1!
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Post by Feweh » 11 Jan 2017, 17:34

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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by LiquidRecluse » 15 Jan 2017, 00:20

...Bump.
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Post by Feweh » 15 Jan 2017, 02:53

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