dha-viath n'yaka-de (Disaster Master)

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dha-viath n'yaka-de (Disaster Master)

Post by Finefire984 » 25 Jan 2017, 21:47

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Finefire984

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Michael Carrio

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
dha-viath n'yaka-de

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
dha-viath n'yaka-de was watching his prey. The prey has been deemed a worthy hunt. dha-viath n'yaka-de takes out his al'Nagara and wields it with both of his strong hands. He spent four days trying to find this prey. He expects it will impress his crush, ka'Torag-na mei-jadhi, when he shows it to her. He wants to finish the hunt and show it to her before she gets taken by a different predator. He gets ready to jump out and attack. Then he hears a branch crack behind him and it scares his prey off. He turns around and sees another predator behind him.
"You ruined my hunt!" said dha-viath n'yaka-de.
"Oh well, you'll find another one stop complaining." said the predator
"It took me days to find that prey!" dha-viath n'yaka-de pushes the predator's shoulder to indicate he wants to fight. The predator is surprised, but does it back and takes out his al'Nagara. They stand ready then both charge at each other. The predator hits dha-viath n'yaka-de in the arm. Then dha-viath n'yaka-de comes back and hits the pred in the hand making him drop the sword. The pred then takes out his dah'kte and stabs dha-viath n'yaka-de in the abdomen drawing blood. Then dha-viath n'yaka-de swings and knocks the pred on the ground.
"You shouldn't have ruined my hunt. You'll pay with your life." said dha-viath n'yaka-de. He then swings and hits the pred in the neck chopping off his head. He watched the head hit the ground and roll away. dha-viath n'yaka-de took the pred's head as a trophy back to his home in replace of the hunt that was ruined. ka'Torag-na mei-jadhi was impressed and agreed to go out with dha-viath n'yaka-de. He then spent the rest of his life looking for hunt that would keep impressing ka'Torag-na mei-jadhi and every hunt impresses her.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
dha-viath n'yaka-de will wait and watch his foes. He will hunt down the prey that gets lots of kills. So say that an alien captures five to six marines I will hunt them down because something like that would be considered honorable prey. Same with the marines. I'll probably have a few honorable duels too.

Why should we whitelist you?
I should be whitelisted because I've had a good record of not breaking the rules for a while, am really active in the server, and i think staff wise being whitelisted will help me assist the players asking questions about being a pred.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Not that i'm aware of.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Not that i'm aware of.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yep.
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Re: dha-viath n'yaka-de (Disaster Master)

Post by Sarah_U. » 25 Jan 2017, 22:04

There are many, many problems with this app. Take some time and try to find them out, you have about 50~ minutes.

Grammar, lore and playstyle are things you should revise... Overall, I'll admit I can't even give you my neutral as it currently stands.
PS: You should check my mentions for previous apps, overuse of Yautja language is not good, it simply cluster the text with search and can't actually prove you know your lore/predators since anyone can translate a few words to look fancier / more knowledgeable.
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F4JSohL ... e=youtu.be
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Re: dha-viath n'yaka-de (Disaster Master)

Post by Feweh » 25 Jan 2017, 22:10

This is awful.

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