Sanguis'Exur (Blood Burner)

[DankAnimemes]

Byond ID: DankAnimeme

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
James Wanderer

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Sanguis'Exur (Blood Burner)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes I have read it numerous times, and had it open while writing this application.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Sanguis'Exur was born into a family of proud hunters. His mentors all trained him only to go after the toughest prey. Before long Sanguis began refusing to hunt game that most considered a challenge, only hunting the strongest mos formidable foes. He often goes months between hunts, while he waits for an extremely powerful opponent.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
To fit with my predators lore, I will only hunt strong opponents. My criteria for this is (In addition to being worthy game) a T3 alien, or an advanced T2. Or marine specialists and Squad leaders. My method of engaging them will be to pick a target as soon as possible, and stalk them until they are alone. Once they are alone I will challenge them to a duel. I will avoid conflict outside of duels entirely, if anybody attacks me I will attempt to flee not fight. Finally when in battle if I disarm or knock down my opponent, in addition to helping them up, I will wait until they are ready to continue combat.

Why should we whitelist you?
I have played CM for a long time now, and while I am admittedly not the most robust player, I do role play heavily

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, I fully understand that.

[CrimsonAerospace]

I've never seen you ingame personally, I've never seen you on the forums, and while you're account IS more than a month old it is however very inactive for when it was made...

On top of that, you're backstory was short, and your play style, no offence, fairly bland for a Predator. You seem to be establishing a Mary-Sue esq Predator, one who's more kickass than the rest because reasons. You say it yourself, you're no the most robust, and while that doesn't really matter for a Predator if you DESIGN them not to be made for robustness, it DOES matter when you're making this one who only hunts powerful prey.

I'm going to have to go with a -1, I dunno, doesn't seem like that much thought was put into it.

[shyshadow]

I'm no expert, nor do I have the whitelist, but I agree fully with Crimson's statement, though I'm not that memorable of people's names, but some people I do remember, though not that many.

To further go upon crimson's criticism, I'd prefer a longer back story with more detail, obviously it doesn't have to be "Character says dis" ect, but it has to be more in depth to get a more positive response or at least that's my thought. I'd prefer a bit more originality, something that defines your hunter, "Is really good, at hunting, only hunts strong peeps" isn't all that original, in fact it's just hindering the marine's most of all, if you kill their Spec, or SL, it makes their lives so much harder, as well as Xenos. If you say kill one of their Boilers, that's a big step back, of course it's suppose to happen, but what I'm trying to say is, going only after /Important/ Roles that hinder the entire team's progress will make the game last longer. Overall -1

[NescauComToddy]

Dank, I have no ideia of who you are. Your backstory Is extremely lacking. Forum activity Is also not really there. The way you would play Is something that a predator would follow anyway, you don't got the ideia of what that question really meant. You had to write something unique, different. About the "why should we whitelist you", It Is also with a lack of Information. You aren't ready to take the role yet, try to be more known In-game before making a app. Also, In the forums too.

Please, compare your app to the other app's to see your mistakes. I hope one day you may come back and make a better application with what you will learn.

-1

[Shyguychizzy]

I'll give you a bit of my personal feedback on what or rather I am reading or understanding from this app. Its a tad short....no there isn't an actual limit on sentences as indeed it is only brief however this is too short....felt like a breeze reading this. Not very convincing...well not convincing enough for me to accept such app or someone to play such an important role like this one. As well I do not ever recall your name, no idea you even are as marine or just in general. The app seemed just a very detailed generic app. By the sounds you will just result to meta targeting the T3s, spcs, and SLs specifically. I don't quite how you worded it and what you intend to hunt which can lead to problems if you do get accepted. Gonna have to go with a huge -1

[Boltersam]

Twelve posts, two line long background, extremely generic and particularly wishful playstyle, and I haven't seen your character around on the server.

-1.

[Scrat505]

Not much else to say that hasn't already: lacking background (compare it to accepted stories), low activity...

-1

[Sarah_U.]

I cannot provide further feedback that wasn't mentionned. Your application isn't up to par with those of other players and accepted.

Please take the time between this and next application to increase your activity, knowledge of yautja lore and to become a part of the community. Have a nice one, -1

[forwardslashN]

-1. I don't think this application is up to standard.

[Feweh]

Denied