dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

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dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by MisforMaster2005 » 03 Mar 2017, 05:58

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):I play them equally but here:Michael 'M's' McCoy,formerly Jack Locke

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Dhi'rauta Bhuja

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?:Yes..

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

Bhuja has always been laying low since he was a child.He does not like attention and can sometimes get annoyed if he is disturbed.Although not known by many,he is very good with tech.Able to hack even the most complex of systems,he is the best tech in his clan.He may be very good at technology,but he is not good at melee combat.A member of the clan 'Tar' Ken',a clan that relies heavily on tech.Nobody cares about him,and he does not care about anybody.

Bhuja has many trophies over his years of hunting,mainly Xenomorph heads......

Over the course of his life,he has learned that teamwork will only slow him down.He does not need friends,and the only 'friends' he has are his family and Clan Leaders.......

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?:

I will play my predator very stealthily but also very aggressive..Attacking honorable prey almost instantly when I have the chance.Relying on tech as in the background but never breaking rules...

Why should we whitelist you?:

I love RP and am very good at it.Also been playing for a LONG time...I understand the geame mechanics(I think) SO there is that.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?:No.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?:No,I don't play anything else BYOND

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?:Yes..

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Re: dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by Casany » 03 Mar 2017, 07:28

-1

Short, under-detailed story, generic playstyle, and never seen your char once
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Re: dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by Aracino » 03 Mar 2017, 07:33

-1 ...You literally put no effort into this.
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Post by Thatnewguy01 » 03 Mar 2017, 07:54

-1. The deal with the backstory is, what I've seen, the more fluff the better. The more information you have in it the better. Good luck
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Re: dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by northcote4 » 03 Mar 2017, 08:10

Hate to be a buzzkill, but I have to agree with the other folks. -1

Isn't up to par with the other applications. I suggest taking a look at some of those that have been accepted if you're struggling to find the standard.
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Re: dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by Boltersam » 03 Mar 2017, 10:59

This is simply terrible. -1.

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Re: dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by Imperator_Titan » 03 Mar 2017, 13:00

The amount of effort put into this is shockingly low. Also, that name is terribly unoriginal, two other people already use it. I'm already confused enough, having a third person with it would only make it more confusing.

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Post by NescauComToddy » 03 Mar 2017, 13:04

Boltersam wrote:This is simply terrible. -1.
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Re: dhi'rauta bhu'ja (Cunning Ghost)

Post by Feweh » 03 Mar 2017, 14:53

Bad APP.

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