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Post by Dolth » 27 Mar 2017, 11:26

Byond ID:
Pette.

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Dolthgar 'Fire' Folk.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Zazin-h'chak (Completely-centered Mercy).

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, I am.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
I intend on playing my character, as his name and history match, as a very high-heeled predator that will mostly watches the fight and defend himself only if itself chased. In that case, it will request vengence and two options appears, either chasing the xeno who chased it, if it's T3 or >elite T2. Either abduct discretly (or almost discretly) the said marine, and pull it meters away from combat after disarming. Then, throwing him a melee weapon and engaging a duel. As his name stands, the predator will show mercy if the ooman fought good, and if it shown mercy to the predator, it shall repay back once, as soon as possible, to see the ooman back again as a prey.

Why should we whitelist you?
I do believe I can bring a new or rather rare kind of predator roleplay which could bring intresting situations and that might amuse a good amount of people.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I believe EORG four weeks ago or something.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Nope.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, I do.
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Re: Zazin-h'chak (Completely-centered Mercy)

Post by Nicboone » 27 Mar 2017, 11:31

edit; there was a +1 here, until i saw some petty responces. so i changed to a -1.
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Post by Caryl » 27 Mar 2017, 11:41

The new mercy thing is an interesting new touch to the mercy that Predators have been showing up till' now. +1~
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Post by Aeleto » 27 Mar 2017, 11:50

A good player and interestin' app, +1

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Post by Boltersam » 27 Mar 2017, 11:58

Spelling mistakes throughout the application. Usually I'd say minor, but they're far more present than the normal three or four. Still, outshone by the grammar mistakes and unneeded words.

as for your Predator himself, the personality seems a bit one-trick. In, he's the "cool" predator, where every other predator barring the Elite who is overseeing the hunt is jumpy and agitated. This doesn't change as he's supposed to be portrayed, at least I believe, as an oddity in the group. He then refuses to honourably kill his prey and take the trophy required to become Blooded, a form of "Mercy", and a larger young blood moves forward to tell him that he should be doing what everyone is supposed to be doing, and is jumped and killed mid sentence by the aforementioned prey. Important distinction, Zazin would not have been blamed for the other's death. He would've been shamed for not meeting the requirements to become Blooded on his first hunt.

Your playstyle is very passive and inactive, you intend to watch everything going on until attacked instead of actively hunting. While not necessarily bad, it's not all that good either. What do you do that changes the round? What do you do that's special? You say that you'd bring some new or rare predator play in your Why Should You Be Whitelisted, but I see no evidence of that so far.

Added to this, your recent Predator Report exemplifies that you DO NOT understand how Predators function.

-1.

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Post by Dolth » 27 Mar 2017, 12:10

Boltersam wrote:Spelling mistakes throughout the application. Usually I'd say minor, but they're far more present than the normal three or four. Still, outshone by the grammar mistakes and unneeded words.

as for your Predator himself, the personality seems a bit one-trick. In, he's the "cool" predator, where every other predator barring the Elite who is overseeing the hunt is jumpy and agitated. This doesn't change as he's supposed to be portrayed, at least I believe, as an oddity in the group. He then refuses to honourably kill his prey and take the trophy required to become Blooded, a form of "Mercy", and a larger young blood moves forward to tell him that he should be doing what everyone is supposed to be doing, and is jumped and killed mid sentence by the aforementioned prey. Important distinction, Zazin would not have been blamed for the other's death. He would've been shamed for not meeting the requirements to become Blooded on his first hunt.

Your playstyle is very passive and inactive, you intend to watch everything going on until attacked instead of actively hunting. While not necessarily bad, it's not all that good either. What do you do that changes the round? What do you do that's special? You say that you'd bring some new or rare predator play in your Why Should You Be Whitelisted, but I see no evidence of that so far.

Added to this, your recent Predator Report exemplifies that you DO NOT understand how Predators function.

-1.
That's a very partial judgement regarding my last report. Concerning spelling/grammar mistakes I hereby doubt it's an issue as I do roleplay correctly enough.
Also, that character will, as said before, just observe until one marine/alien engage, and from that abduct to either duel/either hunt just a normal predator.

This will HEAVILY brings roleplay, UNUSUAL gameplay and might amuse most of everyone with that. Now if you do judge spelling errors and a report justify a -1, then go on. Yet I smell a very personal -1 rather than a justified one but meh.
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Re: Zazin-h'chak (Completely-centered Mercy)

Post by Rain7x » 27 Mar 2017, 12:26

I seriously doubt your understanding of the honor code, and I really dont think you are mature enough to handle this role as displayed by your attitude on the previous report. -1
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Re: Zazin-h'chak (Completely-centered Mercy)

Post by Kerek » 27 Mar 2017, 12:46

I tried to post this a minute ago, that didn't work go mobile.

Anyway I agreed with what Boltersam and Rain both said And it agitated me that you replied the way you did to Boltersam.

Deffinately a -1
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Post by forwardslashN » 27 Mar 2017, 12:46

The story is passable, though not particularly noteworthy; has some good parts, some less well developed parts that seem odd. Bolter pointed out a few. However, you posted http://cm-ss13.com/viewtopic.php?f=63&t=11918 before your application, which doesn't really show a good grasp of the lore or predator behavior. Also, asking for people to upvote you in the game is kind of lame. If your application is good, and you are a good player, you will be whitelisted. From what I've seen of you, I don't think you should be whitelisted. -1

Edit: I removed a section that could have been taken out of context. It had nothing to do with my decision, and probably should have been left out. Woops.
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Post by Boltersam » 27 Mar 2017, 12:53

Dolth wrote:That's a very partial judgement regarding my last report. Concerning spelling/grammar mistakes I hereby doubt it's an issue as I do roleplay correctly enough.
Also, that character will, as said before, just observe until one marine/alien engage, and from that abduct to either duel/either hunt just a normal predator.

This will HEAVILY brings roleplay, UNUSUAL gameplay and might amuse most of everyone with that. Now if you do judge spelling errors and a report justify a -1, then go on. Yet I smell a very personal -1 rather than a justified one but meh.
Look, I'll put it this way.

When I review apps, it's always my opinion, I simply back that opinion up with fact. The last part where you made a report that was largely invalid on a Predator tells me that you don't understand Predators. If I were to keep it completely impersonal, I wouldn't make a review. Nothing anyone does is unbiased, all they can do is remove as much bias as they can. I don't believe you fit the mold of a Predator, and that is reflected in my review.

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Re: Zazin-h'chak (Completely-centered Mercy)

Post by Dolth » 27 Mar 2017, 13:05

forwardslashN wrote:The story is passable, though not particularly noteworthy; has some good parts, some less well developed parts that seem odd. Bolter pointed out a few. However, you posted http://cm-ss13.com/viewtopic.php?f=63&t=11918 before your application, which doesn't really show a good grasp of the lore or predator behavior. Also, asking for people to upvote you in the game is kind of lame. If your application is good, and you are a good player, you will be whitelisted. And no, you cannot be a bad blood predator. From what I've seen of you, I don't think you should be whitelisted. -1
Never asked people to upvote. Rather asked friends of mine to CHECK the app. Then I never asked to be a bad blood, you're just throwing random things at me are you?

Now that goes to all of you, if you dare judging me from a denied report I did before then you're obviously wrong. I cannot believe you are voting for the sake of the server's fun and that is what you are currently doing, this app is to amuse players with a slightly different pred-gameplay. The lore wields typo/grammar faults but that doesn't change anything.

And concerning the understanding of the Code of Honor. I am applying what is written. If rules are not applied the way they are written, then I doubt fault is mine.
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Re: Zazin-h'chak (Completely-centered Mercy)

Post by Scrat505 » 27 Mar 2017, 13:21

Personally I don't think the predator report thing is an issue - people should not be punished for trying to report something they honestly thought was wrong, in my opinion.

However your responses to criticism in this thread (and to some extent the report) have been pretty rude and aggressive when said criticisms were well laid out and constructive. This sort of attitude does not help you out here, or anywhere.

Need to stick on a -1.

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Post by Nicboone » 27 Mar 2017, 13:32

need to change to a -1 after reading the replies and the responces to the player report I just read.
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Post by forwardslashN » 27 Mar 2017, 13:40

Dolth wrote:Never asked people to upvote. Rather asked friends of mine to CHECK the app. Then I never asked to be a bad blood, you're just throwing random things at me are you?
Really?
[23:46:37]OOC: (LOCAL) Dolthgar 'Fire' Folk/Pette : Also, tomorrow I'll post my pred app. Back me up <3.
[02:30:31]OOC: Pette/Pette : Xur. Vouch my soon-to-be pred application.
[14:47:24]SAY: Ghost/Pette : I mean I know MauroVega is just a moderator, and besides a bad one. But please. He could at least apply the rules.
That last quote is when I had to tell you to keep your salt levels in check. Happened a few days ago.
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Post by Feweh » 27 Mar 2017, 13:47

Denied.

This has been disapointing behavior from you recently dolth.

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