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Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by Steelpoint » 04 Apr 2017, 11:40

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Marine Name: Alan Bentway

Name of the character you want whitelisted: Kwei Ikthya-de

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? I am, the Code of Honor is structured in a way that someone with a good understanding of the Predators, but who did not read this servers Code of Honor, would generally do be able to avoid violating it. I also tend to read the rules on a semi-regular basis, more so I can be familiar with the rules for the rare times I see Predators in game.

Character background: To keep it brief (and I'm really bad with stories)
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How do you intend to play your predator? While I am not fully familiar with the game play mechanics of a Predator (more so since I only see Predators use wirst blades, plasma casters and traps), I would attempt to play the role as a more conservative hunter. In lore I hold myself as a decently experienced hunter, but one who has never truly fought a dangerous foe like the Xenomorphs, or a platoon of crack Human soldiers. I would be wary of rushing in headlong, and would typically scope out the area and carefully find a target worth my time. Though my interest in Humans would see me oft wanting to observe worthy Humans in action, if only to see if they pervail, not to kill them after the fact.

I fully intend to hunt the side I find to be winning the conflict, as I would find it dishonorable to kill prey that are losing the war, if I find the conflict to be stagnating I would focus more on hunting worthy prey that might tip the scales of the conflict. Furthermore I would attempt to engage in psychological warfare akin to the movies. Probing defences, hiding in barely lit tiles and dragging corpses away moments before they are recovered (only a few tiles away, not to throw it in the corner of the map). While I am here to hunt, I am not here to slaughter, and when a prey has been pushed to the limit, and is on edge, you get to see if they are truly worthy.

I hold worthy prey in high regard, if I successfully hunt a prey that put up a valiant and worthy fight, I would withdrawn with the body and I would attempt to honour it, likely by kneeling in respect, and keeping one minor item from the person if applicable as a item to remember the fight by.

However I am not a technophobe, I respect employing and only using melee weapon in honourable combat, but I will not hesitate to use my more advance weapons (assuming I even have any, considering if my status is Young Blood or Blooded) to fend off prey that are interfering with the Hunt, or who are fighting in a way that is dishonourable, but my intention is not to kill but to ward off, I would only kill someone with my more advance weapons if I am left with no choice, even then I would perfer to use my melee weapons at the very least.

Why should we whitelist you? While I may be somewhat brash in game, more so when I play a front line role, I've nonetheless hope I've show that I am a calm and collected player who can hold myself to a higher standard of role play when optimal. I also consider myself to be above average in general competence, and I believe I at least do well in staying alive, even as a Human.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason? I have not been banned from CM in the last month.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I am not banned from any other servers, SS13 or otherwise.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? I would not expect otherwise.
This is war, survival is your responsibility.

Alan Bentway: Marine
Kwei Ikthya-de: Predator

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Re: Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by shyshadow » 05 Apr 2017, 19:41

I've looked at your backstory, and well I kinda feel it's out of order like things don't add up "Arid" world. Yet only a few moments later you put "engaged in a game of cat and mouse in the jungle..." Which I might add, is not an arid type of environment or biome and that's really off putting. Another thing I might add which is difficult to understand, exactly why would there be a man with a gun ragged clothes on a arid planet unless of course it's intended to be Terraformed by Weyland-Yutani which would've been an excellent piece of roleplay to really capture this is infact the "Alien" universe. There could've been many things done right, but there were too many things done wrong.
You put effort, that's good and commendable but if you can't convey what your story is meant to entail how come can one except you to stay formidable while acting out the role of a Yautja? I have no real reason to believe you can't do it, other then what you've shown on this application and while the story is okay there's a lot of random and unexplained things such as the random ship. The human could've been had a more in-depth role instead of being a throw away character which would've brought more reason for your character to respect humans.
I'm bantering on, I think you should re-apply and learn from instances where things could've been more worked and better explained. I saw how "I'm not the best at writing stories" that's fine, but it should be consistent and conclusive there should be a reason why something is there and if not it should at least be given a more useful role.

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Re: Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by Steelpoint » 05 Apr 2017, 21:28

I can understand the dislike towards my story, I've always struggled to write down a clear and defined story, its just not a talent I possess well.

However, I believe I'm far better in 'spur of the moment' scenarios. Being part of a larger story where I'm just one cog in a larger tale makes it far easier for me to play and move along. To be fair a Predator is a very large cog in the tale, but I personally feel I'm far more adapt at role playing and conveying myself during in game scenarios than I am in trying to write a story.

The reason I've never tried to apply for the Predator whitelist for a long time now was the fact that I would have to write a long story/background story.
This is war, survival is your responsibility.

Alan Bentway: Marine
Kwei Ikthya-de: Predator

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Re: Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by Feweh » 05 Apr 2017, 22:30

Heres the problem with your activity and you should of seen the other Predator APP that was just denied for similar reasons.

This is your activity.

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Basically an entire year gone and 1 week return with a big whitelist application.

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Re: Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by shyshadow » 05 Apr 2017, 22:38

Feweh's Post is probably the most entertaining thing I've seen all day.
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Re: Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by Steelpoint » 05 Apr 2017, 23:00

I tend to take long breaks at a time, I jump from one SS13 server to another. I was on /tg/ for that intervening period.

Despite the time my in game experience seems to not have waned significantly, aside from some new changes.

I decided to give a whitelist a shot, but I was not pinning huge hopes on it.
This is war, survival is your responsibility.

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Kwei Ikthya-de: Predator

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Re: Kwei Ikthya-de (Sly Umbra)

Post by Feweh » 07 Apr 2017, 19:15

Denied, apply once youve been back for awhile.

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