N'ay Car'r Qui'ga - Predator Whitelist

[Mister Jeether]

Byond ID: Jeether

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Mark 'Blitz' Sturmovik

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): N'ay Car'r Qui'ga

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?

Yes,i've read it several times.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):

Young Life

N'ay Car'r Qui'ga was borned in the Yautja Prime in a ''High'' family in the society,His father was an Elite hunter,respected in the clan,he once told N'ay about his hunting stories about the Serpents and Oomans,while Car'r listened with attention.At his 56 years,his father started to teach him melee skills and how to master even the most difficult blades of the clan,N'ay started to use his father as inspiration to become a respectable foe of the clan,and to apprimorate his hunting skills at the best.

N'ay had three dreams to accomplish :
Impress his father.
Impress his clan and Elders.
Apprimorate his hunting skills as much as he could.

Teenage Life

At his 452 years,N'ay's father seen that Car'r was trying his best to upgrade his close-quarters skills,and that he was more experienced then other youngbloods in the clan,he decided to test N'ay's combat skills.
When N'ay's father told him about the youngblood tournament,a tournament that would test the youngblood's physicall strenght and mainly,hunting strategies,the reward would be the Elder's viciously sharpened sword.The one that wins the tournament would receive the respect of the whole clan,the elder would personally give the blade to the victorious hunter.
Immediately,N'ay accepted to join.
N'ay trained,trained really hard,ignoring everything else around him,forgetting to eat and even sleep,his determination to impress the clan and make his father proud turned him in one of the most skilled youngbloods in the society.
The tournament day finally arrived,N'ay had sharpened his skills and tactics of hunt as much as he could,the loud alarm sounds,the hunt begins.
The youngbloods along with N'ay are placed in the battlegrounds,while a yautja ship in the sky watched everything,N'ay looks around,as he sees a serpent crawling through the jungle,ready to pounce,the creature rapidly jumps at N'ay roaring,he dodges the pounce and counter attack the serpent with a vicious attack,cutting the prey's tail off,the serpent screeches with anger and agressively attacks,he manages to block the attack,while stabbing the serpent in the chest,it decays,heavily injured,giving a last hissing when it finally dies.
N'ay,with a decisive motion,rips the serpent's skull out,placing it in his hunting pouch.A loud alarm sounds,signalling the release of stronger serpents,N'ay seemed happy about it,while heading to the ''large hunting area''.He see several other youngbloods fighting a praetorian,however dropping fast,before N'ay could arrive to help his fellow brothers,most of them are heavily injured,unable to fight.
N'ay stares the serpent,while it hisses,preparing to charge towards him,it charges and N'ay dodges with ease,pouncing in the serpent's back,he is violently impaled by the praetorian's sharp tail,before the serpent could finish him off,he stabs the serpent's head with his wrist blades,heavily injuring it,his blade trespassing the prey's thick exoskeleton, while his hand burns with the bubbling blood.
The serpent falls in the ground,fading,but not dead.N'ay manages to get up,ignoring his wounds and violently ripping the serpent's skull,N'ar gives a victory roar,holding his prey's head in his hand,showing it,the elder looked at him,with a unusual,surprised face,while N'ay's father looks at him with a pretty average face,soon,the elder gave him the viciously sharp and reliable Clan Sword.After patching his wounds,N'ay asked his father if he was proud of him,he shaked his head,saying that he already expected him to be the winner.

Adult Life

At 976 years old,N'ay's father dies in a battle with a serpent queen in one of his hunts,having a honorable death by self-destructing himself,taking the serpent queen and it's hive along with it.N'ay was now on his own hunting world,in order to make himself worthy of being his father's sucessor,he passes his whole time hunting,only eating what he hunts,and only drinking what he scavenges,the elder of his clan sends him to a hunt in a planet,in order to hunt serpents.The planet was called by the Oomans LV-624. N'ay sets his ship to get in orbit with the planet,in a moment,N'ay prepares to drop in the planet,he wonders what this hunt reserves for him...


How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

I intend to use the plasma caster in some situations,such as:

-Seperating large groups of marines
-Destroying walls
-Scare off weak prey that shows no honor (Marines and aliens that are like : ''Duel me pls'')
-Harassing and making the prey run away.
I Will use the plasma caster in hunts,in very specific situations (The whole hive is hunting me down is an example)

My predator will ONLY eat what he hunts,making the RP more interesting.

He will tend to be a more aggressive type of hunter,however,he will stay cloaked most of the time,he will only decloak to RP and engage prey (i'm not the kind of pred who just likes to kill everything he sees,i just like a more aggressive gameplay)

I will try to use the clan sword the most,because,of course,my pred background.

If a human defeats me in an honorable duel,i will give him my predator's most valuable item,the clan sword (background),because this ooman proved his value for me, so will consider him as a equal.


Why should we whitelist you?

I'm aware that i haven't been a really good player lastly,but i wish to change this,but i believe i can Roleplay as pred without any major issues and make the round enjoyable for both marines and aliens,so on to everyone.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Yes, Fired at marines as hostile survivor,even i warning them to stand back and to stop following me and another colonist. By Karmac.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

Paradise : Throwed a facehugger toy at a plasma man to ''purposely'' rip his mask off.

PS: I only throwed the toy at him because he was following me while throwing the toy at me,it's a old ban,however.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

I'm FULLY aware of this and i heavily agree with it.

[Mister Jeether]

I'm TRULY sorry for not putting my Yautja nickname in the title of the application,i really am.Please,look at the title and imagine :

N'ay Car'r Qui'ga (Young Genocider)-Predator Whitelist

I'd like to keep the admins aware,i know i don't have a cool note history,but i'm working in changes.

I believe i can be a better player for the comunity and even myself,i will take more time to read and re-read the server rules,also work on studying more frequently the Predator Code of Honor,i do not wish to people look at my name and think ''that guy is real shitler'',oh...well,sorry if i got too much out of the situation,i hope you enjoyed the whitelist.

:^)

[Casany]

I dunno, you have quite the reputation of just buckshotting other predators in the face with no RP and frequently being a low RP player. How is it you have changed/hope to change?

[Boltersam]

Pending review, expect it by Monday.

[Mister Jeether]

I dunno, you have quite the reputation of just buckshotting other predators in the face with no RP and frequently being a low RP player. How is it you have changed/hope to change?

When i started playing CM,i always tried to RP with preds,duelling with them,talking and all that,but i stopped since always in the end,i get killed by the predator or even the xenos.

But i used a different character's,so you can't really recognise me,but i DID liked RPying with preds,but i simply stopped.

As much as i don't play to win and to have Fun,it eventually gets boring,and some preds don't even try to RP with me.

Me:''Show yourself,motherfucker!'' *while holding a machete*
Pred: *decloaks behind me and automatically attacks me*

[Imperator_Titan]

I dunno, you have quite the reputation of just buckshotting other predators in the face with no RP and frequently being a low RP player. How is it you have changed/hope to change?

Literally this, you have quite the reputation for killing predators by just killing them upon sight.

Onto the backstory, multiple spelling mistakes makes it really hard to read. Please skip a space between each comma or else my eyes will claw themselves out. I really think that you should work on improving your English skills before attempting to become a predator. Youngbloods would never be pitted against a praetorian either and the honour code bounds them to attacking it in a one-on-one so there wouldn't be help either. Your predator would become a bad blood if he did decide to engage it after it managed to wipe out the others.

https://gyazo.com/f16373dbb38b3af643fa90c15a7ea357

Playstyle is nothing special, really generic. Predators wouldn't eat their trophies, at all.

I'd say that you wait it out, improve your English skills and actually read the lore before attempting a predator application.
-1

[Casany]

Literally this, you have quite the reputation for killing predators by just killing them upon sight.

Onto the backstory, multiple spelling mistakes makes it really hard to read. Please skip a space between each comma or else my eyes will claw themselves out. I really think that you should work on improving your English skills before attempting to become a predator. Youngbloods would never be pitted against a praetorian either and the honour code bounds them to attacking it in a one-on-one so there wouldn't be help either. Your predator would become a bad blood if he did decide to engage it after it managed to wipe out the others.

https://gyazo.com/f16373dbb38b3af643fa90c15a7ea357

Playstyle is nothing special, really generic. Predators wouldn't eat their trophies, at all.

I'd say that you wait it out, improve your English skills and actually read the lore before attempting a predator application.
-1

This exactly. After reading through the story, and playstyle, I'm going to have to say -1

And even in your signature you brag about C4ing a pred after SADARing it

[Mister Jeether]

Literally this, you have quite the reputation for killing predators by just killing them upon sight.

Onto the backstory, multiple spelling mistakes makes it really hard to read. Please skip a space between each comma or else my eyes will claw themselves out. I really think that you should work on improving your English skills before attempting to become a predator. Youngbloods would never be pitted against a praetorian either and the honour code bounds them to attacking it in a one-on-one so there wouldn't be help either. Your predator would become a bad blood if he did decide to engage it after it managed to wipe out the others.

https://gyazo.com/f16373dbb38b3af643fa90c15a7ea357

Playstyle is nothing special, really generic. Predators wouldn't eat their trophies, at all.

I'd say that you wait it out, improve your English skills and actually read the lore before attempting a predator application.
-1

Thank you for the opinion,i will get to work on that.

About the playstyle,predators could simply tore the head of a Marine and butch him.And that's what i meant when i writted the playstyle.

[Mister Jeether]

This exactly. After reading through the story, and playstyle, I'm going to have to say -1

And even in your signature you brag about C4ing a pred after SADARing it

When you are a predator,you are required to follow the code of honor,a marine doesn't.

You see the difference? you don't really need to be the biggest RPer alive,and judging someone through their actions as a marine is just a first-plain vision of the player,i do understand your point,however.

[Imperator_Titan]

When you are a predator,you are required to follow the code of honor,a marine doesn't.

You see the difference? you don't really need to be the biggest RPer alive,and judging someone through their actions as a marine is just a first-plain vision of the player,i do understand your point,however.

Predator is a very high RP role so yes, you do need to be a high RPer. Judging people because of their actions as a marine just tells you what kind of person they are. Powergaming predators aren't really welcome. The robust ones are valued much less than the high RP ones.

[Casany]

When you are a predator,you are required to follow the code of honor,a marine doesn't.

You see the difference? you don't really need to be the biggest RPer alive,and judging someone through their actions as a marine is just a first-plain vision of the player,i do understand your point,however.

Actually, one of the MAJOR things you're judged by is your marine RP in game. If you don't RP or are bad at it as a marine then you most likely won't be good in predator

[Mister Jeether]

Predator is a very high RP role so yes, you do need to be a high RPer. Judging people because of their actions as a marine just tells you what kind of person they are. Powergaming predators aren't really welcome. The robust ones are valued much less than the high RP ones.

You DO need high RP to be a predator,but not masterise it,when i talked about the ''marines don't need to follow a code of honor'' thingy,that means a pred player acts majorly different of a wild marine player,it depends on the role and mainly,How far you can go with your RP.

I DO know how to RP (learned mostly from playing CL),but it's hard to RP as marine in unsafe locations where you can find hugger combat at any moment,it's a medium risk,medium reward RPing in jungles,the best thing you will be able to do with a pred in RPing is just talk with him,maybe duel him or even become his slave (it's still funny however),i believe i fill the standards of RPing as pred,because even if there's a xeno nearby,he will think better before pouncing or attacking me,i also plan in talking and scaring marines WHILE cloaked,so being a predator gives you alot of options of Roleplay.

For that reason,i enjoy MUCH more RPing as alien with preds,because i know a SADAR won't just appear out of nowhere and kill me.

[forwardslashN]

The last time I saw you as CL, you caused a huge firefight on the bridge and had Feweh regretting his life choices. Just based of what I've seen of you in the game, I have to go with a -1.

[Mister Jeether]

The last time I saw you as CL, you caused a huge firefight on the bridge and had Feweh regretting his life choices. Just based of what I've seen of you in the game, I have to go with a -1.

In that round,i received the fax saying to take over the Sulaco using the PMCs.
i though Feweh wanted to actually start a PMC Vs. Marine conflict,the bridge was full of marines and MPs,even if i tried to peacefully take over,a gunfight would eventually break between both sides,because the marines outside would eventually break their way in the bridge.

If he specifically sayed to attempt a peacefull take over,he could have just stated it in the fax.


Honestly,that was just one round as CL,in a recent round,i tried to bribe the CE to build a ''cage'' for the aliens,putting a infected marines inside of it (i would have ahelped and asked in LOOC if the marine actually wanted to do it,or it would be griefing).

But that of course didn't work,because 99% of the CL plans to capture aliens end in everyone dying.

[shyshadow]

While I do in fact believe there is dedication, the overall quality of this application falls too short to be considered acceptable. While the story was umm, meh not really amazing, and the way it was typed out was extremely I mean extremely annoying. This is a story not a list, the way it was made makes me want to question the creativity and credibility of the writer as well as their overall competence. Which by own understanding falls below the bridge, you HAVE to work on adding a space between your commas, as well as capitalizing you I's. The mere sight of these little things makes me want to just cringe, I get not everyone is great at English but the point is you're suppose to be an admiral player to the community. The mere accomplishment of being accepted by the community to receive the responsibility of being tasked with adding to role-play through the antagonist role of a Predator is a big task. One that should be executed nearly perfect, having to follow the honor code as well as making the experience more fun for everyone.

Point is, read up on the Xenopedia of Yautja. Practice on English, and remake your application, I don't believe this will be accepted and I'm being bold but regardless good luck. -1 On my end.

[Boltersam]

Honestly, I read over the app on the few times, and some effort is there, but I'm not seeing anything that makes your Predator really....Special. What does he actually do? All you've outlined in the app is that you'll do stuff that Predators already do, generally. Especially the part about only eating your kills, which would "Improve RP greatly". How? How do eating habits increase roleplay in any way shape or form? Especially one that MANY Predators already do. Nobody will particularly care about how picky you are about your food.

As for the backstory itself, we all know I'm a stickler for lore. Your Youngblood, during teenage life, is overequipped, and he would not have survived that encounter with the Praetorian in the first place. His shitty, non acidproof wristblades would've melted while miraculously killing the first Xeno without any large injury besides some acid on your hands. And then, he supposedly survives being impaled by a Praetorian, which is a mortal wound for anyone. Nobody just walks off having a giant sharp object being driven through your chest, damaging most of your organs and likely pulverising a few.

Honestly, you don't seem like you particularly have any real good addition in terms of roleplay, and from the responses of everyone else, it seems like you don't have all that good of a history either. The app isn't up to standard, and apparently neither is the player. -1.

[Feweh]

Denying this.

The last time I gave you antag related objectives as a CL you made me seriously smash my head into the keyboard.
It was badly role-played and I feel like you did something pretty stupid.

You also had/have numerous job-bans in the last couple of months.