The Work of Art!

[SagaSword]

So I've been bored lately and I have decided to write short poems about CM. Just post the topic you want me to write about and I'll hit you up with it in my spare time.
This should be self explanatory. Oh, and no Roses are red, Violets are blue bullshit, I mean REAL poems. It could help me increase my grammar skills a lil' bit. Cheers!

[Kerek]

How about one with Ice Colony dying in the snow?

[shyshadow]

How about the Commander being overtaken by his marines, in a mutiny where he decided that field executing a field medic was a good idea.

[SagaSword]

How about one with Ice Colony dying in the snow?

When the days are over in the deep snow,
I feel the tears in eyes blow,
The screams of thy wicked begin to rise,
In the fields of white darkness they begin to shine,
Eyes filled with death and destruction,
Yet I still stand with determination,
My hopes of ones that those i once loved,
To find them one day so safe and sound,
And when one remember those who sacrificed,
My glory will give them the great advice,
Lead the charge to Honor those who've died,
Or die in glory to meet them in the greater divine.

How about the Commander being overtaken by his marines, in a mutiny where he decided that field executing a field medic was a good idea.

Today, I've come to tell you the truth,
About one day when I still had my tooth,
Competence, It was my middle name,
Until marines decided it's just so lame,
A doctor of witches oh so I call him,
Left my people to die when they called him,
Medic! I hear their screams in the fields,
But, who was there to calm their feels?
Execution, for those whom don't have hearts,
You're a disgrace and so much blunts,
To hell with you, even if I die today,
My marines will remember me one day...

I hope you liked them

[Kerek]

I like it, I am not a poetry man (don't smart ass me I like music but hush) Pretty good and it kinda reminded me of a Japanese Death Poem I like a lot.

[Tysonix]

That moment when you turn a corner and find an Ancient Queen, and there are no humans, or xenos around.

[SagaSword]

I like it, I am not a poetry man (don't smart ass me I like music but hush) Pretty good and it kinda reminded me of a Japanese Death Poem I like a lot.

Lol, I'll pass on this one :P

That moment when you turn a corner and find an Ancient Queen, and there are no humans, or xenos around.

Our days in life are numbered right,
The seconds in thy clock are ticking bright,
Standing alone, your time has come,
To meet your doom or Glory to sum,
The big, bad, night has come upon me,
No friends to help, just my praying hum,
No enemies to fight, thy boss has appeared,
But I won't stand still as I still have my beard,
Tonight, we dine in hell you and thy,
But before we do it I gotta say good bye.

*cough* Beard *cough* *cough*

[James5734]

Howabout a Haiku over a CO about to commit suicide for failing his men

[SagaSword]

Howabout a Haiku over a CO about to commit suicide for failing his men

Blood, Dishonor, It's all my fault,
Death, Destruction, so much gore,
I feel thy sins in me contort,
Marines with shame say "thou's a tore",
Oh, No more! To be going in thou art no more!
Oh, No more! To be doubted by your friends and foes!
This art shall end here now,
Where thy beginnings of thy tears vow,
No such living's call'd livin' now,
With Dishonor so big I could not bow,
How life is it with Honor lost?
Only with torment and past distorts...

Whew, writing this was a pain. *You feel your Poetic level evolving!* *Congratulations, Your Poetic level has evolved into Supa Hot Fia*

[SpaceFarer]

That last one is very good, but not a haiku. How about a poem of a survivor?

[SagaSword]

That last one is very good, but not a haiku. How about a poem of a survivor?

First off, Fak haiku. I'm a free style poet! Secondly, would you like a certain situation the survivor got in or do I go wild with my imagination?

[James5734]

First off, Fak haiku. I'm a free style poet! Secondly, would you like a certain situation the survivor got in or do I go wild with my imagination?

I'm half Japanese, I take offense to this

[SpaceFarer]

First off, Fak haiku. I'm a free style poet! Secondly, would you like a certain situation the survivor got in or do I go wild with my imagination?

I want to see what your imagination can produce.

[SagaSword]

I'm half Japanese, I take offense to this

Me too man, me too. I watched too many Japanese Hentai ;-;

I want to see what your imagination can produce.

Expect the greatest! The core of this poem is about the last survivor of the outbreak who is also the last survivor of the almayer station alien boarding..He's defending the station's self destruct system with 2 sentries and a gun he took from a dead marine next to him!


The Haulers of death are at the doors,
Fighting them all two Guardians of Wars,
But will they withstand some dogs of Satan,
Too powerful to bear, Too strong to give in,
My back is next to a beeping sound,
It's core's shouting "Death hast awoken from it's deepened bound",
Flashbacks from the past come past my eye,
When a wise once said "Every man living will one day die,
but he is the one to choose how it must goes",
I choose, to not let those sacrificed souls,
Go to waste, while I stand imploring for some glory to store,
Ten, Nine, Eight, I hear it counting,
Seven, Six, Five, my heart's still pounding,
Four, Three, Two, There's nothing more to say,
One, Our sacrifices I know they have to stay.

If there's something that you don't like about this poem tell me, I feel this poem has some mistakes =/

[Tysonix]

Lol, I'll pass on this one :P



Our days in life are numbered right,
The seconds in thy clock are ticking bright,
Standing alone, your time has come,
To meet your doom or Glory to sum,
The big, bad, night has come upon me,
No friends to help, just my praying hum,
No enemies to fight, thy boss has appeared,
But I won't stand still as I still have my beard,
Tonight, we dine in hell you and thy,
But before we do it I gotta say good bye.

*cough* Beard *cough* *cough*

Tis a shame it took till now for me to see this but -cries-.....beautiful.

[SagaSword]

Tis a shame it took till now for me to see this but -cries-.....beautiful.

It's good to see people like your art