Jehdin Koa'zit [One With Chaos]

[gameoverman]

Byond ID:
BeThaBubble

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Officer: Jeramiah Judge

SL: Skjor Redbeard Ullr

Medic: Hadrien Hades Novac

PVC: Saheed al ashal


Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Jehdin Koa'zit

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?:
I am very familiar with the Code of Honor, I adore and respect it greatly.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Jehdin is a fresh and unwavering jungle hunter. His clan is small but tight, spending years passing traditional knowledge of hunting methods focusing on traps and ranged weaponry. Strangely enough these techniques usually deploy some deal of co-operation between the kin. Whilst the individual Yautja would hunt their own prey, working together they would split them apart and begin the hunt.

An ublooded Jehdin was initiated as a young blood three years ago, his first hunt on a foreign jungle planet, other unblooded brethren had joined this hunt, hoping to impress the various elders who had gathered to recruit fresh blood. He sized up his brethren and knew he would surpass them. His eyes shifted as he looked upon the solem figures of the Elders, looming over them. Non of these clans where of great note however they where honorable and little else mattered. -Their prey unknown the group split up and began searching. It was Jehdin who had discovered great prey, deep in the jungle. Blue Bi-pedal mammalian warriors with a long ponytail had entrenched themselves within a great tree. These creatures provided an honorable hunt for the band of unblooded. After days of tracking down the other Yautja, he convinced them to cease tracking the petty prey they had fund and achieve ultimate glory. Under his guidance, the Yautja began their assault. Using ranged weaponry they destroyed the small fortifications around the tree, scattering the enemy into the jungle from there the warriors began their hunts alone.

By night fall, all but two of the Unblooded where dead, the Skulls of their opponents where presented to their elder as proof of worth, while the bones of the beasts, rode by the blue xeno remained his. Adorned on his face plate for all to see. His tactics had attracted the attention of a particular clan, the elder impressed by his will to panic and separate the prey granted his name: Jehdin Koa'Zit.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
I will play Jehdin mostly silent, even when among brothers. He believes actions speak much louder. Once on planet he will usually establish a base to operate from- most likely in the jungle which he feels is 'home turf', he will then place traps around the base and further into the jungle to secure his location. Once he deems his base safe he will begin observing the planets combatants for the best of the best. Using traps and ranged weaponry, wreak havoc on the enemy lines and entrenchments, aiming not to kill but disperse his prey. luring/ heading them towards his traps and/ or other predators. He will segregate his chosen prey and then move in for the kill.
;; If other predators are in play Jehdin will likely attempt to work with to maximize the glory achieved in the hunt. While he believes each individual Youtja should hunt their own prey, traditions embedded within him still impact his hunting style.

-Jehdin Has great respect for is kin and will attempt to co-ordinate the hunt with them
-Jehdin gets irritated with entrenched opponents and will often attempt to dislodge them
-Jehdin will always respect a challenge from an opponent


Why should we whitelist you?
I have a deep love for the predator race and their code of honor, i also have a lot of respect for your server and enjoy playing both aliens and marines. I hope that by being whitelisted I can bring some of my passion for both CM and the predator race to the game, making it more enjoyable for everyone.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I do not believe it was this month, however i was banned for three hours for throwing a knife at the doctor.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I am not.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Not only do I understand, I encourage it.


Thank you for your time.

[Feweh]

Denied.

Joined April 10th, Posted application May10th and only has 1post the entire time.

Why do you think we have a 30day waiting period after registering? So you can register and say nothing on the forums, come on people.

[jusa297]

Even if it was denied, i must say the history was preety cool. The whole hunting toghter stuff. If it was aproved i was actually going to ask if the pred i was going to make could be from your tribe. See you in 3 months.

[NoahKirchner]

Even if it was denied, i must say the history was preety cool. The whole hunting toghter stuff. If it was aproved i was actually going to ask if the pred i was going to make could be from your tribe. See you in 3 months.

Er, the app was a bit sub-par if I may interject. Your goal of "using ranged weaponry to defenses to scatter the team" is essentially winning the game for one side.

[gameoverman]

Denied.

Joined April 10th, Posted application May10th and only has 1post the entire time.

Why do you think we have a 30day waiting period after registering? So you can register and say nothing on the forums, come on people.

This is my third account, it keeps getting deleted. When there is worth something commenting on The forums I will do so.

In addition, I've been playing on the CM server for up to and over a year. Basing your approval/denial on participation in your forums it is no wonder you have so few people willing to apply.


Also also: how bout some advice to improve my application instead of just having a QQ about my posts

[gameoverman]

Even if it was denied, i must say the history was preety cool. The whole hunting toghter stuff. If it was aproved i was actually going to ask if the pred i was going to make could be from your tribe. See you in 3 months.

Thank you my man, I was hoping to round up a few people for it. See you then.

[gameoverman]

Er, the app was a bit sub-par if I may interject. Your goal of "using ranged weaponry to defenses to scatter the team" is essentially winning the game for one side.

Not if its indiscriminate. Working with my title the whole aim of Jehdin is to seed chaos in the ranks of all combatants. Disrupting that impenetrable marine firing line, dislodging those pesky boilers guarded by praetorians.

How bout some constructive feedback to help me make it better instead of Going neck beard on me

[NoahKirchner]

Not if its indiscriminate. Working with my title the whole aim of Jehdin is to seed chaos in the ranks of all combatants. Disrupting that impenetrable marine firing line, dislodging those pesky boilers guarded by praetorians.

How bout some constructive feedback to help me make it better instead of Going neck beard on me

Well there was criticism in that, breaking defenses is a very *very* big change to the round, and regardless of the intent a lot of times it'll still decide the game for one team, but I digress.

I'd recommend making a predator with a less prominent role in the round, but keeping the traps and confusion. Maybe keep the joint trophy thing too. As far as the background goes, just remember to spellcheck (saw a few grammar and spelling errors, nothing major but it always helps), and try to add a bit more to your predator's character. Their beliefs, their strengths and weaknesses as far as a character goes, and maybe some more detail inbetween the events of the hunt besides the results. Good luck next time y'try out.

((Oh and sorry to the guy I quoted, wasn't thinking and thought you were the same guy))

[Feweh]

This is my third account, it keeps getting deleted. When there is worth something commenting on The forums I will do so.

In addition, I've been playing on the CM server for up to and over a year. Basing your approval/denial on participation in your forums it is no wonder you have so few people willing to apply.


Also also: how bout some advice to improve my application instead of just having a QQ about my posts

Advice: Don't turn into a little bitch when you get denied something.