Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

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Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by Gokurottt » 22 May 2017, 02:41

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Marine Name: Saline 'Wyvern' Jenson.

Name of the character you want whitelisted: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?: Yes.

Character background: He stared down at the jungle below him. A Mass of vines, trees, and everything else you'd find in a typical jungle. Today, he was to prove himself. He was to prove his worth in his FIRST Hunt.

He dreamed of this moment, from when he was but a child. The rush of adrenaline, the excitement of the hunt flowing through his veins, that's what he wanted. In his eyes, The Hunt was truly the only way of life, anyone who thought otherwise was a fool.

He was sent today to become blooded, like so many before him. He was set with a task to kill a serpant, A R'ka....This was going to be exciting, Setg'in had always been waiting for this moment.
Setg'in was never one for over-preparing, and as such, he prepared two items for this hunt, and he chose them in the (Personally) best way he possibly could. He chose a smart disc, so he could slice open the R'ka's stomach, and maybe get a few good hits in with his wrist blades because of said disc. The second item, being his personal favorite, was the Combi Stick. He was going to use this to hit the R'ka's stomach once more, maybe if he lost his disc, giving him a larger advantage over the beast, He did not need anything else.

Now, back to the hunt at hand.
Set'gin looked down below, The two unblooded brothers of his standing side by side. The temple was here, and some of them may not come back. They all jumped down, heading into different directions. The serpants..No, the R'ka were inside. it was today he got a taste of what their dangerous thwei was like, first hand. And he was going to LOVE IT.
The large door opened, revealing the crumbling temple within. Setg'in felt the excitement of the hunt rush through him, he was going to enjoy crushing the R'ka like the zabin that were around this temple.

Within the first twenty or so minutes of walking around the expansive temple, screeches were heared..The Serpants had awoken, and they were ANGRY!
They mostly went after the two brothers in front of Setg'in, as they were CLEARLY the easiest targets for the R'ka. But Setg'in didn't really have to wait long, as a large, midnight black R'ka landed in front of him, screaming in rage. Setg'in's first thought was to move back from the force of the screech, but he thought better of it, he wanted to do this. Setg'in slammed his wrist blade into the creature's jaw, lifting it into the air. It's reaction was..Intresting to Setg'in, it continued to try to stop him. It screeched, spraying it's thwei towards him, good job he was keeping it out of reach. He slammed his large metal claw into the Serpant's neck, removing it's skull, his first trophy. One of many trophies he'd have to collect.

The battle continued for, what seemed like hours..And before long, the wave was gone. Setg'in had gained five trophies out of this, his brothers getting a small bit more..However, the youngest. He had fallen to the Serpant's acid. He will be remebered, and never forgotten.

Setg'in and his brother continued along the temple halls, for what seemed like hours. It's constant shifting irritating Setg'in, He saw it more of an annoyance than a tactical advantage. He sighed, and continued along the halls.

Sure enough, the two encountered the grave of the fallen Yautja. He, and his brother, collected the powerfull weapon..The weapon of which was named sivk'va-tai, A small shoulder mounted cannon, that fired balls of destructive matter at it's opponents, truly a powerfull weapon.

The two hunters suddenly heared a large screeching sound, The R'ka were back for round two.

Almost immediatly, Setg'in aimed his sivk'va-tai at the R'ka, firing the bots of energy at them. He had destroyed ALOT within a few moments. Of 'course he let a few slip by to collect trophies, but he still wiped alot out none the less. And as such, the R'ka were..Vanquished. They TRULY were an honorable foe.

Setg'in and his now blooded brother continued to the temple exit, at last, Setg'in was a TRUE WARRIOR! Setg'in and his brother roared in victory, they were at last, BLOODED!



How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?: I will continuously scout the battlefield for any weakpoints, and see if I can find any worthy trophies. I will mainly use stealth when scouting, Obviously, and I will also see if I can balance out their sides a bit, if it's too large.

Why should we whitelist you?: Because I have wanted to be a pred for a while, and yes, whilst I may not be the most...Stable of people, I do feel I will make the games I do get to play pred more fun and enjoyable!

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?: No.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?: This account WAS banned, but as an individual, I did not commit this act. This account was banned for self antagging on Citadel Station 13. As I said, however, I did not do this myself, as this is a shared account. (No the other person cannot access CM, I've made sure of that.)

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?: Yes.


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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by SagaSword » 22 May 2017, 05:59

Alright, Let me mention that you only have 3 posts overall on the forums. PLUS, I've never interacted with your Character or seen it ingame.
Secondly, How come an unbloodied yautja carry a smart disc and a combistick? Those are for the yautjas who became blooded and are given as a gift so that they could continue to hunt stronger serpents in the future. I'd also like to comment on the places of hunt. Sure, the temple IS a place to hunt serpents but it's tournament based and is done on the yautja's main planet, IF you've seen the first AVP movie they fought the excavators in the palace because they were protecting it's artifacts, that was their PRIMARY Objective, then the BLOODIED part. I suggest you do more research body. Oh, and I'll ignore some of your spelling and grammar mistakes, they are small but everyone has grammar mistakes sometimes.

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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by jusa297 » 22 May 2017, 10:11

I'm usually not the one to care that much of history and i hate the prejudice on number of posts, but i rather want good gameplay, and the way you intend to play yours is bland at best. What you said is "I'll do what every other pred does". I wish that next time you'll try to distinguish yourslef from others in gameplay. Best of lucks.

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Re: Setg'in Tarei'hsan (Deadly Scorpion)

Post by Feweh » 23 May 2017, 15:37

Denied.

Terrible forum activity and no idea who you are.

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