Kier'Ak'Vehya Pred App

[Withoutarms1]

Byond ID: Withoutarms1

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Ryder Davis

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Kier'Ak'Vehya

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes I have read the Code Of Honor.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): Kier'Ak'Vehya came from a long family line of professional killers. His father had died shortly after Kier'Ak'Vehya was born, and he seeks revenge on the men who killed his father. Now he is here... a killer, fighting on the front lines seeking revenge.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I intend to attack only higher ranking players, such as SL and above. However I would attack a low ranking player if they shot first. For the Aliens, I would only attack Tier 2 and above, unless a tier one was attempting to kill me.

Why should we whitelist you? I think you should whitelist me, because I have never been banned from anything on this server, or banned in general. I understand the rules and the Predator Code Of Honor. I have been playing on the server for a while now, and I love playing on it, so an extra role would make this even more fun.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I have never been banned from CM in my entire time playing.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I am banned from Citadel, because a friend of mine raped and welder bombed somebody on the server and got both of us IP banned from the server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, I understand.

[MrMafioso]

Sorry bud but you ain't exactly got that mainly posts to your name, also the story well. Yeah mate I'd recommend go reading the Predator application guide and spending more time on the server before you go applying for such a high-rp position.

[Karmac]

-1 look at an accepted app and then look back at yours.

[jusa297]

Shit backstory, cliche as fuck. Predators won't get mad if their father died in a honorable duel. If it wasn't a duel is up to the Adjudicators to do so. Also, how does seeking revenge even transitions to the hunt in game? Playstile is generic as fuck, and you also showed no effort in investigating the culture of the yaujta. If you did, you'll knew something as basic as naming patterns. Overall, shit.


-1

[Scrat505]

Can't say I've heard of you, this is your first and only forum post, and the backstory is extremely lackluster (compare 3-4 sentences to the 3-4 paragraphs some have) - overall just pretty pitiful compared to any accepted one.

-1.

[Withoutarms1]

Yeah I made this and then looked at some of the others, and was honestly surprised... Ill have to try harder next time obviously

[MrMafioso]

Yeah I made this and then looked at some of the others, and was honestly surprised... Ill have to try harder next time obviously

Yeah bud', I'd honestly recommend getting yourself known out in the community by posting frequently on the forums with some that is well logical and is relevant etc, I don't mean random shitposting obviously. It'd also be good to get yourself known as a decent roleplayer in game so that people can trust you when it comes to these HRP roles.

[Rustarus]

Yeah I made this and then looked at some of the others, and was honestly surprised... Ill have to try harder next time obviously

Yeah man, remember this is a 2 month deal between pred apps. Do more research and I am sure... you might to a bit better. Gotta make it more... less cliche and more.... essay'y -1 from me, though my vote barely counts as for anything anyways

[Sarah_U.]

Protip: Look at all the movies, the AvP:Extinction game if possible, some comics won't hurt, but you can't really rely on them for the lore part (Comics aren't included in the CM's lore here)... Hope that helps, all in all I'm giving you my -1 unfortunately.

Be less bold and take measures in the future. Can't just apply for a job with a paper that says "I'm good." need to prepare it.

[Nubs]

-1 sadly, this application is too short and lacking in information, better luck for the next one!

[Shyguychizzy]

-1 Do much needed to be said? Beyond bland, on a whole new level in my book, Meta targeting just looking, I am unfamiliar if you even know about predator lore, and unfamiliar with who you are. I'd wait and learn a bit more and expand a bit more, this looks as if you just posted an empty app; it was until i read it made me realize wasn't an empty app but worst than I thought. Sorry Fam but I'd wait and try again once yah looked at those accepted app and learn more on predator lore aswell.

[Boltersam]

Nothing more needs to be said about this app. IT'S FUCKING RAW. -1.

[Redikalzip]

Raw? Strange app and low accound activity (2). My -1 or -1.25. Be happy.

[Feweh]

This is bad.

Denied