Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

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Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Mark Wilson » 28 May 2017, 01:36

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Mark Wilson

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Jar'fugi Karja

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, I have been looking into it ever since I first thought about posting a predator app (like 2-4 months ago) It mostly talks about the honor of a hunt/ duel, don't kill while clocked, no ranged weapons in a duel, only attack prey that can fight back or have a chance to beat you/ do not kill the ones who have done nothing/ Doctors, Survivors and Engineers, Ect...


Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): Deadly Shadow was very eager in his days of youth as sometimes he thought he was stronger than really was. In his first hunt he was ALMOST unsuccessful as he tried to impress his clan and kill the hunted beast himself,not putting into consideration of his lack of skill,but all he did was distract his two fellow young bloods almost bringing them to frailer, He quickly noticed his mistakes and used the value of team work among his fellow young bloods to complete his hunt successfully. After years of hunting experience he and his same fellow young bloods returned to one of many sacred pyramids to face the xenomorph species for the first time, this would require the full use of his fellow Yautjas as the xenomorphs were EXTREAMLY dangerous and should NEVER be under estimated. During this important hunt he and the Yautjas that were with him used ever bit of knowledge and experience they had to face this species, It was a hard fight as the two Yautjas with him were overwhelmed by the relentless xenomorphs and he was forced to fight alone barley winning the hunt. The clan noticed the extreme pressure the Yautja had been put threw and how he still prevailed in his hunt, they were impressed by the young bloods skill. As the result of this he moved up in the ranks of his clan quite fast, during these times Deadly Shadow showed immense skill and honor, never breaking the code...



How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I Intend to play as a (deadly Shadow) lurking in the darkness slowly picking out the most worthy of prey and challenging them. I shall follow the code of honor and hunt fairly giving my prey a fair chance of survival. (doctors, survivors and, Engineers shall not be hunted as they are not considered worthy prey and they have done no harm.

Why should we whitelist you?
I have been playing CM for quiet some time, When my friend first introduced me to this game and taught me the basics I slowly caught on soon learning all the rules and how to play every roll, working my way up from standard marine, I can follow codes very well as I remember in my days of being a MP I frequently arrested corrupted MPs for taking bribes, abusing prisoners and overall breaking their own code (marine law) I also remember setting the XO or CO straight at times, Reminding them that NO ONE is above marine law! I understand how to play and RP in CM as I have been every single roll there is (except Predator and CO) including XO and queen. I have reminded people of rules in LOOC and even taught a few baldies. Those were some reasons why I think I am worthy of whitelist.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No, Not in the last month.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, Just because you are a staff or your are whitelisted doesn't mean you can always break the server rules ( unless in RP situations you are not above ANY rule)
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Boltersam » 28 May 2017, 01:39

Duplicate.

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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Mark Wilson » 28 May 2017, 01:42

yeah sorry, I deleted the second one
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Nick123q23 » 28 May 2017, 06:41

First post. It never bodes well for your first post to be an application.

A big part of the process depends on how active you are in the community and ingame on the server. I'd recommend getting involved in the community more the next time you apply.
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Karmac » 28 May 2017, 09:05

Not gonna lie this is most likely going to be denied as a result of lacking forum activity, and because of that I can't really support it either.
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Rustarus » 28 May 2017, 10:24

Im sorry about this, but I have to be honest on these. The grammar was not great, and it had lots of spelling mistakes... and it could be awkward to have a pred spelling a lot of stuff wrong, the story was meh, and the reason why you should be whitelisted barely told us anything. It just tells us that you play MP a lot and teach baldies, and not even this, but this is your only forums post.. get more active, do more research and I am sure you will do fine, though my vote barely counts for anything -1
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Sarah_U. » 28 May 2017, 11:32

-1, I'd go with a neutral if you'd have 30~, but it's your first post on this account. Get to be known before actuallly applying for predator which is a role that many a player gets salty over (AKA: Don't generate salt, it's bad).
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
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Post by Rustarus » 28 May 2017, 12:10

Oh, and I also noticed that it is painfully close to my preds name... so if you did get accepted that would be very confusing in all honesty.
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When Max Terry is tired (Yes this happened) You hear a voice in your head... Maybe you should tone it down a bit, you seem to be annoying the other marines
*When Max Terry is captured* Young Runner (298) hisses, "*u*k **u **oo Max Terry yells, "FUUUCK YOU!" Max Terry says, "FUCK"
*What everyone thinks of Max Terry* https://youtu.be/eOl_oWxNFrs?t=1185

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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Mark Wilson » 28 May 2017, 12:11

Well thanks for the feedback guys...I will have to put more work in next time.
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Sarah_U. » 28 May 2017, 20:24

Mark Wilson wrote:Well thanks for the feedback guys...I will have to put more work in next time.
It's not truly about the effort. Anyone is doing a bare minimum effort while doing an application; Be it 2 words or 1000. What we mostly disagree with is the fact that you're not known nor providing with sufficient background to fill a role that heavely impact gameplay and the community (Predators can wipe out half a side in combat, quickly tipping the balance).

Overall, you could've looked at accepted applications, seen more of the lore around predators and been more active before posting here. It's generally a good idea not to focus on being an important role before you know what the role implies and what the community opinion on that role is (Preds are quite hated here, we try to be nice and all, but a lot of people dislike us to some degree).
CM was obviously inspired by Starcraft: Ghost opening. At least when marines takes too long to deploy.
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Re: Jar'fugi Karja (Deadly Shadow) Predator App

Post by Feweh » 29 May 2017, 15:27

If your first post is a predator application, you're gonna have a bad time.

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