Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

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Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Ex0demon » 12 Jun 2017, 22:44

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Hayden 'warframe' Tenno

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Durn'heein-tak

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? yes,its easy to understand

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):once a member of an old tribe called stalkers ,he was the son of the ancient tribe leader
Durn'heein-drok,once the ancient died,he got the legacy,but in one battle of the great yautja against serpent war,his tribe got destroyed in a heroic form,they tried to kill an great Serpent hive,the yautja got victory,but the stalkers got ruined,and today,he travel on planets,trying to rebuild his legacy,and become a great yautja again.

Durn,wake up

Durn,wake up!

_where i am?

You Tribe died in a heroic form,to kill the royal serpents,youre the only one alive

...

durn,look at me,we are alive,we defeated them


i dont care.

At least we avenged them,we killed the Serpents

The serpents in this planet.


i want they dead in the universe!
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? Shadow keeps studying all the races,humans,and serpents,for him the Serpents and Humans are equals,always making hives . The humans,kill eachothers,the serpents,kill everyone,but respect his sisters.he wants to bring the real concept of ''hunt'' back,and end with the serpents!

Why should we whitelist you? i can play at any RP,but a REAL RP,not a think without rules,i played CM a long time,and i Always haved fun playing,because the others know how o RP,and i know.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Not in this account

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? yes Paradise station,breaked one of the rules,making a 'mad assassin character''

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? yes its like a great power,as the same way they give it to you,they can take back from you
Always away from his squad,always gets facehugged,and never fight a predator

FOR TZEENTCH!

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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by TehSpoderman » 12 Jun 2017, 22:46

This is literally your first post, also your backstory is pretty bad. -1
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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Sleepy Retard » 12 Jun 2017, 22:47

I have two questions.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Not in this account
Not on this acccount? Do you use multiple accounts?
Two, is english not your first language? I don't think I can say in all honesty that someone who can barely speak English would be a good predator RPer.

Finally, your story is awful. It's just straight up bad. "I want they dead in the universe!"

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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Monoo » 12 Jun 2017, 22:57

I literally first saw you yesterday in the server. Even more than forum activity, participation in game and in the community is essential to being whitelisted.

Good RP also requires good writing skills and grasp of English, neither of which you displayed really... gonna have to -1.
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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Renomaki » 12 Jun 2017, 22:57

Mate, I know I am kicking a dead horse, but if you wanna get in with the hunting party, you gotta make a name for yourself first.

After all, predator is a very complex role that requires a great deal of thought when playing. If we gave it to just about anyone willing to make an app, we'd end up with a lot of very... Awkward situations.
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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Boltersam » 13 Jun 2017, 12:51

A note about the Marine name, change the last name. Tenno as a reference to Warframe breaks naming rules.

First post may as well be an automatic denial. Fix your forum activity and application quality.

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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Imperator_Titan » 14 Jun 2017, 17:25

Boltersam wrote:A note about the Marine name, change the last name. Tenno as a reference to Warframe breaks naming rules.

First post may as well be an automatic denial. Fix your forum activity and application quality.
I somehow missed it completely and it just came to my mind, but Hayden Tenno is the main protagonist of Dark Sector, which is a PS3 exclusive which I really enjoyed, hence why I remembered it.

http://darksector.wikia.com/wiki/Hayden_Tenno

For the application itself, I really can't say anything that the others before me haven't. -1

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Re: Durn'heein-tak (Shadow Stalker)

Post by Feweh » 14 Jun 2017, 17:29

God damn

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