Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation: Saving Corporal Brian"

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Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation: Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Garrison » 28 Jul 2017, 07:00

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Casany as our Gracious Game Master & Narrator

Karmac as Staff Sargent Garth Pawolski

KiroKing as Squad Marksman Sargent Zack Micken

Lance Corporal Brian Levibm as Himself

Amaxin as Combat Medic Corporal Asher McMillian

Kneez as Private Ryan Steelburg

Garrison as Smart Gunner Lance Corporal Raul Garrison

Kavlo as Smart Gunner Lance Corporal Lochlann Healy

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LCpl. Raul Garrison: That nobody with a gun
Dr. Arthur Bennet: The guy you plead to fix you
Lt. Elizabeth Owens: The lady who won't stop badgering.

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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Garrison » 28 Jul 2017, 07:05

Hooooo wee.. A four hour RP session broken down into 9800 words. I actually went over the 60,000 character limit. However I managed to get under it by cutting out the BGM music links. I probably should of cut this down into two parts. Too late now though.
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Karmac » 28 Jul 2017, 08:40

Something to keep in mind for next time I suppose, but you know we appreciate my man.
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Kavlo » 28 Jul 2017, 09:42

Garrison wrote: Karmac as Staff Sargent Gut Pawolski
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Kiroking » 28 Jul 2017, 11:35

Real good garrison, only complaint is you forgot about part at the end where I shot and killed the three xenos advancing on the squad from cybernetics.
Malcolm 'Holdout' Allister - Breacher, Squad Leader, Commander.
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Garrison » 28 Jul 2017, 16:38

Kiroking wrote:Real good garrison, only complaint is you forgot about part at the end where I shot and killed the three xenos advancing on the squad from cybernetics.
fairly sure I covered that with this blurb below, though I do admit I kind of downplayed it. I might edit later.
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Lt. Elizabeth Owens: The lady who won't stop badgering.

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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Casany » 28 Jul 2017, 17:07

I liked it. Really did
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Garrison » 28 Jul 2017, 17:11

Updated with a few corrections and clarifications. That'll be my last edit tho since I'm at the character limit again. Unless I find more glaring typos.
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Kiroking » 04 Aug 2017, 00:15

Garrison wrote:fairly sure I covered that with this blurb below, though I do admit I kind of downplayed it. I might edit later.
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Dident notice it, but thats good enough for me, thanks.
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Re: Aliens: Game Over - Chapte 3 "Operation: Saving Corporal Brian"

Post by Kerek » 05 Aug 2017, 10:43

Ryan Steelberg, pretty good though! Well done!
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