CoreyTori 'Jack' Synth application

[CoreyTori]

Byond ID:
CoreyTori
Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):Corey 'Wolf' Yuta

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name):Jack
Examples of acceptable names: James, Mason, Xavier, Felix, Otto, Allan, Jessica
Examples of unacceptable names: Obama, Jesus, King, Dragon, Godly, Snyper, Circuits

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)?
Yes

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
jack was made to help with Medical and Enginnering duties and was made by WEYLAND-YUTAH and was placed on the almayer to maintain those duties.
He has barely any emotion and does not stress out like normal people. Jack can work faster then a normal person and harder in some cases. Hes latest mission was fighting Rebels the power got shut off while in the battle and jack was ordered to repair it so he got there with minimal damage and repaired it as fast as he could

How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?
will work fast on non priority things and work fast on high priority and will maintain engineering and medical duties. Can do surgery Fast

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)
i know a lot about medical, MT and SO

Why should we whitelist you?
i think i've proved myself over these 2 years or 1 year and played half the rules and some command i think i'm ready for synth...

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No if you count job bans yea

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
paradise for something all i remember it was Perma

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline? Yes.

[James5734]

I've seen Corey play on the server, he's pretty decent. Never had a bad experience from memory. The App isn't amazing but I assume he would be good at playing a synthetic. +1

[NGGJamie]

I'll have to say -1 on this, it doesn't feel like much creativity went into it. Your synth doesn't sound like they really have a quirk at all other than doing the best they can, which is a quality inherent to Synths already, as is most of the other bits you've mentioned in your application through your story. What makes your synth different? Why is he a special snowflake people will want to see?

[Rustarus]

I'm sorry Corey, I gotta go all Bolter on you. The story is bland, it feels rushed, there was little to no proper grammar, and you should be whitelisted does not tell us anything. It says that you have been here for a while... cool? But why do you want to be whitelisted? It was stated this was going to be as strict as a predator app, maybe stricter. I truthfully, do not think you are ready, from not only the story and the grammar. -1

[CoreyTori]

I'm sorry Corey, I gotta go all Bolter on you. The story is bland, it feels rushed, there was little to no proper grammar, and you should be whitelisted does not tell us anything. It says that you have been here for a while... cool? But why do you want to be whitelisted? It was stated this was going to be as strict as a predator app, maybe stricter. I truthfully, do not think you are ready, from not only the story and the grammar. -1

i feel betrayed also i forgot that part i was more focused on the story then anything

[Rustarus]

i feel betrayed also i forgot that part i was more focused on the story then anything

You wrote 3 sentences of story. Three. One of those lines was... "Hes latest mission was fighting Rebels the power got shut off while in the battle and jack was ordered to repair it so he got there with minimal damage and repaired it as fast as he could". I'm sorry man.

It's raw. It feels good to be bolter

[Feweh]

This is bad.

Denied