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Butter - 'Oakley' Synthetic App

Post by Butterrobber202 » 17 Aug 2017, 16:32

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Johnny 'Snowball' Redem, mostly an alien main.

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use: Oakley

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)?: Freshly Read!

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How do you intend to play your Synth?: I'll mostly be playing in Command Support, Engi Support, and Cargo Support roles. E.g. Helping with the engine and cargo line (with permission) round start, then moving on to assist the Commander/XO in the Bridge (also with permission!). Possible JaniSynth if I'm feeling silly and wish to Mop up some crime. The special Quirk Oakley will have is 'dry sarcasm', e.g. 'There's no "I" in "team" but there are 5 in "individual brilliance'. and 'Strong people don't put others down. They lift them up and slam them on the ground for maximum damage.' and my personal favorite, 'I didn't say it was your fault, I said I was blaming you.' I will also likely avoid swearing, as swearing mostly stems from strong emotions, which synths don't possess.

In regards to the Xenos, I will probably ignore them unless Directed to interact with them or attacked by them. Same goes for predators.

How familiar are you with support roles?: I've played every single Job on CM. (Pretty Familiar)

Why should we whitelist you?: For the same reason the server is here! For Fun and general entertainment! I love Robots/Androids/Terminators/AIs, I take robotics classes in High School, and I've played SS13 Synths for years. (which means nothing) I firmly believe that I can enrich On-Ship RP while being the Synth, successfully act like a Real Synth, and most importantly, uphold the Programming of a Synth while remaining a constructive RPer. I've played on Bay12 (with some decent success) and Aurora to polish up my RP.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason?: Nope! No IP Bans to be found here! (in the last month at least, I've been abit of a terrible player in the past, and you will find a motherload of notes and minor infractions. Flaws I've been trying to put behind me.)

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?: Nope! I'm clean.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?: 100%, rules that aren't enforced aren't rules.
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Re: Butter - 'Oakley' Synthetic App

Post by NoahKirchner » 17 Aug 2017, 17:12

I know that butter can RP, my only concern is the quirk because some people would use that to just be a little shit. As long as you don't though butter +1.
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Post by Butterrobber202 » 17 Aug 2017, 17:13

NoahKirchner wrote:I know that butter can RP, my only concern is the quirk because some people would use that to just be a little shit. As long as you don't though butter +1.
I would only do that to non-command staff. Oakley knows his place.
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Post by Chuckachu » 17 Aug 2017, 18:01

All I don't see is what 'Oakley' synth looks like.
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Post by Butterrobber202 » 17 Aug 2017, 18:02

Chuckachu wrote:All I don't see is what 'Oakley' synth looks like.
Fuuuuuuu. I added that in a draft that didn't save, I'll post the picture when I'm home. Aka, Edit it onto this comment.
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Post by Butterrobber202 » 18 Aug 2017, 15:08

You know, being an Alien Main really sucks when you try to app for stuff.
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Post by Chuckachu » 18 Aug 2017, 15:09

You are doing fine! Us shitty applicatiants have already been canned! You are doing good so far! haha
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Re: Butter - 'Oakley' Synthetic App

Post by shotgunbill » 18 Aug 2017, 19:14

+1.

Like everyone else, you've put a lot of time and effort into your application. I'd express some worry over the "dry sarcasm" quirk, though: everyone loves a snarker, but I think humans are better suited for that role.

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Post by Butterrobber202 » 18 Aug 2017, 21:04

shotgunbill wrote:+1.

Like everyone else, you've put a lot of time and effort into your application. I'd express some worry over the "dry sarcasm" quirk, though: everyone loves a snarker, but I think humans are better suited for that role.
Seems to be a reappearing issue, of a head staff needs it changed for my acceptance, I will do so.

EDIT: Forgot to say thank you!
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Post by Mook476 » 19 Aug 2017, 10:26

The application is good. I like the story, and I can obviously see how much effort you've put into it. I only have a problem with a couple of typos you have in there, but over all you got my +1.
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Post by ariever » 19 Aug 2017, 13:05

Hi! I've known butter from Aurora, and I gotta say that I love his characters there, and I just got to experience being a hivelord under his queen-ship. He's a great RPer, and while he was queen, he had a great gimmic that made being a xeno pretty fun. I love this guy, and believe he'd use a synth character for only good c:
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Post by Ducky_Momo » 19 Aug 2017, 21:18

Looks good, a lot of effort was put into that story and I've seen them on CM before. Good player! +1

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Post by Renomaki » 20 Aug 2017, 22:00

I'm no expert on these apps, and being requested to review this is a bit awkward considering how little I really know about them in game, but from what I see here, you certainly show some potential, I'll give it that.

There are a few things that urked me, though, such as how a standard was flipping his shit a tad too unrealistically. I know that this is probably inspired more by in-game events where marines threatening to murder the RO is commonplace, but still, I felt it might have been a good idea to play it more realistically for the app's sake. Other than that, it was an interesting role through his normal routine, and the predator at the end was an unexpected surprise.

I am not much of a helping factor here, but I do wish you the best of luck here. We could use some color in the synth ranks.
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Re: Butter - 'Oakley' Synthetic App

Post by Butterrobber202 » 20 Aug 2017, 22:08

Renomaki wrote:I'm no expert on these apps, and being requested to review this is a bit awkward considering how little I really know about them in game, but from what I see here, you certainly show some potential, I'll give it that.

There are a few things that urked me, though, such as how a standard was flipping his shit a tad too unrealistically. I know that this is probably inspired more by in-game events where marines threatening to murder the RO is commonplace, but still, I felt it might have been a good idea to play it more realistically for the app's sake. Other than that, it was an interesting role through his normal routine, and the predator at the end was an unexpected surprise.

I am not much of a helping factor here, but I do wish you the best of luck here. We could use some color in the synth ranks.
That part was actually more direct to the point of, 'This is likely going to happen in the game, and this is how Oakley is going to react to it.'

While it is unrealistic from an IRL standpoint, it is not that far fetched from what happens in-game, where this whitelist will be applied.
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Post by Feweh » 20 Aug 2017, 22:42

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