Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

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Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 18 Oct 2017, 10:52

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Simon 'ATOM' Sanford

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Gr’ja Q’sut

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? I'm well acquainted with this.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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First Hunt:
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
The main feature of my character is reading traditions, equanimity to other factors, training in combat and studying tactical techniques. But before we go on to the relationship with xenomorphs, I want to tell a couple of factors about people: I'm going to fixate my attention in relationships with people, these are the in-game situations in which I can poke my strength and the greatness of the Yautja, but that does not mean that, that I will attack people, I meant that the study of a topical enemy comes to the fore. Thus, I will observe the behavior of people and their reaction to certain factors.
What about if they started shooting at me. In most cases, these are people who are afraid of entering into an honest fight. In this case, do not focus on not all these people. I'm going to show my attitude and strength, honor and pride.
Let us turn to the Xenomorphs. It is standard that the Xenomorphs are the main target for hunting in the Predators. Xenomorphs are agile and strong. The enemy is worthy, is not it? But this is not worth dwelling on.
A decent hunter hunts only for decent prey. In the form of Elite Hunters, Crushers and other good and worthy goals, which are not so easy to kill.
I want to note that my clan honors its history and traditions. Dueling and free hunting.
At the expense of interaction with the Marines, (as we saw in the film, the Predatos, Yautja, Hish. choose a worthy goal, which showed their courage to the others) ((In general, I read a lot of comics and saw many films about the Predators)) who showed their courage in battle, I'm going to give out a trophy, in the form of a dead enemy or a weapon.
The main feature is that the traitors act in the role of counterbalances. And I know perfectly well how to maintain a balance of power: the Xenomorphs and the People.
I wish my character did not seem like a murder machine, I'm going to contact as much as possible with my partners. Stories about trophies, their observations about the behavior of people, the exchange of experience.

At the end of my story, I want to say that Hish remains an interesting role, and if Yauja can cope with his task, then the round will be interesting and productive.


Why should we whitelist you?
I do not expect praise from you, but I know that I can well create an atmosphere of lamp life. I've been here since Old Sulaco and I understand very well what happens to people and what the situation on the server is. And this is very important.
Watching the rest of the hunters, I noticed a couple of chips, and came up with a couple of ideas for my next action that will be interesting in the game.
I perfectly understand that my Forum Activity is not good, because I do not find my advice among others, I am always ready to help others, which is my personal trait. My activity is due to the fact that I'm more used to communicating with people in the game, it's more pleasant for me and brings pleasure.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No, but I made a mistake, and for this I was punished by Joban on the PO. It was fair.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I'm not currently banned from any other servers.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Of course, I understand everything.
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I love my M56B without BC.
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Be happy. Be marine.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Ghostdex » 18 Oct 2017, 22:57

To start out, the grammar isn't the best, it's slightly hard to read but I get the gist of it. The story is okay, not the best but okay, if not somewhat short. The main qualm I have with the story is that you called the xenos; lizards, instead of serpents as that is what they are normally called. Another thing, wrist blades while they aren't resistant to acid, don't melt instantly, or at least in the AVP movie didn't.

I see you on the server quite often, usually most of my rounds I see you. You've been around for a while too so there is that.

You switch from using Yautja to Hish, I'm not sure if they're both different races, the same or what as xenopedia isn't quite clear about this. However to me the names are just how they were published.

i'll be sticking with a neutral for right now.

Edit: based on responses from other players, I'm changing to +1.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Sneakyr » 23 Oct 2017, 04:51

Simon may have a bit of a problem with grammar things, but he's a good player and fairly responsible from what I've seen.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Doktor710 » 23 Oct 2017, 09:30

I can't say anything about the application because I am not sure about it, but I know Redikal as a good player and I think he can fit for the predator role.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by TheMusician321 » 23 Oct 2017, 10:40

+1, Simon may not have the best english or grammar, but I've never had a bad roleplay with him around, would love to see him in the hunt.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by emeraldmoonx » 23 Oct 2017, 17:34

+1 for me, good app. Grammar isn't much of an issue.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 24 Oct 2017, 06:00

Thank's all for your support, It's really great to see, when good guys support me.
Thank's you: Day, Ed, Doktor, Emerald and Fixer.
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I love my "SADAR".
I love my M56B without BC.
I love M41A with QF.


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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Feweh » 24 Oct 2017, 13:46

What kind of name is fucking Gr’ja Q’sut

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Kyrac » 24 Oct 2017, 21:39

What kind of names are most Yautja names.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Nightwolf901 » 25 Oct 2017, 15:55

Simon is a awesome dude, Known him for a bit and all. The grammer isn't top notch but everyone can improve in some ways. I know he RPs and he does it well. I think he will be a great addition to the hunt. +1
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 26 Oct 2017, 19:45

Thank you Wolf, really nice see your support. :)

Then, Feweh want new "nonshit" name for Yautja. If it allowed. (I used my first name from one old comics (I.d not copypaste that name, but that name was interesting for me), I needs make new name for my Hish.
It, okay then. Name: Atole Bhu'ja. And, I think that Name is good name for Hunt.
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I love my "SADAR".
I love my M56B without BC.
I love M41A with QF.


Be happy. Be marine.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Enceri » 28 Oct 2017, 07:26

It's hard not to enjoy a round when Simon is on. Admittedly his English isn't the best, but he truly is a fun character, and he can keep up some RP. I'm dropping my +1.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 29 Oct 2017, 01:28

Enceri wrote:
28 Oct 2017, 07:26
It's hard not to enjoy a round when Simon is on. Admittedly his English isn't the best, but he truly is a fun character, and he can keep up some RP. I'm dropping my +1.
Yeah, thank you, Adan!
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I love my M56B without BC.
I love M41A with QF.


Be happy. Be marine.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 30 Oct 2017, 22:17

I need your support, my friends-marines. Thanks!
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I love my "SADAR".
I love my M56B without BC.
I love M41A with QF.


Be happy. Be marine.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by emeraldmoonx » 30 Oct 2017, 22:30

Not a good idea to bump your own topic asking for support. Every topic eventually gets looked at and denied/accepted eventually. If feweh/apophis sees not enough people have commented, then they'll ask for more feedback themselves.

Just got to be patient, it'll happen.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Jeser » 01 Nov 2017, 11:02

As emeraldmoonx said, grammar is not of an issue in this case. Simon is a decent player who plays quite often. He is one of those few you don't expect any bullshit from. I think he is able to handle predator side of the game.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by northcote4 » 06 Nov 2017, 07:02

Well to start with, I know who you are and I know the character you play, and I can safely say I’ve no issue with either. Nothing wrong with your activity either, so all good news so far!

Your story was definitely an interesting read. The foreword and the First Hunt itself both paint a very nice picture, and I particularly like your attention to crafting your own clan lore, as well as your attention to detail regarding certain pieces of Yautja equipment. However, while ordinarily a few issues with English here and there aren’t much cause for concern, I found it increasingly difficult to follow your story as it progressed, and I completely failed to follow the plot after about the halfway mark in the First Hunt.
And on the note of the story, what is a banana-head? Is that another way of saying xenomorph? It seems an odd choice of words if that is the case.

In your intended playstyle, though, things are much clearer. It is much easier to understand and I like the rest of your responses in the application.

All that said and done, while the app is a bit… Odd… It does address the key things I look for, and I’ve seen enough of Simon to be willing to give him a shot. +1 from me.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Stripetail » 06 Nov 2017, 20:03

I've seen you around before, and your character generally has a good vibe associated with them. Though the story is rather short and the grammar is a bit iffy, I could see giving you a chance at the hunt.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 07 Nov 2017, 01:32

JKincaid wrote:
06 Nov 2017, 20:03
I've seen you around before, and your character generally has a good vibe associated with them. Though the story is rather short and the grammar is a bit iffy, I could see giving you a chance at the hunt.

+1
Thank you Kincaid! Nice to see your support.

Northcote:
Thank you cote, for the kind words:) About banana-head. My character has not yet seen alive xenomorph and I described his feature. In general, I stressed the description of the xenomorph to make it clear for you and for my predator.
It's just what my character saw.

Thanks to both of you! Good luck!

P.S: Hi Fox, thank you too. :)
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I love my "SADAR".
I love my M56B without BC.
I love M41A with QF.


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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Feweh » 10 Nov 2017, 12:46

More feedback required.

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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Mook476 » 10 Nov 2017, 14:41

Simon is a good and robust player. He's been around and I know he's pretty decent. +1
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by TheMusician321 » 10 Nov 2017, 21:07

+1, I think Simon would really do well as a pred, although he may have an issue or two with grammar and capitalization, I have never had a bad experience with him icly or oocly, he would make a great addition to the hunt and I would love to see him as a pred.
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 10 Nov 2017, 21:23

Mook476 wrote:
10 Nov 2017, 14:41
Simon is a good and robust player. He's been around and I know he's pretty decent. +1
Thank you Mook for your support and feedback!
TheMusician321 wrote:
10 Nov 2017, 21:07
+1, I think Simon would really do well as a pred, although he may have an issue or two with grammar and capitalization, I have never had a bad experience with him icly or oocly, he would make a great addition to the hunt and I would love to see him as a pred.
Thank you Ed for your feedback! I know about my problems with gramma, but I'll fix em.

Thanks again to both of you. See you later!
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by KinNnN » 11 Nov 2017, 07:30

His story is gut and creating an lore for the clan is also very gut he would be an nice Pred in the game also my grammar isn't the best but i know that ATOM is damn good in RP i give him +1
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Re: Gr'ja Q'suit (Silent Hunter)

Post by Redikalzip » 12 Nov 2017, 04:17

KinNnN wrote:
11 Nov 2017, 07:30
His story is gut and creating an lore for the clan is also very gut he would be an nice Pred in the game also my grammar isn't the best but i know that ATOM is damn good in RP i give him +1
So yeah, thanks for feedback!
Simon "ATOM" Sanford: "Use your brain and be a tactical man with your good aim for rifle"

I love my "SADAR".
I love my M56B without BC.
I love M41A with QF.


Be happy. Be marine.

Atole Bhu'ja
Son'ka Atoj'e

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