Kanz'tu Hola'nuk (Hazed Shadow) Predator App

[Ntrail69]

Byond ID:Trainer1

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):i play both but alien a little more my Marine name is Jason Mortam
and i play Boiler, Spitter, and Ravanger mostly.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Kanz'tu Hola'nuk

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? of course I've read over it and understand the Code of Honor.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):Born on a near by planet of a Yautja hunting grounds Kanz'tu Hola'nuk grew up fast and strong hunting many worthy pray to hone his skills. Now years later the Elders have chosen to Test the young bloods skills. The Yautja was ready and willing to do anything to prove to the elders his years on this hunting ground like planet was not a waste.

The Elders had sent a worthy test for him, a true Yautja warrior to show the young blood hes was still new. but to the elders surprise the young Yautja had cunningly tricked the warrior into a cave where he disarmed him.the elders new Kanz'tu Hola'nuk was a true warrior to be reckoned, his skills reflex's and knowledge where on that of a warrior of 20 years. now suited up the New Yautja Warrior stands ready.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I plan on using stealth and tech to my advantage and will try to use more primitive based tech (such as spears and blades maybe even a disc) to start till i'm forced to use the heavy tech (such as plasma casters and dart gun) but over all i plan on using my cunning and trapping my pray.

Why should we whitelist you? I've shown i'm good at aliens and marines i am not to new to the seen never really tried to apply for anything till now thought it would be good to try this if i seem worthy i know i can make a good Predator and make the game play fun.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? no i haven't.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? no i haven't been banned at all.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?yes i fully understand.

[Brokenchair]

You might wanna fix some of that grammar

[Renomaki]

Day one predator application... That is all I can say on this matter.

Look, just because you played for a few months doesn't mean you can make an app. You need to build renown both in game and on the forums/discord. Otherwise you aren't going to get far here.

Besides, being a predator isn't as simple as you'd think. What makes you think you can handle the power and responsibility of the role?

[Shyguychizzy]

Besides grammar stand point, and I do agree with Reno's Remarks. It sounds all too familiar and quite bland beyond itself, and a tad well its short. Suggest look at those accepted and denied notice the difference on em. For time being I'd take time getting more use to and familiar with it and being more known. Honestly don't know who you are, gonna have to give yah a -1.

[emeraldmoonx]

Nothing to say anyone else hasn't said yet. -1

[Ghostdex]

Not much else to say about this application aside from it being your first post, -1. Look at accepted apps and then come back later.

[KinNnN]

Too bad for an first post man you need to improve a LOT but a LOT more you only said a few things...try to create a good history take your time to do it but before you do it get some renown...you should be thinking now "duuuh this guy just created the account now and he want to say something? duuuh" look i lost my other forum account but trust me play the game a little more maybe for more 5 or 6 months and try again...Don't get bad about the -1 its normal to failure

[Shyguychizzy]

Also, good tip. Going over a bit of Predator Lore, just don't implement it too much for instance speaking everything in Yuatja language (Predator language rather) in the apps, many times a player who ( which is good) they got a bit more in depth or did in fact read up on lore but went too much in yautja language which would confuse people.

[Symbiosis]

-1. Take a look at some of the accepted apps a few months from now if you're not accepted and give it a second try! Pour into the lore of the Yautja.

[northcote4]

So to lead with, I’ll have to give this app a -1.

There are several reasons, which have fairly well all been voiced by everyone else. But I’ll state them anyway. From the top:

This is your first post to the forums. This is more of a problem to some folk than others. The reason being that a low (or in your case, no) number of posts to the forums is indicative of a lack of community activity. It doesn’t show that you’ve put anything back into the CM community. As such, it’s difficult to tell what sort of person you are from an OOC standpoint, which is just as important as IC when it comes to whitelisted roles. Onto your character.

I can’t profess to having seen Jason Mortam around. Whether this is due to activity clashes or some other reason on either of our parts, it means I can’t judge you ICly either. You have no reputation that I’ve heard of, and while that isn’t inherently bad, it means that as far as I’m aware you don’t do anything to stand out. To distinguish yourself. And such distinguished players are usually the ones scoring whitelist roles.

Onto your app itself, it’s fairly lacklustre. The story isn’t particularly up to par, nor are your answers to how you intend to play your character. It gets me wondering whether you’re terribly familiar with either Yautja lore OR the server’s honour code.
So yeah. That’s the gist of it.

As other people suggested, I’d definitely recommend having a gander at some of the accepted predator applications to get an idea for what the bar is.

[Emeraldblood]

Low effort isn't going to get you a whitelist. If you really want to be a predator, you got to show you'll put some work into getting it. -1

[Feweh]

Denied