Nightmare's Pred application - Black Sabre

[Nightmare2125]

Byond ID: Nightmare2125


Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Erron 'Joker' Bartton


Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Black Sabre

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Currently learning it. I'm posting a whitelist for the first time, so understandably I need some time to understand the Code

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
Sabre has been well renowned by his Clan as "prime scout" and thus is always selected by his Elders to stalk prey for the hunters. This, however, does not mean that he is not without fierce skill in combat and strategy, Black Sabre has started his early life learning how to wield his claws, fire his caster, and claim his trophies.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I would want to play more of a stalker role rather than a hunter. I will hunt when I find someone of great skill, but mainly I will be observing and learning how other species engage in combat.

Why should we whitelist you?
I'm an honest person, if I mess up and a Admin comes to me about it, I won't lie and I'll accept the punishment. I've been playing on this server on and off for the last 3 years at least. However it's only recently that I even knew about this website and it gives me a reason to learn more about the story, lore, and background. So I feel like I should be whitelisted due to my personal nature of honor, courage, and commitment.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
None

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes

[Kerek]

This application isn’t up to standard. -1

[Jakkkk]

You need to have your Predator's name be in the Yautja language, along with having a more interesting play style and a longer background. Maybe tell a story of how he went on a scouting mission and had a life changing moment? For now, I'm at -1.

[TehSpoderman]

Was this meant for acid goop?

Story: Absolutely no effort at all. Look at accepted apps and look at yours.

Playstyle: Completely unoriginal, though it does take some effort to create an original one. Still, this playstyle is usually expected from other preds. Create a playstyle that suits you and your character.

Player activity: No idea who you are. I havent been playing lately, though.

Forum activity: Atleast this isnt your first post. An acceptable amount of posts is around 60-90 for me. Keep being active in the community and you will fill this required field in no time.

Verdict: -1.

[Nightmare2125]

You need to have your Predator's name be in the Yautja language, along with having a more interesting play style and a longer background. Maybe tell a story of how he went on a scouting mission and had a life changing moment? For now, I'm at -1.

I thought that post about "stupid names" contradicted that, that's why I didn't use whatever language they use.

[Nightmare2125]

Was this meant for acid goop?

Story: Absolutely no effort at all. Look at accepted apps and look at yours.

Playstyle: Completely unoriginal, though it does take some effort to create an original one. Still, this playstyle is usually expected from other preds. Create a playstyle that suites you and your character.

Player activity: No idea who you are. I havent been playing lately, though.

Forum activity: Atleast this isnt your first post. An acceptable amount of posts is around 60-90 for me. Keep being active in the community and you will fill this required in no time.

Verdict: -1.

Thanks for the feedback, but you're wrong on my activity. I've been playing for quite a long time. I don't really look to make friends or people who know me all too much, so it's understandable that you don't know me.

[apophis775]

Did you read the post, or see how other preds were doing theirs?

It doesn't need to be something extremely crazy (like Honor-Sword-death) which is what people are doing.

It should still look like a Pred Name.

[Nightmare2125]

Did you read the post, or see how other preds were doing theirs?

It doesn't need to be something extremely crazy (like Honor-Sword-death) which is what people are doing.

It should still look like a Pred Name.

Got it, I'll go ahead and asume this is denied and try again when I get more information at a later date.

[Feweh]

Really bad application.

Denied