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Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by fatalityfun » 17 Mar 2018, 15:29

the dynamic duo, a day late

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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by kidcat0007 » 17 Mar 2018, 15:58

Bravo! +10
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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by fatalityfun » 17 Mar 2018, 16:08

kidcat0007 wrote:
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Bravo! +10
no bravo was two days ago

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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by Vispain » 17 Mar 2018, 16:15

Very good.

One possible improvement: Two SMGs for the Delta, not one.
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Post by Aceluke123 » 17 Mar 2018, 16:40

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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by kidcat0007 » 17 Mar 2018, 17:37

fatalityfun wrote:
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no bravo was two days ago
Bravo is also another word for saying well done
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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by Nickvr628 » 17 Mar 2018, 17:38

Really nice! One suggestion, the right arm on the Charlie Marine with the shotgun seem a bit small compared to the rest of the body. How will he melee benos with those tiny forearms!?!

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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by fatalityfun » 17 Mar 2018, 18:28

Nickvr628 wrote:
17 Mar 2018, 17:38
Really nice! One suggestion, the right arm on the Charlie Marine with the shotgun seem a bit small compared to the rest of the body. How will he melee benos with those tiny forearms!?!
oh god you're right, UGH NOW I CANT UNSEE IT

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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by x31stOverlord » 17 Mar 2018, 18:58

Pretty sweet drawing.

Nice work.

A distinct lack of MRE Ration Crayons in the deltards mouth though :P
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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by MrMafioso » 17 Mar 2018, 19:04

There seems to be a lack of dual gyro M4's on the Deltard, over all very nice - Oh and they aren't ffing each other so its not realistic
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Re: Charlie and Delta Marines sketch

Post by fatalityfun » 17 Mar 2018, 19:14

kidcat0007 wrote:
17 Mar 2018, 17:37
Bravo is also another word for saying well done
yeah i know I was trying to make a joke :P

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