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Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 18 Mar 2018, 18:07

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Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Than-Guan H’dlak (Midnight Fear)


Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes.
Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

Introduction
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The Compound
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When Than-Guan was finally able to pilot his own ship, he went off into the cosmos to hunt for his dream - a Serpent queen.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
He will hide away, silently stalking, taunting, and exploiting ways to get to honorable prey. Than-Guan will attempt to hunt with other Yautja if he comes across any. If none are found, then he will be a loner. He is rather defensive about his view on the Hunt, and he will attempt to sway anyone else that does not agree with him. If they refuse to agree, he will look down upon them as he thinks that they do not know the Hunt.


Why should we whitelist you?
From my perspective, I believe that I am a good roleplayer, and I could scare the shit out of the marines and/or Xenos while hunting them both, and may give them roleplay oppertunities with me as well. I have been looking up lore on predators, and “studying” the code of honor, and I understand the rules of the code. I also want to be whitelisted because I believe that being a predator will refine my roleplay, and make me a better, more robust person in general.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Nope, not in February.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, I realize my whitelist is fragile, and will be removed at any time for any reason.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by AverageSpitter » 18 Mar 2018, 18:17

I have definitely seen you around, Your playstyle feels a bit generic, Your post count is good.

About your story... I feel like it's a bit short, And there isn't much about your pred's personality we can get out of it. For what i have seen from most preds accepted whitelists, the first hunt tends to be the most important part of the background, being the part that takes the most emphasis and narrative. For me, that's the reason your app feels a bit empty.

Im going with neutral for now. Might change in the future.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 18 Mar 2018, 18:24

AverageSpitter wrote:
18 Mar 2018, 18:17
I have definitely seen you around, Your playstyle feels a bit generic, Your post count is good.

About your story... I feel like it's a bit short, And there isn't much about your pred's personality we can get out of it. For what i have seen from most preds accepted whitelists, the first hunt tends to be the most important part of the background, being the part that takes the most emphasis and narrative. For me, that's the reason your app feels a bit empty.

Im going with neutral for now. Might change in the future.
Thanks for the critiscm, can you evaluate why the story seems short?
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by AverageSpitter » 18 Mar 2018, 18:31

Rikman wrote:
18 Mar 2018, 18:24
Thanks for the criticism, can you evaluate why the story seems short?
Because the first hunt didn't get enough emphasis, and for the most part you skipped lots of details, Like, How did Than kill the serpent? How was the environment? Did the serpent brawl with him? Was the fight fierce? Did than have the upper hand for the most of it? Or the serpent had it?

Hell, Even the guy Than killed at the compound didn't feel like a worthy trohpy at all, The whole thing felt as something Than did out of boredom, and at the start of the background you established that Than was somehow aware of what honor really meant, as he saw no honor in his brothers.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 18 Mar 2018, 18:50

AverageSpitter wrote:
18 Mar 2018, 18:31
Because the first hunt didn't get enough emphasis, and for the most part you skipped lots of details, Like, How did Than kill the serpent? How was the environment? Did the serpent brawl with him? Was the fight fierce? Did than have the upper hand for the most of it? Or the serpent had it?

Hell, Even the guy Than killed at the compound didn't feel like a worthy trohpy at all, The whole thing felt as something Than did out of boredom, and at the start of the background you established that Than was somehow aware of what honor really meant, as he saw no honor in his brothers.
Thanks for explaining!
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Kerek » 18 Mar 2018, 19:12

I don't care about playstyles as most of them get somewhat ditched or left out anyway in the end, I like your backstory and I think that I've seen you around somewhere, I'd like to see you on the hunt buddy. +1
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 18 Mar 2018, 19:26

Kneez wrote:
18 Mar 2018, 19:12
I don't care about playstyles as most of them get somewhat ditched or left out anyway in the end, I like your backstory and I think that I've seen you around somewhere, I'd like to see you on the hunt buddy. +1
Thanks for your review!
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 18 Mar 2018, 22:51

Rikman wrote:
18 Mar 2018, 19:26
Thanks for your review!
And for the help along the way.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by NGGJamie » 19 Mar 2018, 11:33

Rikman wrote:
18 Mar 2018, 22:51
And for the help along the way.
Please reply less frequently or to more than one response at once unless it's directly prompted. Too many gratitude replies clutter the application.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Heckenshutze » 19 Mar 2018, 12:08

The part of the human running and falling trying to escape really gave me the Predator film chills, very good.

What I don't buy is your playstyle, regarding that it's true that in the end all preds player adjust their playing style to the current round and the game itself I still like to see the creativity of the applicants, if you can reply to my comment with a nice, original / creative way of playing the predator while hunting for example, in Prison Station, I will give you my +1
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 19 Mar 2018, 13:38

Heckenshutze wrote:
19 Mar 2018, 12:08
The part of the human running and falling trying to escape really gave me the Predator film chills, very good.

What I don't buy is your playstyle, regarding that it's true that in the end all preds player adjust their playing style to the current round and the game itself I still like to see the creativity of the applicants, if you can reply to my comment with a nice, original / creative way of playing the predator while hunting for example, in Prison Station, I will give you my +1
Edit: These are my plans during the Hunt, if I ever get the chance to roleplay with something, I would take it.
Alright then, here goes.

On Prison Station, I would like to hide traps throughout the main hallways, in an attempt to ensare any worthy foes, and then have a fair duel with them. If that doesnt work out, I will resort to cloaking and scouting for worthy trophies.

Alternatively, depending on the map, I might slip past (with cloak on) the marine front, or the xeno front, and try to duel with lone, worthy prey. I would try to avoid low xeno caste levels, and try to avoid PFC marines as well, Unless they prove to be honorable prey. So, mainly, I will be looking for T2 and Lcpl+


It is true, I might change this a little bit when I play, but I think this is going to be my main plan for hunting. Later in the round, I might branch off the main plan, and change my hunting style.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Heckenshutze » 19 Mar 2018, 14:38

Rikman wrote:
19 Mar 2018, 13:38
Edit: These are my plans during the Hunt, if I ever get the chance to roleplay with something, I would take it.
Alright then, here goes.

On Prison Station, I would like to hide traps throughout the main hallways, in an attempt to ensare any worthy foes, and then have a fair duel with them. If that doesnt work out, I will resort to cloaking and scouting for worthy trophies.

Alternatively, depending on the map, I might slip past (with cloak on) the marine front, or the xeno front, and try to duel with lone, worthy prey. I would try to avoid low xeno caste levels, and try to avoid PFC marines as well, Unless they prove to be honorable prey. So, mainly, I will be looking for T2 and Lcpl+


It is true, I might change this a little bit when I play, but I think this is going to be my main plan for hunting. Later in the round, I might branch off the main plan, and change my hunting style.
For what I see, I feel you're quite of a ruthless, vicious predator as you explained on your history and this playstyle example, I'm ok with this since I feel we need more agressive/bloodthirsty predators than stalkers,silent,playful ones. Still, remember you're allowed to be all the agressive you want within the honor code, being extra-agressive in some cases might turn bad. (Regardless, expect always a player report from time to time.)

I'll vouch for you but take advice that if accepted, you are expected to behave on a higher level than the rest of the playerbase. In the game AND our community (Forum and/or Discord) and you're also expected to have a certain level of activity too, especially the forums.

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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 19 Mar 2018, 14:40

Heckenshutze wrote:
19 Mar 2018, 14:38
For what I see, I feel you're quite of a ruthless, vicious predator as you explained on your history and this playstyle example, I'm ok with this since I feel we need more agressive/bloodthirsty predators than stalkers,silent,playful ones. Still, remember you're allowed to be all the agressive you want within the honor code, being extra-agressive in some cases might turn bad. (Regardless, expect always a player report from time to time.)

I'll vouch for you but take advice that if accepted, you are expected to behave on a higher level than the rest of the playerbase. In the game AND our community (Forum, discord, etc.)

+1
I understand.

I am not in the discord right now, but I will join very soon.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by x31stOverlord » 19 Mar 2018, 16:46

Alright.

Commentary:

The story, is short, which is not always a bad thing, but it does make it more difficult for an observer to give accurate criticisms. From what I saw, a bit more work needs to be done on the background and I would advise against saying things like: "Later in life, he got a ride on one of his relatives’ ships" - Predators, as we know so far, do not operate in similar circumstances to Humans and not every Yautja has their own personal space craft for when they want to pop into McSerpents for a quick bite. I would increase the content of the story, expanding on more lengthy hunts, as a way to get familiar with the way a round may play out and also to give us a little more meat to chew as we look for you demonstrating your knowledge of Pred lore and the honour code etc.

Lots of forum activity is a good thing, shows you are active in the community and not just applying for the sake of applying to see if you can play with the cool kids toys.

I have seen you in game, but not as much as I would like to see, I cannot make an accurate call about your RP capability at this time. Further rounds may change this.

TL/DR:

- Short story, difficult to give feedback, would like to see a longer story to give a better picture of your in mind hunt and knowledge. ( -/+)

- Lots of Forum activity ( + )

- Little first hand experience with you in game, cannot give accurate idea of your RP capability and level of RP standard. ( -/+ )

Verdict:

Neutral leaning positive (19/03/2018)
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Potato Masher » 19 Mar 2018, 22:15

You seem pretty active on the forums and the few times I have been around you in game you seem to display some competent roleplaying.

Original gameplay ideas at this point I usually don't care about due to how many fucking applications there have been over the years, and how god damn hard that makes it to come up with an original idea.
I will say though, we do need more aggressive predators around here. The ones I try to fight as Xeno or Marine these days seem to run the fuck away, even when I'm alone and willing. I like that part of your app.

Chill guy, +1.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

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Potato Masher wrote:
19 Mar 2018, 22:15
You seem pretty active on the forums and the few times I have been around you in game you seem to display some competent roleplaying.

Original gameplay ideas at this point I usually don't care about due to how many fucking applications there have been over the years, and how god damn hard that makes it to come up with an original idea.
I will say though, we do need more aggressive predators around here. The ones I try to fight as Xeno or Marine these days seem to run the fuck away, even when I'm alone and willing. I like that part of your app.

Chill guy, +1.
Thank you!
I have been leaning towards aggressive and stealthiness, and ingame I would like to try being really aggressive, and in another round I would be really stealthy and aggressive. (You know, for a test run of how I handle being aggressive and stealthy)
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by TheMusician321 » 02 Apr 2018, 21:22

Pretty active on the forums, 100+ posts in like 2 months is very good, I like how your pred is aggressive and blood thirsty, something we need more in the pred community and I like that you want to hunt with other preds instead of running off alone on your own, you get a +1 from me, hope to see you in the hunt!
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by zoboomafoo » 03 Apr 2018, 22:09

Manley's a funny guy, and kinda an oddball, you put some effort into RP for sure. I also see you on the forums a lot. Preds hunting together isn't seen enough either, the spectator can fend of the xeno horde while the one hunting can 1v1 his prey. It's cool to see. Story was kinda short though. I will admit, I come to this part of the forums for story time a lot, so that was a little disappointing. Your writing is good though, consider beefing it up if you have to apply again.

All in all, I think you could handle the role well. +1
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Post by Shyguychizzy » 04 Apr 2018, 00:58

I'll take a look look at this app at later note for full review. Your name is quite familiar or a name I seen prior before.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Ghostdex » 04 Apr 2018, 10:42

Cab you elaborate on your playstyle, specifically the “hunt with other yautja” part?
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 04 Apr 2018, 13:10

ghostdex wrote:
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Cab you elaborate on your playstyle, specifically the “hunt with other yautja” part?
I would try to find a hunting partner, and earn trophies while fighting alongside them because I want my Yaujta to be a little more social than normal. And to have someone to RP with as well.

(I saw two Preds hunting with each other some time ago and I am bringing inspiration from that)
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Weaselburg » 11 Apr 2018, 15:44

Can´t say I interact Rik all to much on-server, but I have seen a good amount of him, and interacted a decent amount of times with them on the forums and came away with the opinion that he knew what was doing and was a pretty nice guy. So here is my +1, hope it helps.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Lukey111 » 12 Apr 2018, 15:31

I... Can't find much to fight against this... Story is fine, as I am a firm believer of both long and short stories. I think with some polishing, you could be a great pred, as really most people are capable of having any whitelist. Hope to kill honor duel you in the future!
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Rikman » 16 Apr 2018, 14:27

Heres a wave of thanks to you all!

I recognize the fact that my story is too short, and I will update it in the future if this is not accepted.

My playstyle will definitely be aggressive, and I would like to roleplay as well as hunting.
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Re: Than-Guan H’dlak

Post by Ghostdex » 18 Apr 2018, 13:45

Story wasn’t bad but it wasn’t great, it also shows decent understanding of yautja. Pretty good attitude and you seem like a decent lad, your earlier response to my question was good but keep in mind if two predators hunt the same prey it’s a joint hunt and must be agreed on by both.

Leaving a +1 here, good luck.

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