Predator Whitelist Attempt #1

[Jbm35]

Byond ID: Windy35

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Shanika Pyrocoft

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Innuc' Ra

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? I am not, but i am willing to learn it closely.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background): A newborn of the old. Ra, a skilled hunter with little values of others. He lives only to hunt, to gather trophies, and to make his leader proud. He appreciates others who share his interests and will defend their honor to his death.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)? As a predator i will aspire to take out anything that the Elder deems too dangerous, or in simpler terms as an assassin who would collect trophies to prove my kill.

Why should we whitelist you? I would enjoy a different approach to playing on the CM server, as i have only played a few marine roles and a lot of the xenomorph roles. I would like to see how well i play as a predator and if i would stick with it.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No i have not, as i just got off of my 2-3 year permanent ban.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I am currently banned from Oracle Station, for use of Netspeak a multitude of times, Hippie Station, for lethal force as a Captain, and i believe from Yogstation, but i am not sure as nothing is loading from the server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? I do. And i hope that i will live up to the CM way and roleplay properly.

[caleeb101]

I'm sorry man. Look at some of the other predator apps, this is way too short. On top of that is the fact that you just got off a perma ban so you haven't been playing for 2-3 years.

On top of that, you're not a known player.

[Mvp777]

-1 This is honestly very bad, little story, even less actual writing.

Predator applications generally require a fair bit of work in thinking out a character and writing a story around them, being known and active on the forum helps.

[Gerald888]

Is this a joke?

[Avalanchee]

Just no.

[edda]

Uhh, gonna go with NGGJamie's reply to one of the other pred apps. The others are being a bit mean, you obviously aren't aware of the level of effort expected of these apps in general. You should delete this and try again after a month or two.

[Jbm35]

huh. I'm not very good at writing stuff so your feedback is noted. Ill try harder next time i guess.

[edda]

Remember to look at accepted apps to get an idea of what you should be aiming for. Also, make yourself more known. There is an unfortunate popularity contest element to this whole thing.

[Jbm35]

I understand. I'm looking into the "predator way" right now. Ill try to make a proper story and give my predator life.

[NGGJamie]

Denied

Check out some of the accepted apps to get an idea regarding what sort of expectations come with an application.