TrustScience44's Predator Application - zaz'fot

[trustscience44]

Byond ID: trustscience44

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Zuup 'Science' Pools

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): zaz'fot

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

Zaz'fot' was a typical athletic Light-Dark Haired Yautja living a life of learning, hunting and eating. They grew up in a modest yet literally astounding clan by the name of Ra'u-Hi which means 'Second Chances'. Until one day... Nothing strange ever happened during zaz'fot's childhood because his parents were so common as to be often overlooked or taken for granted considering the excitement of other Yautja-Youths zaz'fot's parents wanted nothing to do with that and had a normal life of training and educating their clan children. This turned zaz'fot' into a brilliant, cunning, and strong Yautja until he finally left on his own. It was this that gave zaz'fot' the edge in combat and everything.

At age 8 zaz'fot' got his first kill against a Xenomorph-Queen, 'zaz'fot' was inexperienced and caught in a trap! Unmasked, unarmored and without weapons, grasping two of her leaping children in each hand, an enraged zaz'fot' beat the Xenomorph-Queen to death with her own children in each hand, taking her skull as a trophy. Everyone in clan Ra'u-Hi knew that he was something special and their god had smiled upon them that day.

Some time passed...it was then at age 500 he would have over 4000 kills confirmed using only melee weapons and over another thousand using ranged weapons, because to be fair it is harder to count body parts after the plasma blast. After such a long and glorious life of battle, the thirst for more of a challenge was on 'zaz'fot's mind every single space-day. This was driving them to the figurative edge and they could not stop thinking about finding the ultimate challenge. It was then... a great catastrophe struck 'zaz'fot''s mind, as he started to become bored of his cunning and ease of killing and gathering trophies of the local cluster. Zaz'fot threw all of his probably priceless and grandiose collection of thousands of trophies into the cold vacuum of space and set out to seek hunts on the other side of the galaxy. Zaz'fot would come upon a small yet somehow irritatingly blue-planet which housed primitive and weak humans he remembers reading about from his simple childhood.

On one particularly memorable space-day as 'zaz'fot' was traveling through the human system, zaz'fot noticed the primitives sending a small vehicle into space and skillfully scanned the vehicle with their instruments, unfortunately this set the vehicle on fire and destroyed the humans within, the only letters zaz'fot remembers seeing on the vehicle read "Challenger".

Hundreds of years later... zaz'fot would see the human expansion into space and the human push quite too far into reaches of previously space filling empty planets. Adept at scanning, noticing their technology and the research the humans were doing, he couldn't hesitate to take on a new challenge..

Some time passes, at 860 year old and zaz'fot's Yautja-Retirement grows near, One last demand by zaz'fot, A demand of honor as well as many trophies in a final few hunts. This, all so I might finally become one of the few respected Ancients of my Clan Ra'u-Hi. The honor I seek and trophies I desire are also so I can meet up with Yautja Females to increase my bloodline in Clan Ra'u-Hi and other clans.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?

I plan to capture worthy opponents. I will rarely cloak and will present myself to any prey. I define a worthy opponent as someone that accepts an honor dual.
Failure to accept any duals not only is considered an insult to me resulting in severe punishment, as their weak and pathetic species is not fit to exists in this 'universe of the fittest' as anything other than a Trophy or a Slave, unless of course they are weak and patheticly unarmed and not even worthy of my attention, but if they are unworthy of my attention why would I ever honor-dual them in the first place!
I will also capture the marines as well as the xenos with the net or trap(do we have a nets?) or whatever lets me that preds have. Capturing a couple Prey I will send them up to fight to their death for my amusement and maybe to impress any females or other Yautja around.
After every fight I plan to rip the losers spine out and take their organs as my trophies directly in front of the winner. Sometimes I'll give honor to the human winner by fighting them without a mask or weapons so they might see a superior species face to face before their death.
I'll try to make a necklace and other things out of bones or skulls or Rib-Bones etc, or any bones really that might fit on the exterior of my armor. I feel my development as a predator from peaceful meditation-time crafting helped me find my inner-warrior and inner-strength, helping me fight this many centuries and kill so many thousands, which most Yautja are never strong enough to accomplish.
If I see any other predators get their gear captured by an inferior species I will consider them dishonorable and will not let their dishonor taint me. If they do not reclaim their gear by their own resolve I will honor dual that bad-blood trash to the death.

Why should we whitelist you?

I have been on CM since it started and while just hanging around does not mean much. I roleplay roles in variety and understand every role of the server. I have also played all non-whitelisted roles on the server competently. With lately doctoring and I really like the directions and changes going on, and basically want to do more on the server. I don't ever have any malicious intentions and always try correcting myself as well as trying to make it fun for any party involved even if that means I die or suffer horribly, and hope I can do that with pred also!

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Yes, I was banned for 3 hours last month.


Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No


Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes

[Avalanchee]

The name man, the name

[Shyguychizzy]

Im gonna give full review of it the name is questionable yes it is highly of different but seems not serious. I want give me full input till later note after others have conferred their opnions then give full perspective of mine for now. I stand neutral for now just by the looks it be leanin towards -1.

[x31stOverlord]

At age 8 zaz'fot' got his first kill against a Xenomorph-Queen, 'zaz'fot' was inexperienced and caught in a trap! Unmasked, unarmored and without weapons, grasping two of her leaping children in each hand, an enraged zaz'fot' beat the Xenomorph-Queen to death with her own children in each hand, taking her skull as a trophy. Everyone in clan Ra'u-Hi knew that he was something special and their god had smiled upon them that day.

No. Sorry, just no.

-1

Story was bordering on meme status.

Account was made a year back with only 17 posts to the name. I have absolutely never seen you in game personally.

Overall, no. Try to make a backstory that doesnt paint your pred as some sort of god. Make yourself more recognisable in game. Get active on the forums. Read accepted pred apps for ideas.

[Taumanta1]

No. Sorry, just no.

-1

Story was bordering on meme status.

Account was made a year back with only 17 posts to the name. I have absolutely never seen you in game personally.

Overall, no. Try to make a backstory that doesnt paint your pred as some sort of god. Make yourself more recognisable in game. Get active on the forums. Read accepted pred apps for ideas.

Uh, think you just double-posted. Might wanna delete the second one.

In regards to the predator app, no. If I remember correctly, this pred apparently killed a xeno queen at the age of fucking eight.

Say it with me now:
Mary Sue
-1, get it together mate.

EDIT: Not only was it at the age of eight, it was UNARMED, UNARMOURED, CAUGHT IN A TRAP AND WITH THE SLAIN CORPSES OF OTHER XENOMORPHS.

[DeusMortis]

While the idea of a Pred who's gung-ho about honor is amusing, it doesn't make up for the bio. As already stated, your character seems to be written to make him seem like a Demigod amongst the Yautja. Taking on a Xenomorph Queen is no small feat and for good reason. Being able to kill one at the age of 8 all while doing it by using two xenomorph bodies to act as hammers is just...what?

I've seen you around every now and then and can't remember anything negative at the top of my head.

App doesn't give me enough to trust you on being a good Pred that would deliver good rp and a good gameplay experience.

-1

[Sambalu]

I haven't seen you around at all, and the part of your story about killing the queen just seemed unrealistic.
Predators may be strong, but they wouldn't be able to kill a xenomorph queen that easily (at least lore-wise). Combined withthe fact that your predator has over 4000 kills, it just seems like he's a mary sue.
Your forum activity is also pretty low.
I'm going to have to go with a -1.

[Kavlo]

Jesus Christ this application is bad.

-1

[z a n e b o t]

Jesus Christ this application is bad.

-1

Pretty much that -1

[NGGJamie]

Denied

Your character is the embodiment of the Mary Sue trope.