Aracino - R'kaa

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Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Aracino » 20 Aug 2018, 21:29

Byond ID: Aracino

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Arac Mahan, though I often play xeno.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): R'kaa Kvasha

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes. I've read it over thoroughly.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
While no style is set in stone, this recently made young blood is finding what works best for them. Their arsenal will vary as they refine their skills and get used to their tools of the hunt. Though the true defining feature of my predator will be what they do after their hunt. After collecting an appropriate amount of trophys and game, I'll emote making the remains into a meal for either myself or other predators that may be with me at the time. The methods in which I gather the "ingredients" will be similar to finding someone worthy of being a memory shared by R'kaa and the other young bloods he hunts with. Potentially even offering some of his craft to worthy opponents if they manage to best him in combat. Though this is all interchangeable as I've no idea how this play style will work out if I'm properly whitelisted, this is what I'm mainly striving for.

Why should we whitelist you?
I feel like I'm rather good roleplayer and that R'kaa can bring something unique to the current predator line up. Ritualistic food preparation in addition to the trophys I'll be gathering from worthy foes is absent from the current predators, as food is likely and under appreciated craft when it comes to rp. Two warriors bloody and battle scarred, sharing a meal in the feed hall made of their foes' remains, something that can grow the bond between hunters as a solemn respect for their worthy opponents.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? I am not.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Boltersam » 23 Aug 2018, 09:10

(Review made at the request of the applicant.)

Preface

The beginning will be using the old style of nitpicking, and while there are some valid criticisms there, I discovered that this app is most certainly not indicative of the applicant, and explain this later on. I spoke extensively with Aracino via discord in order to ask questions, and I believe that in order to make an accurate account of the player's suitability for the whitelist, speaking with them for additional information not contained in the app is absolutely necessary.

Backstory

The story isn't very notable for either great quality, or being abysmal. The quirk of the clan having a focus on cooking skill is unique, but while it's important to flesh out the clan a bit, the story spends far too much time on it rather than tying in playstyle details with a story, or expanding upon the character's mindset or emotions. There are minor spelling and grammar mistakes, but not as much to harp on.

The story's more or less a small change from the norm. It shows the immediate aftermath of the predator's first serpent hunt. The immediate aftermath being a bake off is certainly different, but it, as mentioned before, doesn't have much of import in it. The side note of serpent hunts being disregarded if the meals they cook aren't up to par is a nice clan detail, though.

There's a small bit about fear and how it's bad, but it's not important and could have been replaced.

In the end, the story's very bland, and the little space it does take up isn't used for much.

Playstyle

The quirk is used further here. That's good, but the applicant should have actually explained what they would at least try as their playstyle, until finding something better. This is usually an underused section of the application, and that's no different here.

Other

This bit's going to be very long.

I talked with the applicant. If I had based the entire review on the app, I'd have gone into further detail in the other sections, and given it a -1. The applicant has put a lot of thought into how they want to perform as a predator, and how they intend to move forward if they are accepted. As I am told, they kept the app so short and empty of important detail because they were afraid of making it too long.

I've said this before, but there's never been a better time. There is no such thing as "Too long" on a pred app. If you pack in everything that's important and trim the fat, there's only "Just long enough".

The applicant has a general understanding of how to operate as a predator from watching whitelisted players. I presented example scenarios, and they answered very well. The app is, again, not indicative at all of the applicant's understanding of how to play as a predator. Without going into detail, they intend to play conservatively, avoiding causing too much interference in a round. They've put thought into when and how to hunt or duel, particularly in attempting fairness and lowering their own power as much as possible to match their opponents.

The applicant does intend to not only change how they do things OOCly, via learning from their own experiences, but also to attempt to show tangible growth with their character. ICly learning and developing from a newly minted hunter to a more experienced warrior.

I know for a fact that I've likely misrepresented the applicant here, and greatly underselled their intentions and planning. If anyone intends to review this application, I recommend once more to speak with the applicant, ask them questions, and even present example scenarios. At least for me, their answers were definitely satisfactory.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Aracino » 23 Aug 2018, 09:15

Boltersam wrote:
23 Aug 2018, 09:10
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Thanks for the review. I suppose it depends on the person you talk to for what they're looking for in an app. I did feel like I could have elaborated more in the "how I intend to play" section keeping it too brief and focusing on the gimmick rather than my actual understanding of playing predators and how I intend to play while actually hunting. If anyone wants any questions answered either ask me here or PM me on discord (Aracino is my discord name too) and I'll happily speak with you about this.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Mvp777 » 23 Aug 2018, 09:33

While the story is average in some respects, the quirk is something completely different and fairly unique, not something i expected to see at all honestly.

I trust in Boltersam's judgement of your aptitude for being a predator though, so i'm going with a +1
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Okand37 » 23 Aug 2018, 12:31

Tasty with a twist. +1
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by TheMaskedMan2 » 25 Aug 2018, 02:24

I'm actually a big fan of this, unique, well put together, a quirk that actually seems like it would help RP and is unique.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Karmac » 25 Aug 2018, 03:21

I've already spoken with the applicant about this and I'm sticking with a +1, I thoroughly approve of the mentality behind the application and look forward to seeing them in game.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Kavlo » 25 Aug 2018, 09:29

Overall this is a good application. I don't see any glaring problems with it.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Avalanchee » 25 Aug 2018, 09:32

Yeah this stuff is good, I like it.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Aracino » 25 Aug 2018, 09:34

Thanks for the feedback and support everyone! Like I said earlier, if you have any questions as to how I'll play don't be shy to bring them up here or message me on discord.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Ghostdex » 25 Aug 2018, 13:00

I like the application and the quirk is something new. I think you’ll be able to bring something good to the table, +1.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Symbiosis » 26 Aug 2018, 14:22

Very well written - and a unique twist. Don’t need to say anything that was already said, so +1 from me.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by spartanbobby » 26 Aug 2018, 14:38

+1
I enjoyed the story, the player is active the avatar is old but it checks out and on top of all that I'm pretty hungry for something other than stew and cold meat.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Jayfeather » 27 Aug 2018, 07:17

I’d hope to eat the food this Chef Rams- R’Kaa serves. On a serious note, a very great roleplayer. He’s also quite a bit of an ancient boy amongst the community. The quirk is unique and unusual, but something fresh to the table is always nice...no pun intended. Also, excellent story telling is a bonus to show the quirk off.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by GoliathTheDespoiler » 28 Aug 2018, 08:39

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Aracino » 28 Aug 2018, 09:05

GoliathTheDespoiler wrote:
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by z a n e b o t » 30 Aug 2018, 07:37

Good story, no problems with the app.

It's a +1 from me chief.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Bancrose » 31 Aug 2018, 10:07

Real Solid player that I know, I just saw him RP as a hellhound and his grasp of the predator gameplay was pretty good.

Also known to RP well.

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Sailor Dave » 01 Sep 2018, 13:21

+1
I think the playstyle is charming, and outside of the app, I trust Aracino's ability to play predator positively and considerately.
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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Loco52 » 01 Sep 2018, 22:05

I've never seen this guy play but this app is solid and the rest seem to give good feedback about his IG gameplay.
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Post by DriedMilk » 02 Sep 2018, 03:04

Filthy xeno main but a good boi.

Also good app

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Re: Aracino - R'kaa

Post by Emeraldblood » 02 Sep 2018, 13:49

Resolved - Accepted; Whitelist will be updated soon.
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