Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

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Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Jayfeather » 26 Aug 2018, 07:07

Byond ID:
Jayfeather

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Jay 'Old' Wings

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I've taken much of my time to read it both on the CM forum link, and on the AVP wiki. I've got a good handle on it, and I'll never be afraid to review it in a brisk manner every time I decide to join the hunt, particularly on my first month or so.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I'd hope to have a very maelable Yautja. The most notable thing I won't stray from though, is the act of brute force with more armor to back it up.

I would also prefer melee weapons by far above ranged weaponry, and mild use of traps for when faced with prey faster then his own two feet. The clan sword would be my go-to for most cases unless I felt a need to change things a bit.

Another notable thing is the fact that the Predator likes solitude when he isn't currently stalking prey, he will very rarely converse with humans and his own kin unless it was something very important. Prey claiming, potential Abomination risk
from a captured predator, dishonorable prey and the death of another Yautja will most likely pull a response out of him. Most of his communications will be either by custom emotes or very few words by mouth or translator.

I also would tend to avoid use of the camouflage, as said earlier, I would rely off armor over the wrist-camogen unless stealth is REQUIRED in a high action zone. IE: Risking to board the Almayer to retrieve a Yautja corpse or gear if it's really important or escaping an ambush from dishonorable prey who he knows he can't handle with sword and his armor alone.

One last thing would be the fact that my Predator tends to enjoy studying, training and occasional research. So long times of observation of notable prey, hunters, or taking lessons from far more experienced Yaujta would be quite fun to attempt to Role play out.

Why should we whitelist you?
I've played Colonial Marines since the Nostromo and Gamma Green Squad days. I've had very little to no conflict with the staff and the rule set of the server. I've always enjoyed role playing as something very unique whenever I got the chance too. I will admit that it's always been my goal to go for this since the predator's arrival within the server, but I've never had the time until now to make an application.

Admittedly, I am a very little known figure in the Colonial Marines community. I tend not to post on the forums. I do speak quite constantly when I'm on the Discord, now that I've rejoined it lately. But I'd hope to change that by my gameplay later on as either my marine, or potentially by predator.

Most importantly, I happen to enjoy roleplaying any situation that presents itself or any unique role that I'm given.

I will also be happy to answer any questions given to me about my application.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Nope!

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Not any server as far as I know!

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I completely understand.
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Epic_Charger » 27 Aug 2018, 02:05

I've known Jay for quite some time now. He's got experience handling roles within games that require a certain level of maturity, and restraint. I know he's acted as an admin before for other SS13 servers, and in my opinion, handled it well. I admit I'm curious on how he'll manage good RPing opportunities when his character design is one of isolation, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It means when confronted with conversation, he might handle it in a more unique way than most. Anyways I believe he'd make a fine predator; he's got the maturity to not abuse it, has the skills for the combat typically (We all have our unrobust days), and has the experience of roleplaying for it.

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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Aracino » 27 Aug 2018, 05:50

The story was eh, but honestly I don't care about that when it comes to Jay. I've seen Jay in game, rped with him a decent bit. I honestly think Jay could do well in a predator role as he obviously knows what it takes to HRP something like this. The play style seems a bit meh, but like I said I don't think play style should limit this application. I think Jay can bring something good to the whitelist. +1
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by GoliathTheDespoiler » 28 Aug 2018, 07:45

Heyo Jay, apologies for the late post, but here's my review:

From what I've seen of this, you've pretty much done exactly what's asked of you. If I'd be honest you seem to have downplayed your position in the community Jay, as you are (imo) a common person to find on both the server and on discord. You're a pleasure to play with and an excellent roleplayer (when you choose to be).

As for the story you posted, you've done one thing which I want all future predator applications to be:

S H O R T.

I feel a large reason many predator players don't actually comment/review some of these applications is because the stories are too fucking long. But I'm glad yours is not.

You aren't meant to be writing a novel, or anything of the sort, just trying to show that you are competent with the medium, understand most of the lore, and are capable of making something that sounds like it could translate to roleplay well. I'm pretty fond of your story, actually, though it lacks any real 'information' other than your predator's theme, it does not explore their personality, fighting style, etc. But those can be discovered during play/adjusted based on what you feel like doing for that particular round.

Probably the largest gripe I have with this app is just the name of your pred. It's not even that it isn't 'predatory' or whatnot, it's just that it's so edgy. It's not a complaint, but something that kinda reminds me of the Le'Pro default predator name.

Overall, I'd love to have you join the hunt, and I look forward to you being disappointed by the lack of craftable shit preds have.
+1
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by DriedMilk » 02 Sep 2018, 03:15

I've seen you RP extremely well alot of times.

And the story isn't a pain in the ass to read.

Yeah ok retard cool

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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Jayfeather » 02 Sep 2018, 17:07

I thank all the folks on the above for their kind support and thoughts, particularly from Goliath, whom I consider my inspiration for my attempt here. I hope to see more feedback and criticism soon though!

PS: Sorry Goliath, the name was a randomized one. Heheh.
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by GoliathTheDespoiler » 02 Sep 2018, 22:50

Jayfeather wrote:
02 Sep 2018, 17:07
PS: Sorry Goliath, the name was a randomized one. Heheh.
I am hunta deff, im made of red and black spikes can use magic and am perfect at speaking all languageses

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Commander Joseph 'Goliath' Clancy, occaisonal Charlie SL. Widowed father of three. Sufferer of PTSD and extremely Australian.
Corpswoman Judith 'Mèrci' Clancy, quiet, caring daughter looking out for her siblings.
Warrant Officer Emile Clancy, Strict ex-police chief, now a tired CMP.
Xenomorph Queen 'Pandinus' ruler of the Alpha Hive. "I want more children!"
'R'ka Us'Tribi' Serpent Trapper, hateful predator.

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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by spartanbobby » 14 Sep 2018, 19:02

Insanely active on discord, you kick around the server pretty often but I'd really like to see that forum activity up
I'll come back to this a little later
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Post by Drownie » 14 Sep 2018, 19:10

Goalith burned it, yeah sure +1
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by NescauComToddy » 18 Sep 2018, 15:50

The size of your app even being smaller than most, does not mean in any way quality. I liked how you intend to be quieter, and use more of ordinary acts to communicate. This is something I would love to see during future gameplay.

As incredible as it sounds, usually as demonstrated in your app, small backgrounds are usually the best, and yours is not an exception. I liked how your character is described during it, and that is enough for me.

You are a decent, active and memorable player, besides being able to practice good RP. Definitely look forward to seeing you in the hunt. +1
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Ghostdex » 25 Sep 2018, 18:33

I remember the round where you were the pyro spec and I was the scout spec, good times. I remember your character for good reasons, and your application is far from terrible I’ll +1 it. Just get your forum activity up plzkthx.
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Jayfeather » 25 Sep 2018, 18:38

Lotta approval from the folks here. Thanks friends. And yes, I do promise to post more on thy forums. I just like discord too much. Heheh.
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by spartanbobby » 25 Sep 2018, 18:40

Jayfeather wrote:
25 Sep 2018, 18:38
Lotta approval from the folks here. Thanks friends. And yes, I do promise to post more on thy forums. I just like discord too much. Heheh.
spartanbobby wrote:
14 Sep 2018, 19:02
Insanely active on discord, you kick around the server pretty often but I'd really like to see that forum activity up
I'll come back to this a little later
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Earraigh » 26 Sep 2018, 11:18

My gaming experience with Jay both inside and outside of CM is most enjoyable. He's a decent roleplayer and a nice person overall.

+1 and a straight manly kiss.
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 26 Sep 2018, 11:37

Not a shitlord, would trust him with it, give him a shot.
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Post by Survivor » 26 Sep 2018, 16:08

+1, he is a good player for pred.
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Jayfeather » 27 Sep 2018, 11:36

Survivor wrote:
26 Sep 2018, 16:08
+1, he is a good player for pred.
ThesoldierLLJK wrote:
26 Sep 2018, 11:37
Not a shitlord, would trust him with it, give him a shot.
+1
Earraigh wrote:
26 Sep 2018, 11:18
My gaming experience with Jay both inside and outside of CM is most enjoyable. He's a decent roleplayer and a nice person overall.

+1 and a straight manly kiss.
spartanbobby wrote:
25 Sep 2018, 18:40


+1
Thanks folks! And particularly thanking Bobby for being my first council +1. I eagerly await more feedback and votes of confidence from the community.
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Post by ChengChan » 27 Sep 2018, 18:21

A great guy and good roleplayer. Good luck, buddy. +1
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by GoliathTheDespoiler » 27 Sep 2018, 20:19

I couldn't stop myself.

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I have a problem.
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Corpswoman Judith 'Mèrci' Clancy, quiet, caring daughter looking out for her siblings.
Warrant Officer Emile Clancy, Strict ex-police chief, now a tired CMP.
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'R'ka Us'Tribi' Serpent Trapper, hateful predator.

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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Jayfeather » 27 Sep 2018, 20:24

GoliathTheDespoiler wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 20:19

I have a problem.
W-what is this...abomination, Goliath? What hath you done?
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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by GoliathTheDespoiler » 27 Sep 2018, 20:26

Jayfeather wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 20:24
W-what is this...abomination, Goliath? What hath you done?
BEHOLD HUNTA DEFF. LORD OF EDGY ARMOR PLATING.
Commander Joseph 'Goliath' Clancy, occaisonal Charlie SL. Widowed father of three. Sufferer of PTSD and extremely Australian.
Corpswoman Judith 'Mèrci' Clancy, quiet, caring daughter looking out for her siblings.
Warrant Officer Emile Clancy, Strict ex-police chief, now a tired CMP.
Xenomorph Queen 'Pandinus' ruler of the Alpha Hive. "I want more children!"
'R'ka Us'Tribi' Serpent Trapper, hateful predator.

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Re: Jayfeather's Predator Application - Hun'tath-Deth (Lone Armorer)

Post by Symbiosis » 29 Sep 2018, 06:53

I said I'd give you a +1 if you were active... and you've fulfilled the bill! +1 from me.
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Post by Imperator_Titan » 29 Sep 2018, 06:56

+1,

Good application.

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Post by Emeraldblood » 29 Sep 2018, 14:13

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