Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

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Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Vampmare » 02 Sep 2018, 17:59

Byond ID:
Vampmare

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Tyrone ‘Legs’ Keeper and Edmund ‘King’ Crawford

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name):
Grey

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (http://www.colonial-marines.com/viewtop ... 57&t=14417)?
Yes, I've read them a few times.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?
I would explain my quirk as Debbie Downer. I will be employing sad comments about the situation or life, as long as they do not interfere with the guidelines and hopefully they will seem somewhat funny in an OOC perspective. The operation could be going well, we’re winning and I’ll start throwing out some comments about our casualties and the amount of lives it cost to get here.

I’ll assist wherever I’m needed, but with the ability to choose, I would pick Engineering or Overwatch. I know these areas very well, so I can auto-pilot them and focus more on the roleplaying aspect of Synthetic.
I also intend to play some more doctor in the coming days, so that I have basic knowledge of how to do surgery.

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)
My best is around Engineering or Overwatch. I know those two better than my own mother at times.

Science and Medical would be lowest points. I have played a fair deal of field medic, so I have no problem stabilizing patients, but I haven’t tried actual surgery yet. Surgery shouldn’t be a major issue for me though, as I have played a lot of doctor on other servers, so I just need a little assistance from the wiki.

Cargo is fairly simple, so yeah, I know it.

Why should we whitelist you?
I focus on roleplaying and intend to give other people the experience of my character. I like trying new things and I figured that synthetic was the next step in the line, so I looked at the whitelist and saw a bunch of cheerful and happy synths. An idea started forming and I figured it might be fun. My characters may be eccentric, but it seems others enjoy them and that’s what is most important for me. I have certainly improved my activity since my last synthetic application and I still yearn for that robotic roleplaying. I may not be the best at writing stories, but saying that I do not put everything into my characters would be a lie.

I'll do my best to make the round enjoyable for those interacting with me.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Was banned for EORG when I first joined the server two years or so ago. Been pretty much clean since then.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
Yes, of course.

Thank you for taking the time to read my application.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Sulaboy » 02 Sep 2018, 18:19

I got a little problem with the name, but that might just be me. The way the story was presented was pretty good, and it had a hearty helping of dialogue shlwing off your synth's quirk. Your quirk is original and could work ingame if played correctly. However I can't support this application because of the lack of experience with medical roles, it's quite a major part of a synthetic's duties. Get some time as Doctor under your belt to get a handle on how medbay works and a better understanding of the medical system. If I see you playing some more Doctor I'd be willing to flip on this.

Edit: I saw you as Doctor perform a pretty complex surgery. I'd like the think that signifies your knowledge of our surgical system. +1
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 02 Sep 2018, 18:27

Story is fine as is your RP abilities
Your quirk sounds pretty much like Marvin from Hitch Hikers guide to the galaxy.

The name is a little questionable but I mean there was a synth named “Ash”

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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Jakkkk » 03 Sep 2018, 00:17

"I haven't done any surgery"

-1.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Vampmare » 03 Sep 2018, 02:02

ThesoldierLLJK wrote:
02 Sep 2018, 18:27
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Sulaboy wrote:
02 Sep 2018, 18:19
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Jakkkk wrote:
03 Sep 2018, 00:17
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I'll say thank you for the feedback. I googled a little around beforehand and it is somewhat common to be named Grey/Gray as a first name. A recent synth was also accepted with Goldman, but I understand that we don't want to encourage weird names.

It is correct that I haven't played doctor on CM yet, but it is the only role I play when I play/played normal SS13. Of course it is a little different here, but I will be playing more doctor and I know how most of it work. I only need the wiki for the correct steps with tools in surgery. I've played field medic extensively, so I know the chems.

I'll respond back once I have played enough games to know the surgeries by memory.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Vampmare » 08 Sep 2018, 18:03

Sulaboy wrote:
02 Sep 2018, 18:19
-snip-
Jakkkk wrote:
03 Sep 2018, 00:17
-snip-
Sorry for the double post here, but I have taken the feedback to heart and managed to grind Doctor out this week. I can now comfortably say that the only thing I have to use the wiki for is Chemistry, so no marines is going to burst under my hand.

I should probably have played Doctor before I made the application and it may make me seem a little unserious, but hopefully this proves otherwise. I have come to enjoy being Doctor now that I've tried it and it's not too different from my doctoring on normal SS13.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Survivor » 10 Sep 2018, 21:18

He can clearly roleplay, and given the fact that he has grinded out doctor lately shows that he truly has interests in the whitelist.


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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Avalanchee » 17 Sep 2018, 01:48

Imagine Kestrel Han and Brad Silver having a child,
That's Tyrone,

Literally God of engineering.
I saw him play as a doctor last week, he can definitely turn a deadbay to a medbay.

+1 can RP, good knowledge of the game
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Jakkkk » 17 Sep 2018, 15:50

I can +1 this now, your whole application shouldn't be disregarded because of a simple mistake that you did end up fixing.
Olaf's dossier: viewtopic.php?f=91&t=16128
Mortimer: viewtopic.php?f=149&t=16195
Xarvis Ut'ur-era: viewtopic.php?f=124&t=17817

Synthetic Council Term One, along with Sleepy Retard and MattAtlas.

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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Solarmare » 18 Sep 2018, 04:18

Seemed to gotten over things in regards to medical, not many other issues with the app. The quirk could add as well if down well en9ugh and you show you know how for do it in the story. Help give this app +1.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Vampmare » 18 Sep 2018, 14:25

Thanks for the positive responses, I really appreciate it.

Have a nice day.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Sleepy Retard » 18 Sep 2018, 14:26

yeah ok neutral
i have nothing to say besides what has been said before

i will watch for a bit more
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by MattAtlas » 18 Sep 2018, 14:39

You're a pretty good dude and I don't wanna be a parrot, so I won't repeat what's already been said. You're cool at roleplaying, so what else do you want in a synth player? +1
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Omicega » 19 Sep 2018, 10:45

I had you as a CMO earlier this week and wound up never being fully treated as a random name PFC after about 45 minutes to 1 hour of waiting in medbay before the dropship crashed and xenos finished me off. Your bald doctors (and they were pretty awful) aside, I distinctly remember being half-treated by you only to come back and complain that all my organs were still broken -- you told me to piss off and then MPs got involved and made everything very messy.

I'm certain that you're capable of the RP aspect of the role, but as a synthetic if you do make a mistake with something like surgery (it happens and nobody's ever going to be dewhitelisted for honest mistakes) you can't just tell the person in question to get out of your face when they come back and let you know their kidneys are still made out of soupy mush.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Vampmare » 19 Sep 2018, 11:24

Omicega wrote:
19 Sep 2018, 10:45
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I think I remember what you're talking about. I'm assuming you were the medic that ran around knowingly with a broken skull because one of bald doctors didn't splint it? Watching you deliberately run back and forth with a broken skull had me a little triggered with an already filled Medbay at evacuation. I know that Medbay is a boring place to be for everyone not a doctor and that's why I try to heal people and get them out for gameplay as fast as possible. I may have gone too fast here and this caused some unnecessary problems, I apologize. In my defense, it's the first time and likely only time, I've ever told someone to fuck off from Medbay.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by SovietKitty » 25 Sep 2018, 16:30

We've had some banter in the past, both good and bad on Discord, and I think in game. In spite of this, I think you are a competent player and despite having 0 medical knowledge, I believe you capable with the mysterious power of google, and reading comprehension. Your activity is certainly not in question, and I've seen you both as xeno, marine, and, occasionally, not marine. I think you also have the restraint to deal with the ridiculous jerks you'll be getting in Medbay. (Seriously, as a synth some people will try to xd meme you. It's not that common.)

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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Sleepy Retard » 25 Sep 2018, 18:37

+1 learned engineering
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Emeraldblood » 26 Sep 2018, 21:23

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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Vampmare » 27 Sep 2018, 14:26

I'll say another round of thanks.

All feedback is welcome and appreciated.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by ChengChan » 27 Sep 2018, 18:24

A great player and competent at all. Good luck, Buddy.
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Re: Vampmare - Deployment file of "Grey"

Post by Emeraldblood » 29 Sep 2018, 14:17

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