Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

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Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by z a n e b o t » 27 Sep 2018, 07:06

Byond ID: z a n e b o t

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Randal Wilkerson

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name): Zane
Examples of acceptable names: James, Mason, Xavier, Felix, Otto, Allan, Jessica
Examples of unacceptable names: Obama, Jesus, King, Dragon, Godly, Snyper, Circuits

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (http://www.colonial-marines.com/viewtop ... 57&t=14417)? Yes, I have read it.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)? I'd like to play my Synth as a sort of "wise experienced" father type figure. Always telling the marines stories, acting sort of as father figure so of course throwing in "dad jokes" is going to be apart of it. The roles I'll most likely focus on is medical and engineering, seeing as that's what I enjoy to play mostly, although I'm fine with anything.

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO) I'm familiar with every role, Requisitions being the least I have experience with. I used to main MT for a while so I'm very familiar with engineering, and I played doctor a lot in the past so I'm -ok- with medical. I've played a lot of command recently so I'm familiar in that regard.

Why should we whitelist you? Being a long term player, I've always wanted to try out synth and take on that aspect of the server. Being predator whitelisted, I hope that can vouch for my roleplaying abilities.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline? Yes.

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 27 Sep 2018, 07:37

Way to not format it and hurt my eyes retard.

I think the dad synth would work, because since Vortex started the mom synth quirk, they have had some success with it.

Plus Zane isn’t a shitlord and the story was fine

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by Bancrose » 27 Sep 2018, 07:43

Dadbot 2.0

"I'm sick of these marines retreating!"

"Hi sick of these marines retreating, I'm dad!"

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by MattAtlas » 27 Sep 2018, 07:44

I like the dad quirk ngl. It seems pretty fuckin good and the stories are a nice touch. Story is good + you're a pred player.

The lack of formatting has an effect equal to stabbing my eyes but it's cool. I'll toss you a +1.
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by VortexGaming » 27 Sep 2018, 08:14

Good app, good player. I can give this one a +1
I better hear a lotta Dad jokes.
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by ChengChan » 27 Sep 2018, 10:30

Good app and competent. +1 good luck, buddy.
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by z a n e b o t » 27 Sep 2018, 13:43

VortexGaming wrote:
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Good app, good player. I can give this one a +1
I better hear a lotta Dad jokes.
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by JennerH » 27 Sep 2018, 14:07

Good app, good player, +1
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Post by Ghostdex » 27 Sep 2018, 14:44

The formatting hurts but you can pull this off without being a shitter +1.
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by Omicega » 27 Sep 2018, 16:00

Even in a vacuum the app is good, although nothing stellar.

The impression I get of you as a player is kind of like a Sleepy clone -- capable of the RP level required of synth and other roleplay-focused roles but not really one to show it. You got a pred whitelist and haven't had it stripped yet, though, so I guess that's a testament to the fact that you can pull off being more serious when you want to.

You're also eminently competent across the board AFAIK, so zero issues there.

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by SovietKitty » 27 Sep 2018, 16:52

Zane has the reputation of a rabid memer, but I know they can pull out some roleplay chops.

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by DriedMilk » 27 Sep 2018, 18:17

Zane is a good boi and good bois get +1.

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by Jakkkk » 27 Sep 2018, 21:40

Besides the lame formatting, this was kinda good. I'd say that you can't keep a serious character but you're pred whitelisted, and all my experiences with you in a serious role have been positive.

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by z a n e b o t » 27 Sep 2018, 22:01

Bancrose wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 07:43
Dadbot 2.0

"I'm sick of these marines retreating!"

"Hi sick of these marines retreating, I'm dad!"

+1
MattAtlas wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 07:44
I like the dad quirk ngl. It seems pretty fuckin good and the stories are a nice touch. Story is good + you're a pred player.

The lack of formatting has an effect equal to stabbing my eyes but it's cool. I'll toss you a +1.
ChengChan wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 10:30
Good app and competent. +1 good luck, buddy.
JennerH wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 14:07
Good app, good player, +1
ghostdex wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 14:44
The formatting hurts but you can pull this off without being a shitter +1.
Omicega wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 16:00
Even in a vacuum the app is good, although nothing stellar.

The impression I get of you as a player is kind of like a Sleepy clone -- capable of the RP level required of synth and other roleplay-focused roles but not really one to show it. You got a pred whitelist and haven't had it stripped yet, though, so I guess that's a testament to the fact that you can pull off being more serious when you want to.

You're also eminently competent across the board AFAIK, so zero issues there.

+1
SovietKitty wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 16:52
Zane has the reputation of a rabid memer, but I know they can pull out some roleplay chops.

+1
Jakkkk wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 21:40
Besides the lame formatting, this was kinda good. I'd say that you can't keep a serious character but you're pred whitelisted, and all my experiences with you in a serious role have been positive.

+1.
ThesoldierLLJK wrote:
27 Sep 2018, 07:37
Way to not format it and hurt my eyes retard.

I think the dad synth would work, because since Vortex started the mom synth quirk, they have had some success with it.

Plus Zane isn’t a shitlord and the story was fine

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by Survivor » 27 Sep 2018, 22:25

I've seen him around, he is pretty competent. Plus he can roleplay, so he has my vote.


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Post by Sleepy Retard » 28 Sep 2018, 03:10

As Omi said, you're pretty much just me but weaker.

The format is fine. The story is written well enough, the content of it works and the quirk has sorta been done before but it's a completely excellent one so I have no reason to -1 for that.

Regarding his RP which is definitely something that could be construed as the weakest point of the app, most would assume it to be LRP. I think the 'LRP' of pulling shit, being the dullest knife in the drawer, and a bit of a shit poster is exactly what most people from the military are, shit posters with guns. He's able to perform the role of a true marine correctly, without the whole dabbing every two seconds and spewing genuine memes.

When it comes to more serious roles, he can do that well, given his predator app.

He's played every role on the block so no issues there

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Post by Emeraldblood » 29 Sep 2018, 14:17

This is still pretty new so I'll leave this open a little longer for potential feedback/issues people may have with it. Very much on the track to be accepted, however.
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by Lumdor » 29 Sep 2018, 15:19

What has been said has been said. Zane is a cool guy. +1
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Post by TheDonkified » 30 Sep 2018, 23:02

+1 this story moved me like the titanic movie. i had to ask my mom to emial me a tisue box
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by z a n e b o t » 30 Sep 2018, 23:42

TheDonkified wrote:
30 Sep 2018, 23:02
+1 this story moved me like the titanic movie. i had to ask my mom to emial me a tisue box
Lumdor wrote:
29 Sep 2018, 15:19
What has been said has been said. Zane is a cool guy. +1
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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by driecg36 » 01 Oct 2018, 16:32

SIKE YOU THOUGHT NIGGA -1
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Post by z a n e b o t » 01 Oct 2018, 16:36

driecg36 wrote:
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SIKE YOU THOUGHT NIGGA -1
you stupid RAT

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Re: Z a n e b o t - Zane, arriving aboard the USS Almayer

Post by edgardo » 01 Oct 2018, 16:45

Nice APP but Zane is gay so -1 but i can give another +1 so neutral

Edit: Okay Now, it was a nice app and a good story to talk about also i would really enjoy rounds with the synthetic Zane so a +1 from me
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Post by Mvp777 » 01 Oct 2018, 22:49

Decent application, the more dad jokes the better. +1
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Post by Adralimas » 02 Oct 2018, 09:51

Ye sure +1!
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