Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

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Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by RobBrown4PM » 24 Nov 2018, 18:04

Byond ID: RobBrown4PM

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Roberto 'Taco' Moreno'

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Krath’Dormati

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes I am

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

Background on the Kamhara'o'Cetanu
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Krath's first Olq'Lungara (First hunt)
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)? I will play my Yautja as a member of his Kamhara (church) who is looking to obtain honor, knowledge and wisdom from the Olq'Lungara's (hunts) that he participates in. Members of the Kamhara'o'Cetanu sacrifice defeat opponents in an effort to appease and subsequently stave off Cetanu's advances. I would thus sacrifice defeated opponents while performing various IC ceremonies. My Yautja might be at odds with other Yautja IC, as his sect is ill-regarded. It is very much a sect that caters to the unblooded, and it's views on Cetanu are very much at odds with the rest of Yautja society. Maybe something akin to the Mormon's or JW's in Christianity. This does not mean he would be a rival to them. This difference would allow an opportunity for me to RP with my fellow Yautja and show off his Kamhara's views.

Why should we whitelist you? I have been around for a very long time. I am also a staff member, to which I am not trying to use as a one up, however, I do feel comfortable in saying it shows me as being trustworthy and vetted in the community to a degree. I am also on the CO whitelist.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Very much so. So yes.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Imperator_Titan » 25 Nov 2018, 05:35

Decent story, I especially liked the clan segment on it, which was quite insightful and interesting. The playstyle also compliments that. Now while I've rarely been able to see you ingame, I believe you're up to the task.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Karmac » 25 Nov 2018, 08:27

I honestly don't even wanna read the story; it's so pointlessly long and the section about the clan just looks so dumb, I understand the backstory is supposed to compliment the play-style, but I don't really wanna waste the next 10 minutes of my life to figure out how 'is religious' is supposed to be a fleshed out play-style. I genuinely can't bring myself to give this anything better than neutral.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 25 Nov 2018, 12:09

Karmac wrote:
25 Nov 2018, 08:27
I honestly don't even wanna read the story; it's so pointlessly long and the section about the clan just looks so dumb, I understand the backstory is supposed to compliment the play-style, but I don't really wanna waste the next 10 minutes of my life to figure out how 'is religious' is supposed to be a fleshed out play-style. I genuinely can't bring myself to give this anything better than neutral.
Now we’re just nitpicking, he wrote a interesting story and went above and beyond in my opinion

As usual I base these mostly on reputation, but the story was good as well.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by RobBrown4PM » 29 Nov 2018, 12:17

Karmac wrote:
25 Nov 2018, 08:27
I honestly don't even wanna read the story; it's so pointlessly long and the section about the clan just looks so dumb, I understand the backstory is supposed to compliment the play-style, but I don't really wanna waste the next 10 minutes of my life to figure out how 'is religious' is supposed to be a fleshed out play-style. I genuinely can't bring myself to give this anything better than neutral.
Let me help you out. Here's the cole's notes version:

Krath and his clan are members of a specific sect of the cult of Cetanu who's goal it is to stop the death god Cetanu from crossing over in to this world and reaping the souls of all Yautja. The sect is looked upon with rebuke and as an oddity, mainly because ritualistic sacrifices are performed quite regularly and the sect's membership is primarily made up of unblooded adult's

Krath would be capturing and performing ritualistic sacrifices, to which he would make grand and very preachy IC. He would also be doing a lot of IC ceremonies and adhoc preaching/advertising/door to door evangelizing with the other Yautja.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Karmac » 29 Nov 2018, 17:36

Sticking with neutral. Feels like you put more detail into the cult than the predator, which is nice, but also not the point.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by RobBrown4PM » 05 Dec 2018, 17:03

Any chance I could get some more feedback on my app.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Sailor Dave » 07 Dec 2018, 22:56

I like the story, really interesting. I think you can pull off some good stuff with this in-game.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by spartanbobby » 08 Dec 2018, 07:51

I don't see you around too much in-game before I plus one this I'd like to see you more active and around.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by MattAtlas » 08 Dec 2018, 09:25

I've never seen you around, at all, ever, since like September. What gives?
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by RobBrown4PM » 08 Dec 2018, 11:35

MattAtlas wrote:
08 Dec 2018, 09:25
I've never seen you around, at all, ever, since like September. What gives?
I've been around, however I will admit that I've been focusing more on my moderator duties as of late than actually playing. But I have been around. I have just over 47hrs, which isn't a lot compared to some, in November and just over 94 in October.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 10 Dec 2018, 14:52

RobBrown4PM wrote:
08 Dec 2018, 11:35
I've been around, however I will admit that I've been focusing more on my moderator duties as of late than actually playing. But I have been around. I have just over 47hrs, which isn't a lot compared to some, in November and just over 94 in October.
I can confirm that he has as I watch a lot as well, and find him observing rounds many of times.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by KingPhilipIII » 11 Dec 2018, 11:50

I personally ascribe to Soldier's mentality for judging applicants more on their reputation than the fine print on their application, which is a good thing for you.

I feel like we can trust you to do the role proud, and I haven't seen you much lately but that's not too much of a detraction.

I have the same objections to the story as Karmac, I feel like there's too much focus on the cultists than your predator, I make the same mistake, it's just something to be more aware of when you do it.

I actually do appreciate your playstyle, since it doesn't fall victim to a common flaw in predator's playstyles of relying too heavily on uncertain circumstances and the cooperation of players that may just choose to tailstab/shotgun you.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by RobBrown4PM » 11 Dec 2018, 13:52

KingPhilipIII wrote:
11 Dec 2018, 11:50
I personally ascribe to Soldier's mentality for judging applicants more on their reputation than the fine print on their application, which is a good thing for you.

I feel like we can trust you to do the role proud, and I haven't seen you much lately but that's not too much of a detraction.

I have the same objections to the story as Karmac, I feel like there's too much focus on the cultists than your predator, I make the same mistake, it's just something to be more aware of when you do it.

I actually do appreciate your playstyle, since it doesn't fall victim to a common flaw in predator's playstyles of relying too heavily on uncertain circumstances and the cooperation of players that may just choose to tailstab/shotgun you.

+1
Thank you for the critique. My argument to yours, and Karmacs criticism that I focused a lot on his religion is that Krath's religion is the basis to which he acts on. His religion is his foundation, the rules to which he abides and the goals to which he is striving for are all outlined in the story I wrote for the Kamhara'o'Cetanu. I was hoping the background on the religion would compliment Krath's personal story, maybe I didn't imply this all that well?

Thank you kindly.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Avalanchee » 11 Dec 2018, 14:23

I'll go with a +1.

You don't see Taco very often, but when you do he isn't a shithead. He is a competent wingman and a guy you can trust.

There is nothing wrong with the app from my point of view.
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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Ghostdex » 15 Dec 2018, 16:35

Decent app and you’re a guy I can trust +1 from me.

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Re: Krath'Dormati - RobBrown4PM's Predator application

Post by Emeraldblood » 16 Dec 2018, 18:59

Not bad, I could see some good rounds coming from your RP, though we'll see if you're able to pull off everything IC.

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