Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

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Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Dragon2323 » 19 Jun 2015, 16:26

Two Marines have been transferred from Colonial Marines Company "Foxtrot" and said company's fourth platoon, "Phantom Platoon" to Reserve Response Team duty aboard the NMV Sulaco. Names noted from the transfer dossier include one Chief Warrant Officer (CWO-3) Mieszko Hyde, as well as one Warrant Officer (W-1) Kasia Hyde. (Sgt.) LCpl. Crews has been transferred, as well. Dossiers are provided below.

CHIEF WARRANT OFFICER GRADE 3 Mieszko K. Hyde
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WARRANT OFFICER GRADE 1 K. "CADIA" HYDE
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SERGEANT A. "FIREWALL" CREWS
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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Triel Wolfblood » 19 Jun 2015, 16:32

redacted eh

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Dragon2323 » 19 Jun 2015, 16:35

Redacted information signifies laziness of any human being trying to write a character dossier. Writing this on two hours of sleep with a seventy two hour run over... yeah, bad timing. This'll probably be fleshed out further eventually.

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Triel Wolfblood » 19 Jun 2015, 16:36

XD. i wrote mine at midnight

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by SecretStamos (Joshuu) » 21 Jun 2015, 12:15

I really like the format you used. It makes it fun to read.

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Felkvir » 22 Jun 2015, 10:59

Pretty good.



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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Dragon2323 » 22 Jun 2015, 12:50

The incident of which Exile Squad of Phantom Platoon participated in on an unknown planet, and was nearly wiped out due to, has been judged as releasable information to any senior officer attempting requisition. Third party footage from the uplink camera of Lance Corporal Crews, of Phantom Platoon, has been uploaded for inquiry by any senior officer. If any officer recognizes the terrain of the squad's insertion planet, this is information that may be deemed required in the future.

%*###--- ACCESS GRANTED: OPERATION LIONHEART FOOTAGE, PLAYING
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The footage cuts out and fails at that point, a shrill cry of white noise following static overtaking the camera.
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Just a little bit more insight to the incident that forced the transfer of Kasia and Arabelle to the NMV Sulaco. I thought this'd be interesting, and it got me into my narrative mood some again.

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Triel Wolfblood » 23 Jun 2015, 14:41

keep up the good work

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by speedybst » 26 Jun 2015, 07:54

indeed, one of the best i've seen in a year.

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Dragon2323 » 26 Jun 2015, 15:55

Happy to hear that you guys like it. Aside from minor tweaks, there isn't much else I could do, though.

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Butterrobber202 » 26 Jun 2015, 17:07

I want bacon

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Re: Tranfers from Foxtrot's "Phantom Platoon"

Post by Dragon2323 » 23 Jul 2015, 13:10

Sergeant A. Crews has been transitioned to the Reserve platoon onboard the NMV Sulaco after requesting to enter active military duty once more and being waived, expected to make deployment for the operation on Lazarus Landing.
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I figured I might as well do something with him to get this a little updated. Updated Hyde's a bit, too.

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