Nrak'ytara-Sain'ja, the 'Guardian'

[Felkvir]

****IF YOU ARE NOT A DONOR, YOU WILL BE DENIED. This restriction will be lifted 1 month after official launch****
***Pre-Existing Clans from the books/movies are forbidden. You can share Clan-Names with other players, however you need permission from the first to use the clan-name***

Ckey:

Felkvir

Marine Name (so we know who you are):

Nathaniel Estecado

Name of the Character you want whitelisted (As in, the name your predator will use):

Nrak'ytara-Sain'ja

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2693 ?

Aye.

Character background (an RP description as to WHY this character would be in this position, such as Clan information. This will weight HEAVILY on the decision, so make the information count):

Nrak'ytara-Sain'ja, 'Guardian Warrior', often just shortened to Nrak-Sain'ja is a Yautja Elite/Trial overseer from the Thahre clan in the Jayadto region of Yautja Prime.

Hailing from arguably one of the most ancient and respected bloodlines on the planet, Nrak was brought up harshly like any other Yautja, though taken into training at a younger age than others by his own wish. Learning the vital customs and ancient rites from his father, he would be expected to continue passing down the knowledge of everything from the clan's night chivas, blooding ceremonies and everything inbetween for the coming generations.

By the time he was just 100 years old he had already completed his Kiande Amedha trial, coming back with the trophies of 3 serpents which still hang on his trophy collection to this day. For the next 200 years his training periods extended from the common times by large amounts, and through his rigorous practice and local planetary hunting he became notably proficient at mastering Ki'cti-Pa of all kinds, earning more to his growing reputation as a formidable defender in combat. At the age of 400, he completed the Thahre blood oath by cleansing the serpent hive in the region that had been planted by his father Kujhade-Sain'ja, and in the process also earning him his Elite rank. He returned as the honored new among the elites, but there was one of the elites who was not impressed. The Bhrak-Chei master P'kya-Cte had insulted, and even challenged Nrak to a brawl. Nrak naturally agreed, and the brawl was arranged on one of the closer moons to the planet. The fight lasted long. But by contrast Nrak had proven himself stronger and more resilient, and the fight only ended when he left P'kya-Cte crippled. P'kya was shunned as an outcast thereafter, and Nrak left at the approval of an Elder. Years later after these events, Nrak would go on long hunting trips across many different systems hunting a variety of beasts. One of his favorite prey was a swamp dwelling creature bearing serrated teeth and long limbs, known as a Htikayj to the Yautja. Often he hunted with nothing else but the spear given to him by his father.

Adhering to every aspect of his ancestors ways, he has proved himself very capable and served as somewhat of a bastion for discipline and adherence to his clanmates, though still outmatched by some other highly respected elites in this regard. Many of whom he regularly competed with, and graciously lends experience from. Currently, Nrak'ytara-Sain'ja works as an experienced trainer or overseer to the youngbloods. Rumors spread to his hunting brothers, about a planet known as LV-624 to the Oomans, where they have foolishly awakened an ancient serpent hive. Though Nrak is not one to act brashly or suddenly, he won't deny that he misses the good sport...

The thrill of the long hunt!

Why should we white-list you?

I'm a fairly decent roleplayer. Even better roleplaying predator, since i've been doing it with a friend for at least several months sometime back, but also games involving preds (or modding them in), and get their mannerisms down pretty well if i may say so myself. I'm also very unlikely to spawn in a pred every round since i believe they should be a bit rare (or at least not appear before things really heat up in a round.)

Do you understand and know all the server rules, as well as the additional rules assocaited with your specific whitelist job? I understand.

[LordeKilly]

I can't give this a +1 or -1 mainly because I feel like it needs more background, without the spacings inbetween the already short paragraphs, it hardly breaks 8 lines. I feel like it need more fluff, more detail.

As neutral as Switzerland for now.

Also, you're a donor?

EDIT: Giving this a +1, the fluff did help and stuff was cleared up. Good background, good times.

[radicalscorpion]

im liking this one +1

[Felkvir]

Added more fluff. If it's not enough in your opinion still, it's still a good foundation i think nonetheless. And i believe one can add more later to one's background once they get to play on the ground map or otherwise (and it might be easier that way, since we are making custom predator lore here)


Also no, i have not donated. Admins are capable of spawning preds in, but they need to whitelist aswell i believe if they want to play it. Correct me if i'm wrong however, if admins aswell will need to donate. I have been planning to, anyways.

[Lucyz]

Staff can apply without being donators. - Apop.

Just to clear that up.

[SASoperative]

Your staff you don't have to apply. What are you doing here?

[Felkvir]

I don't have to .. This is purely my own wish, as i have mentioned to SAS already it's of symbolic value to me. Mainly for the background, which i will use for my pred and likely take into account his existing skills as i play.

[SASoperative]

Alright so I was wrong.... Staff do have to apply for pred still so I guess my input on this will be +1 for now. I will wait for some more input and come back to this soon and see how it is going before I make my final decision

[Feweh]

+1

Your application gives a good ideal background to your character from young to old. Which is really to read for the average person who isn't familiar with the lore behind Yaujta society.

+ You're pretty mature on the forums and carry yourself quite professionally which is nice.

[SASoperative]

Alright than. This application looks rather good. Accepted.