Byond ID: Apophis775
Marine Name (so we know who you are): Ender Wiggin Erin Kowalski
Name of the character you want whitelisted (As in, the name your predator will use): Entaru Yecht
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2693)? Yes... Yes I am.
Character background (an RP description as to why this character would be in this position, such as clan information. This will weight HEAVILY on the decision, so make the information count):
Entaru Yecht is a law enforcement Adjudicator for the Shiha chan.
In his youth, he was one of the many New Bloods in clan Shiha seeking to prove his worth as a hunter, and gain honor for his clan. He was successful in his first hunt against the hard meat, but was also the only survivor. As a result of passing his trial, he joined the bloodied ranks and spent several decades hunting. Eventually, there was a dispute between clans, when the smaller Kaz clan encroached on the territory of the Shiha clan. Entaru answered the call to battle and fought in the decade long struggle.
Near the end, the smaller clan Kaz knowing that they would never be able to win against the much large Shiha clan sought to use the hard-meat as a weapon by secretly releasing them on the hunting planet used by the Shiha clan to test their unbloodied. While the hard-meat were released as planned, the ship sent to do it, was lost. Many unbloodied warriors of the Shiha clan were killed, when they sought to go through their trials, and ran into the unexpectedly large numbers of hard-meat on the small planet, which had previously kept tight control over the hard-meat population. Following this, veteran hunters were sent to the planet in teams to clean the infestation resulting in the devestation of the planet and the inability to use it as a hunting ground for generations. Additionally, many veteran and elite hunters were lost in the struggle to clean the planet of the hard-meat and regain the honor believed to have been lost, in allowing such a large colony of hard-meat within their own hunting grounds. Entaru however, survived several of the sorties with other hunters. It was in fact, one of the sorties in which he was the lead hunter, that discovered the Kaz clan ship and the dishonorable actions they took. The resulting information, lead to the other Yautja clans declaring the entire clan Kaz a "Bad Blood Clan" and stripped them of their remaining honors. Also, rewarding him for his discovery, he was given the honor of commanding the final battle against the leadership of the Kaz clan, in which all of Kaz clan leaders were slain.
In recognition of the honor he gained during the war Shiha-Kaz war, he was promoted to Adjucator, and given the position of Law Enforcer. His primary goal, being to track down and capture or kill members of the Shiha clan that violate the code of honor. As a result, much of his time is consumed tracking those that would break the code of honor, however, he manages to find time to hunt if the prey is worthy.
Entaru Yecht follows the code of honor closely. His interactions with humans have been minimal, though he recognizes their potential as worthy prey. Primarily, his focus is hard-meat and capturing (or killing if necessary) bad blood Yautja from his clan, so that they can face justice on the homeworld.
Why should we whitelist you? Because, I will play as an honorable Yautja, and continue my efforts to keep CM improving any moving foward.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yuppers.
Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
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Re: Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
We all know this is your predator's real name. Regardless, great story. While most predator stories involve their hunts, yours involves an entire battle consisting of many skirmishes leading to the discovery of a major dishonorable political plot that lead to a cultural cleansing of an entire clan. May more dishonorable clans fall to the Adjudicator, and may all worthy prey find it way to him.apophis775 wrote:Ender Wiggin
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Re: Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
This is pretty good, describing the rise to power of your Yautja.
Also bonus points for making me read this thinking your clan's name was Shiba, like a Shiba Inu. Then I reread it and felt stupid.
Also bonus points for making me read this thinking your clan's name was Shiba, like a Shiba Inu. Then I reread it and felt stupid.
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Re: Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
+1. Nice work.
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Re: Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
+1 not bad at all
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Re: Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
+1
Clearly know your Yaujta lore.
Clearly know your Yaujta lore.
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Re: Entaru Yecht, Adjudicator of clan Shiha.
Accepted. For one I am pretty sure Apop knows how to play as one of these in addition to you really seem to know your lore also. Happy hunting.