M-di Yeyin " No Brave " LastPlaceHero

[LastPlaceHero]

Byond ID: LastPlaceHero

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Saul "Silly Man" Cressman

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): M-di Yeyin " No Brave "

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?

YES

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Still young and naïve, M-di Yeyin's other name was cast aside. Still yet to prove Himself in a hunt he remains on the prowl.
One to observe before he strikes, His opportunity has often slipped his grasp due to his unwillingness to take risks. For now he is of no clan, the others refusing to allow him to return until he has disproven his name. Forsaken to the planet in which he hunts.


How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?

M-di Yeyin will spend most of his time in the shadows. Watching, assessing, and waiting for his opportunity. You will often see him in the shadows of a battle, watching for a victor to challenge. How ever if given the chance, M-di Yeyin would gladly disable any type of ship attempting to leave the planet. They will remain here as long as he will.

Why should we whitelist you?

I enjoy RP and have been playing CM a LONG time, like since back that one time yall tried to update the server, back when we still used old default SS13 station, and you messed up and deleted the whole damn server file. Now this doesn't mean by any means make me some sort of super RP guy but I do know the ropes and I think I would do well as a creepy watching you always predator.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Never banned from CM that I can recall, save ONE time way back when for some reason I do believe I went crazy and TKed people. *I am not sure if this happened or I just got drunk and imagined it*


Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

The 4Chan server for being a dick to them, and Possibly Apollo if they still exist because I know Kwask and we had a falling out, I actually asked him for that ban personally so I wouldn't be tempted to come back and to permanently squash and issue we had.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?

Yes I do and take full responsibility for anything done on this Account / IP / MAC Address

[Killaninja12]

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While your account is older, it's inactive, and this is your first and only post. Your story is short, and isn't well thought out. If you'll take a look at some other applications, you'll see that they have very in depth and fleshed out responses and back story. It honestly more or less appears that you've just taken a few minutes to make an application and threw it out there. If you're truly aiming to become a Predator, spend some time within the community getting known, and get some posts in on the forums. Also, about the application itself, I'd suggest revising, going over some other applications and reading through them to get an idea of how to properly address a backstory, and learn as much as you can about Predators via the Wiki page, then come back and change your application around.

[Feweh]

Ah the good old first post is a predator application.

Besides for that, the application is weak.

-1

[LastPlaceHero]

Main reason I find my story so weak is I wasn't sure what lore to pull from.
what Info I am supposed to be using to base this off of.
I asked for anything pertaining to this and got nothing so I just kinda read what I could find and pulled it out of my ass.

As for forum activity, I don't have anything to bitch about and honestly there is nothing for me to be posting that wouldn't amount to just adding +1 to the post count.

I would have gone all out on the back story but it clearly says BRIEF, how brief is brief? how many words.

Not trying to be a dick but if you want an application that is DayZRP depth style you need to be clear and have clear source info as a guide line.
If getting an application amounts to go out and blow smoke up everyone's back side till they like me sorry I can't help you there.

In closing, I'll wait the few months, put more words in the proper areas ect ect.

How ever I do suggest you take a look at the application process and perhaps give us some sort of context to pull from.
If other apps are my lore book I need to know.

[Varnock]

I used http://avp.wikia.com/wiki/Yautja_%28Predator%29 and several links in that article to write mine, as did several others.

[Feweh]

Main reason I find my story so weak is I wasn't sure what lore to pull from.
what Info I am supposed to be using to base this off of.
I asked for anything pertaining to this and got nothing so I just kinda read what I could find and pulled it out of my ass.

As for forum activity, I don't have anything to bitch about and honestly there is nothing for me to be posting that wouldn't amount to just adding +1 to the post count.

I would have gone all out on the back story but it clearly says BRIEF, how brief is brief? how many words.

Not trying to be a dick but if you want an application that is DayZRP depth style you need to be clear and have clear source info as a guide line.
If getting an application amounts to go out and blow smoke up everyone's back side till they like me sorry I can't help you there.

In closing, I'll wait the few months, put more words in the proper areas ect ect.

How ever I do suggest you take a look at the application process and perhaps give us some sort of context to pull from.
If other apps are my lore book I need to know.

Or you know, you could do that on your own?
Other players were more than capable of making strong applications, yet yours wasn't good because we didn't hold your hand?

Come on.

[LastPlaceHero]

I never said that. I admitted it was weak, I simply stated that your process needs work and to be CLEARER.

However if you want to take it as a fuck you and hand me one then by all means, go sit and spin feweh.

Congrats on the new privileges btw.

Lock the thread, it will prove no further useful ends.