L'ulij-bpe Ikthya-de (Mad Umbra)

[haku231231]

Byond ID: Bryanrich2

Marine Name: My name is never the same. It always change. My RP personality various from character to character. I am always playing with my friend and RP partner, “Narcolepsy” (Who is also “Cannibal Cupcakes”). We haven’t been the center of RP as Marines but we usually always assist during each round. We are even able to survive for a great while when the both of us RP together. We RP mostly everything, sometimes at the cost of our own lives haha. My Yautja is Mad Umbra.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): L'ulij-bpe Ikthya-de (Mad Umbra)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes. Fluently.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): The sun went down with practiced bravado. Twilight crawled across the sky, laden with foreboding. The off-key whistle of winter wind mixes with the hum of midnight’s song. And yet still, something was missing. Something inside. Excavated and hollow. Wide was hole. Loud was the cry. Pitiful was the end. Humans. They are such easy prey.

To my left, a belt littered with trophies, my effects. And to my right? The headless meat hunks of wet cowards and murdered men. Redrum reaches for the stars. Yellow were their bellies. Black was my heart. Feckless neophytes. Did the hairless apes truly believe they could match wit with the likes of me?

The air goes quiet. Quieter than I ever felt it. A chill, deep and jagged, burrows its way into my back. Drills itself into my spine. I would cry if I wasn’t so dehydrated. This hairless ape--no! This honorable prey, stands before me. Weaponless. Hopeless. Fearless. Is it fear or courage that compels it? I am so happy. But all good things must come to an end.

The honorable hunter was a glass cannon. Explosive attack. Fragile everything else. It goes down faster than a Youngling on it’s first Snake Hunt. Half as fast as my eagerness to continue this game. The tolerance for this miserable display of person were dangerously low and my Plasma Caster was empty. No matter. I wash my hands of these chimps. Literally.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? A high ranking Predator. Perhaps Gamma or Delta in terms of Wolf Pack rankings. He and his brother lost their rank and were demoted to Omega (the lowest rank) because they lost themselves to a bloodrage and slaughtered the weak and helpless. Now I must return with new trophies, earned by sticking to the code. Or I myself will be hunted and killed. My head mounted on a stick.

Why should we whitelist you? Because I prefer RP over killing everyone and winning. I will stick to the honor rules and engage people. I will be emulating majority of the actions of the Jungle Predator from the first movie.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? Negative.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Negative.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes.

[Sargeantmuffinman]

The marine name is suppose to be remember-able meaning that we know who you are and how you play but since you don't have one it'll be difficult...

And for the predator thing itself....

Compare it to the works of others and you'll know what I mean.

[haku231231]

I do not know what you mean. Care to illuminate?

[narcolepsy]

The marine name is suppose to be remember-able meaning that we know who you are and how you play but since you don't have one it'll be difficult...

And for the predator thing itself....

Compare it to the works of others and you'll know what I mean.

It's tough to compare it to anyone else when no one else has a sense of narrative.

[forwardslashN]

-1
You registered to make a predator application and that is frowned upon. Your application isn't very good either.

[narcolepsy]

+1
Read through all of the approved applications, don't see one better. I wish people down voting would actually contribute constructive criticism.

[haku231231]

@Noize:

Well there is no way to become a Predator in game. I'm not much of a forum person. I just like to RP. I understand the rules though and stuff though. I understand that forum apps are to weed out the bad RPers from the good RPers so I made the app. You didn't like my story though foreal? Geez. Put a lot of effort into that.

[TR-BlackDragon]

I am going to auto deny this as your account don't meet the required amount of time. You also stated to me in game that you have only been playing the game for I think you said a week / 5 days straight or something like that. You won't be even be known by the most attentive staff or players.

[haku231231]

We've been playing this game for years. We've played your server -off/on- for like two weeks. But we played the game currently for five days straight in a row. That's what I meant by what I said. I mean really the whole "30" days or less thing was to close the cap between bad players and good players. If I can prove I'm not incompetent then why does how long I've played the server have anything to do with it?

[TR-BlackDragon]

Rules are here for a reason. Not to just be bent for someone I have no idea who they are just because they ask me to.

6. Your forum account must be at least 1 month old before submitting an app

[haku231231]

I am Max's complete lack of surprise.

[Feweh]

Denied as stated previously.

Feel free to reapply in 3 months which is adequate time to get your name out there and be active in the community.

Also, do +1 your fellow friends application... it looks stupid.

[narcolepsy]

Omg rofl. What makes it stupid? Style?
Outside of the time played, the only other difference I noticed between ours and the approved applications is that 8/12 of them are admins.

[haku231231]

@Feweh

Actually. I don't think I will be sticking around if players are going to be treated this way. I mean I am not upset or anything. I just find it quite alarming that most of the accepted predator apps are admin, you critique us without telling us what's wrong with our actual app besides "we don't know you", and you all operate like a clique. I did not +1 my friend to be deceitful or whatever you thought I was doing. I was simply following you guys rules on the off key chance that none of you guys knew of us from Pheonix or Shinobi Story or any of the other Byond games we've played for years. We have to be -known- to be allowed to RP something that will probably get smartgunned to death the moment we appear or facefucked by a pair of walking hands? Nah.

I mean geez. People get the smallest iota of power and they go completely bonkers with it.

"Did you like my app?"

"No."

"What's wrong with it?"

"We don't know you."

[Feweh]

@Feweh

Actually. I don't think I will be sticking around if players are going to be treated this way. I mean I am not upset or anything. I just find it quite alarming that most of the accepted predator apps are admin, you critique us without telling us what's wrong with our actual app besides "we don't know you", and you all operate like a clique. I did not +1 my friend to be deceitful or whatever you thought I was doing. I was simply following you guys rules on the off key chance that none of you guys knew of us from Pheonix or Shinobi Story or any of the other Byond games we've played for years. We have to be -known- to be allowed to RP something that will probably get smartgunned to death the moment we appear or facefucked by a pair of walking hands? Nah.

I mean geez. People get the smallest iota of power and they go completely bonkers with it.

"Did you like my app?"

"No."

"What's wrong with it?"

"We don't know you."

Everything is wrong with your application.

Forum account time.
Lore.
Community activity.
You and your friend being meta buddies.
Cross liking eachothers application.
Getting upset because youre denied.