Gahn'tha-cte Bpi-de (Ruthless End)

[Casany]

Byond ID:Casany

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): August W. Walker

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Gahn'tha-cte Bpi-de (Ruthless End)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?Yes, I've read through it about 5 times now

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
David Starm Marched through the flat plains, with his squad of 20 men. It used to be 50 but someone, or something, was killing them all one by one. David did not recognise the planet they were on, and the local fauna looked weird and bulbus. A storm loomed in the distant, and it was twilight. David had ordered his men to stick together, but even with that the men were picked off, and never seen again. The tall grass didn't help, as it was neck high, and very hard to see anything beyond grass and the occasional "tree". Suddenly, there was a boom. David thought it was from the storm nearby but then soon realized it was not natural. he turned around and saw two more men dead. David told his men to leave them, since they would just be dead weight. suddenly, a strong force hit his jaw, and he blacked out to the sound of gunfire and screams. when he awoke he found all his men, slaughtered like pigs, in some ruthless show of might and power. It looked like all of them had been cut and stabbed by some blade, and then he realized that whatever the thing was it may still be around. He turned to see a figure 8 feet tall, and he pulled his gun all to late, for it was knocked out of his hand. he fell back, and tried to crawl away, when he felt something stomp his back. he turned, with a knife he found on a corpse next to him, and tried to stab the foot. the knife was ineffective, and it barely did any damage. he kept trying, and the creature showed him mercy. It let him get up, and he looked at it with awe and disgust. A second later, the predator walked back away, and turned. A cannon appeared from its back, and three red dots on his left leg. He realized what was about to happen and picked his pistol up with lightning speed and fired off two shots. BOOM. He screamed in agony, and collapsed to his knees, holding the stump that used to be his leg. He looked up, and fired off four more rounds. One hit the predator in the shoulder, but it was like it didn't even affect it. Then it slowly started walking toward him. He picked his knife up, and got in a ready stance, or tried to. it was hard since he was missing his left leg and bleeding heavily. The creature laughed and extended its wrist blades. David faught like hell, and got a slice in on its calf, an area that wasn't as guarded as the rest. In the end though, he was stabbed through the back with the blades. He still was breathing and living, but he was getting weaker... He was let down when he had barely any life left. He tried to turn himself, but he couldn't feel his body from the neck down. the predator then ripped his spin out. It was agony, and finally, David died. A Ruthless end, you could call it. He returned to the ship with the skulls of 50 men, and went off to find more worthy prey.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I Intend to find worthy prey, and fight them until they cant move, and slowly torture them until their death. with me, death seems like it will never come. I do intend to follow the honor code with all my heart, so i wont kill people who cant fight me, ill only fight full health marines. Also, I will not give a marine warning before I kill them, since that's what a real hunt should be like. Ill also try not to be seen, remaining cloaked until I fight something. I intend to RP less, and fight more. The only humans that may speak to/interact with me without being killed would be the people who have killed a queen(and i know about it) or those who have bested me in a hunt.

Why should we whitelist you?Well, I have been playing CM for about two years, and I have seen many servers rise and fall trying to get the "mix" right, and I know that I am pretty well known, or well, I used to be really well known.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I Was, it was a 24 hour ban for being an incompetent CO, and it really wasn't my best round. if job bans count, then i was job banned from command roles

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No, i am not currently banned from any other servers

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?Yes


The only other thing i would like to mention is that i think my account may only be 28 or 27 days old, but i don't count. If it isnt old enough, ill wait the needed time and re apply when it is the right age

[coolsurf6]

Just a note about the account age. You could have waited a couple of days and made this a draft to post once it was 2 month old. Your chances are hindered because of it now.

About the story

Its pretty good. I am not fuly familiar with the lore so i cant make any major judgements. But i can say effort was put in to making a unique story. Torture just seems a little... Eccesive.

[Casany]

My whole predator is built on ruthlessly killing prey, with no remorse. Now, I may remove the torture, because I realize that it really isn't needed to make him seem ruthless. anyway, thanks for the input. i've been working on this draft for about a weeks to perfect the story and other elements, coming up with the name and reading the lore. Anyway, you may be right that i hindered myself, and if i do get auto denied because of a 2-4 day difference from 30 days, its my own fault. Though, i do feel like an idiot because for as long as i've played this server i only made my forum account recently. and about the lore. I have been reading up on the lore, and if it was hard to tell, these soldiers, all 50 of them, were kidnapped and put onto this planet. Predators have been known to do this, so i added it to my story for a more unique feel, since most other stories have the marines or prey come to them, or they are hunted in their natural habitat. So anyway, thanks for the input

[Casany]

i spelled spine wrong on my backstory

[Casany]

Question: Does the backstory HAVE to be about the first hunt or can it be about the hunt prior to the hunt on Hadley's Hope?

[northcote4]

Question: Does the backstory HAVE to be about the first hunt or can it be about the hunt prior to the hunt on Hadley's Hope?

The backstory can be anything, as long as it's reasonable and depicts your Yautja well. That's my understanding.

[Casany]

thanks!

[Casany]

I need some opinions on my story, if anyone has anything that you think should be explained or fixed(i cant fix it now but i just need some info on how it went)

[Feweh]

Banned from Commander, Executive Officer, Bridge Officer, Military Police, Corporate Liaison, Requisitions Officer, Chief Medical Officer - Failure of IC escalation, destabilized the round, and apparently cause meta-rushing alien caves early on.

Banned from Chief Engineer, Maintenance Tech - Caused a huge fire, broke the glass, and other problems in engineering by


Not going to happen, you're job-banned from major roles.
There's no way you can be a Predator when you can't play normal marine roles.

[Casany]

...ok, i can accept that... But i would like to say... the engi and maint tech was an accident, i didnt know how to be an engi...i shouldn't have been one i know but anyway, it was a few months ago...and the command roles... I was arrested for tazing the CL on accident and i wasn't informed, or well, not CLEARLY informed...and as for the destabilization of the round, i just want you to know i didnt want marines to instantly meta rush the aliens, i didnt want any of that. i just told them to scout out the planet. The Whole briefing as i can remember just asked marines to scout the colony and planetside and look for survivors. If it looked like i was trying to meta rush aliens i wasn't i can promise you that. i'm a long time CM player, 2 years running right now, and these are the only bans i have EVER got that i can remember... anyway, just wanted to post my side...and my last statement is so: ok, i can accept that i wont get predator, but i just don't see WHY i wont get predator. i know i'm banned from these roles but i would like to say that you shouldn't judge someone by how they acted at 3:12 AM, in the past, and, based on what ive seen and heard from predators, they are not commanders or any "leaders" nore are they engineers or builders. They are hunters, combative killers, and so it means that being good at these roles or being able to play them doesnt matter. anyway, that's all i would like to say...And, those bans, all those job banns, resulted from two bad things i did, and i had no prior notes for any of them(i may have had one for engineering role) Its not like i got separately banned from each role. I know they are major and i can accept having to wait the three months, maybe after i apply for an un ban, but i just wanted to clarify and well, try and come to a conclusion about what can be done. Yes, you don't have to accept me but i just wanted to put this down.

[Casany]

and i would also like to ask if you read over my report...i know it wont change your mind but i'm writing a short story for my family about "Ruthless End" and i want to know what to change about the story if that's possible

[Feweh]

Denied due to numerous Job-bans the player currently has.