Gahn'tha-cte Bpi-de (Ruthless End)

[Casany]

Byond ID:Casany

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): August W. Walker

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Gahn'tha-cte Bpi-de (Ruthless End)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?Yes, I've read through it about 5 times now

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
David Starm Marched through the flat plains, with his squad of 20 men. It used to be 50 but someone, or something, was killing them all one by one. David did not recognise the planet they were on, and the local fauna looked weird and bulbus. A storm loomed in the distant, and it was twilight. David had ordered his men to stick together, but even with that the men were picked off, and never seen again. The tall grass didn't help, as it was neck high, and very hard to see anything beyond grass and the occasional "tree". Suddenly, there was a boom. David thought it was from the storm nearby but then soon realized it was not natural. he turned around and saw two more men dead. David told his men to leave them, since they would just be dead weight. suddenly, a strong force hit his jaw, and he blacked out to the sound of gunfire and screams. when he awoke he found all his men, slaughtered like pigs, in some ruthless show of might and power. It looked like all of them had been cut and stabbed by some blade, and then he realized that whatever the thing was it may still be around. He turned to see a figure 8 feet tall, and he pulled his gun all to late, for it was knocked out of his hand. he fell back, and tried to crawl away, when he felt something stomp his back. he turned, with a knife he found on a corpse next to him, and tried to stab the foot. the knife was ineffective, and it barely did any damage. he kept trying, and the creature showed him mercy. It let him get up, and he looked at it with awe and disgust. A second later, the predator walked back away, and turned. A cannon appeared from its back, and three red dots on his left leg. He realized what was about to happen and picked his pistol up with lightning speed and fired off two shots. BOOM. He screamed in agony, and collapsed to his knees, holding the stump that used to be his leg. He looked up, and fired off four more rounds. One hit the predator in the shoulder, but it was like it didn't even affect it. Then it slowly started walking toward him. He picked his knife up, and got in a ready stance, or tried to. it was hard since he was missing his left leg and bleeding heavily. The creature laughed and extended its wrist blades. David faught like hell, and got a slice in on its calf, an area that wasn't as guarded as the rest. In the end though, he was stabbed through the back with the blades. He still was breathing and living, but he was getting weaker... He was let down when he had barely any life left. He tried to turn himself, but he couldn't feel his body from the neck down. the predator then ripped his spin out. It was agony, and finally, David died. A Ruthless end, you could call it. He returned to the ship with the skulls of 50 men, and went off to find more worthy prey.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? I Intend to find worthy prey, and fight them until they cannot stand, then slowly pull them to the lodge, and cut their heads off slowly. with me, death seems like it will never come. I do intend to follow the honor code with all my heart, so i wont kill people who cant fight me, ill only fight full health marines. Also, I will not give a marine warning before I kill them, since that's what a real hunt should be like. Ill also try not to be seen, remaining cloaked until I fight something. I intend to RP less, and fight more. The only humans that may speak to/interact with me without being killed would be the people who have killed a queen(and i know about it) or those who have bested me in a hunt. Also, IF a good RP opportunity comes i will not pass it up. So, there's that

Why should we whitelist you?Well, I have been playing CM for about two years, and I have seen many servers rise and fall trying to get the "mix" right, and I know that I am pretty well known, or well, I used to be really well known, and i think ill add something that a lot of preds are missing: Actual hunting, of unsuspecting prey. ill give them a chance to fight back but as i said, i intend to HUNT, and i wont be doing any "honor duels" unless it is someone who has actively killed many xenos and has been a badass player

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I Was, it was a 24 hour ban for being an incompetent CO, and it really wasn't my best round. if job bans count, then i was job banned from command roles. both bans were lifted.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No, i am not currently banned from any other servers

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?Yes


please please PLEASE inform me what i did wrong/right when giving a +/-1. Thanks for the responses beforehand

[forwardslashN]

Your previous app was denied two weeks ago. You need to wait three months before reapplying.

[Casany]

Rahlzel and Feweh approved this app being posted


I have their PMs if you need to see them

[Casany]

Sent: Today, 19:54
From: Rahlzel
Recipient: Casany

I would say that if the ONLY reason why you were denied was because of the jobbans, possibly. Since the jobban is no longer an issue, it seems logical to me to re-apply. I don't have an issue with it personally, but I'm going on the assumption that you were only denied because of the jobban, which might not be the whole story. If that was the only caveat, go ahead and re-apply and keep a screenshot of my (this) reply handy so you can link to it in your next application as proof. Just give some thought to my first sentence.


Sent: 15 minutes ago
by Casany

So, i have been asking around to be able to repost my pred app because it was denied due to job bans that i got lifted. i asked Rahlzel and he sent me this back. i am sending it to you to inform and ask your permission as well. I know i could have gone ahead and done it without your approval but i am not one of those people. i implore you to think it over, and get back to me.
Sincerely, Casany


Sent: 14 minutes ago
From: Feweh
Recipient: Casany

He already asked me about it and I said sure.
Your choice if you want to make the same app reposted.

[forwardslashN]

In that case, given what I've seen from you in the game, I'm going with a -1.

[Casany]

In that case, given what I've seen from you in the game, I'm going with a -1.

I would like to ask why, if you dont mind

so i can improve in the future

[forwardslashN]

I would like to ask why, if you dont mind

so i can improve in the future

I haven't seen strong RP from you in the game, which is something I value for any potential predator. Also specifically this:

The only humans that may speak to/interact with me without being killed would be the people who have killed a queen(and i know about it) or those who have bested me in a hunt. Also, IF a good RP opportunity comes i will not pass it up.

It's fine if you are bigoted or don't care about humans at all, but that's a ridiculously high standard considering only yautja elites will typically net queen kills. I also don't really like your answers for why you should be whitelisted. Hunting is only a part of the what playing a predator is about; most people frown on murderboning.

[Casany]

I won't murderbone, if that's what your thinking. In the lore a predator would only interact/ speak with a human who has proved themselves by killing a xeno. Now, I shouldn't have made it a queen, and if I could I would change it. And, as I said, I will never pass up a good RP situation. Thanks for the input though. RP wise, I'll try and get better at it

[Casany]

So, I realized I didn't put how I would HUNT. Not how I play but hunt. For humans, I would start the hunt by telling the human or humans to run, while cloaked. If the stand their ground, I will consider it an honor duel and, if I win, will leave them crit since I don't like tacking people out of the round. If they run, I will give chase cloaked until I am 3 tiles behind them. I will uncloak and attack them. 3 tiles is plenty of time to get a weapon put. For xenos it'll be the usual. I will only hunt Reid 2 or 3, and ancient/elite teir 1s. If a xeno attacks me I will not hesitate to strike it down. Now, for honor duels: if I am bested in combat, I will use my bracers like all good predators do. If I best my opponent and they didn't put up a good fight, I will decap and skin them. If I win, but they managed to CRIT me, I will take then as an apprentice, If they chose to accept my offer. I plan to be bigoted to an extent, with people who just run up and hug me getting a good slash in the chest. So there's the little description of my hunts

[Azmodan412]

It is VERY hard to crit a predator. I should know.

[Feweh]

Ive never seen you RP in game at all.
Ive always lumped you into the more robust marine category.

[Casany]

Ive never seen you RP in game at all.
Ive always lumped you into the more robust marine category.

I try to RP a lot, I don't know why people say I don't. I can get better, and thanks to these comments I will be actively working to make it better. My best RP moments though happen In pred rounds which isn't suprising. As I said, I will be actively trying to get better at RP since these comments have really helped open my eyes. Thanks for the feedback. Also, about me being in the robust category, Is that a compliment or more of a "bad" place to be?

[Casany]

It is VERY hard to crit a predator. I should know.

I've killed a pred before only taking minor damage, though I was using a machete. I want it to be hard since If it's easy I would have tens of apprentices

And because of how bigoted my pred is he doesn't even want one

[Casany]

What I'm really going for with this predator is a pred who won't just walk up to marines and ask for trades/duels/alliances. I will RP, or try to my best extent. I wanted my predator to be "unique" in the sense of how he acts. My pred won't be like others, I can promise it will be a unique experience for all involved. I will try my best and never break a rule regarding the honor code and just general commen sense regarding how to act. If you chose to accept me, which may not happen, I can promise you won't regret it.

[Casany]

Backstory time!

This is why Gahn'the-cte Bpi-de is as "Ruthless" as he is.

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Ruthless End wasn't always so ruthless. Infact, he used to be very friendly to oomans, and he considered them one of the most honorable prey to hunt. This all changed when, during a hunt in the jungle, he was captured by the CAI in a trap, and was tortured and experimented on. He escaped with the help of his clan, who shunned him. He then realized that these oomans were just greedy, self centered creatures with no regard for life. Yes he may have been a kill but he didnt torture...yet. He decided he must get revenge on those who wronged him, and to make his way back to his former status. He started by killing the CAI operatives that had captured him, and then moved to the military squad that was guarding him, and the same squad that had killed two of his clan brothers when they broke him out. David Starm, the SL of the squad was the one he wanted the most. The day he got him, was the day he was free. He had killed those who had wronged him and then moved to find more honorable prey.

This is Gahn'the-cte Bpi-de's first hunt

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Gahn'the-cte Bpi-de was going on his first hunt today. this was the day that would make or break him. if he didnt not prove himself today, he wouldnt get a second chance. his choice of weaponry was the Yautja hunting blade, which was just a sword, lightweight and sharp, his wrist blades, and a smart disk. He also had a plasma caster but didnt intend to use it. When they got to the temple, the xenomorphs had already bursted and had formed a hive in the lower section. He and his two brothers, Stone Meat and Midnight Death, proceeded to the hive. Once there they were ambushed by 8 xenomorph drones. Stone Meat fell in the fight, but Midnight Death and Gahn'the-cte Bpi-de had lived. they got cocky though. They went deeper, to where the queen was located, and got ready to engage here and the army of xenos that waited. When they got in there were 34 drones, and the queen. the drones all charged, causing the two hunters to retreat back and made them resort to their plasmacasters. Midnight Death was dispatched by the endless horde of xenomorphs, while Gahn'the-cte Bpi-de was heavily injured. he managed to escape, but just barely. He knew that all the xenos had to be dispatched, and when he had left there were still 8 left. He used a medistim and went back down. He engaged them all with his blade, getting heavily injured again, almost to the point where he couldnt walk, but in the end, they had all fallen. His blade though, wasnt fully acid proofed, as most young blood weapons go. He threw his sword down with a clang, and brought his wrist blades. By this point, the queen had detached her egg sack and was making her way to him. He knew, and walked out to the top of the temple, where the queen emerged with a screech and charged the hunter. The hunter dodged and tried to get a thrust in when he tail collided with his left arm, almost severing it. The hunter took his mask and armor off, and discarded all his remaining equipment save for his wrist blades. He jumped, and attacked the queen again. The queen blocked it, and impaled his shoulder, injuring him heavily. He started circling the queen, and as a last ditch effort he tried a last time to attack and kill the queen. He was blocked and stabbed yet again, and he couldnt move anymore because of the pain. Before it finished him, he started turning his bracers on when a resounding "BOOM" came, and the queens head was blown off. He looked to the side to see Stone Meat, with his plasma caster, alive. When the yautja were picked up, Stone meat was shunned for interfering with anothers hunt, and exiled to a planet far away from any inhabited planet. Gahn'the was shunned for getting to cocky, but did nothing against the honor code, so he was granted the title of bloodied. He decided he would never again try to face a challenge he knew he couldnt finish. From that day on, Gahn'the was always much more careful.

Now, if i got ANY of the lore on predator punishments wrong, please inform me. i will be doing a lot of reading tonight to make sure this is ALL right. Anyway, there ya go!

[Infant Punter]

I gotta go with a -1.

Just based off of what I've seen in-game, I don't think your RP is high enough to the standard the role holds.

[Feweh]

-1

Watched you a bunch last night as Liaison and wasnt feeling it.

[Casany]

Thank you for the feedback, and as said, i will be actively working to improve

[LordeKilly]

Messy application, not a great attitude. Also you've played for 2 years, and just joined the forums a month ago? Very unlikely.

-1

[Casany]

Messy application, not a great attitude. Also you've played for 2 years, and just joined the forums a month ago? Very unlikely.

-1

OK, i can see why youd think it was unlikely i have been playing for that long, but i assure you i have. Also, could you please explain where my application is messy? And please, explain how i can improve my Attitude. Thank you for the feedback

[LordeKilly]

OK, i can see why youd think it was unlikely i have been playing for that long, but i assure you i have. Also, could you please explain where my application is messy? And please, explain how i can improve my Attitude. Thank you for the feedback

The paragraph has little organization and isn't in paragraphs, not to mention you posted more story later in the application. The way i've seen you react in-game just isn't something I can see playing a predator.

[Casany]

The paragraph has little organization and isn't in paragraphs, not to mention you posted more story later in the application. The way i've seen you react in-game just isn't something I can see playing a predator.

Ok, thank you for your reply and feedback. I will try and get better at RP overall. As for the story, i realized i should have posted it all at once, i was to impatient and didnt want to wait any longer. I will try better on my future posts. thank you

[Feweh]

Denied.