Banter in Paradise. Recon operations 1972

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Banter in Paradise. Recon operations 1972

Post by Skycave1 » 14 Sep 2016, 15:47

Might be a rough draft, but I want some opinions so far. The first chapter is complete though.


Chapter 1: Fishing in Nam




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Re: Banter in Paradise. Recon operations 1972

Post by Sadokist » 14 Sep 2016, 18:24

Needs moar

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Re: Banter in Paradise. Recon operations 1972

Post by Martzin » 14 Sep 2016, 21:31

this Is a damn good read.
however im confused that a lady with dyed hair is a foot soldier in Vietnam in the early 70s though
The dude who plays Murdoch Machowicz, whoever he is.
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Re: Banter in Paradise. Recon operations 1972

Post by Skycave1 » 15 Sep 2016, 13:28

Martzin wrote:this Is a damn good read.
however im confused that a lady with dyed hair is a foot soldier in Vietnam in the early 70s though

To shorten it for a response. She's an old player from CM, and a good friend/squadmate. This squad is nothing without her. The second chapter might bring in some character detail with how they work together. But no spoilers.

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