Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

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Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Monoo » 12 Oct 2016, 12:13

Attempt No. 2. Here goes nothin'.

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Jools Kirby

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Kha'bj-te Kuzal

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes. I've read over it extensively and will have it on hand to consult while I am playing my predator.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? So this predator will have a pretty hefty anti-xeno bias, but don't worry. I'm not out to murderbone or to shift the balance of the round in favor of the marines. The only way I'll exercise this bias is by finding the strongest xeno I can and trying to get it into a 1v1 situation with a melee weapon. This is an extension of the predator's insatiable desire to prove his worth. I'd also like to make RP more interesting by selecting and interacting with single players or small groups, though I would love some advice from other predator players on how to spice it up here.

Why should we whitelist you? I'm not that active lately, and I'm not very robust. But I don't run around breaking rules and I don't step on anyone's toes for any reason. I'm here only because I enjoy the RP, and I feel like being whitelisted will allow me to help share the fun with everyone else in the game.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? No.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? Yes, and I am ready to accept any consequence for stepping out of line whilst playing my predator.
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Feweh » 14 Oct 2016, 10:33

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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Boltersam » 14 Oct 2016, 10:56

I like your predator. Though, it's probably because it reminds me of someone. False confidence.

I'll admit to not knowing you, but I have seen your character around.

Before I do a full review, I'll need to point out that you shouldn't hunt the Queen in the early part of the round, nor really hunt the Xenos before they become a big enough presence.

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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Monoo » 14 Oct 2016, 13:39

Boltersam wrote:I like your predator. Though, it's probably because it reminds me of someone. False confidence.

I'll admit to not knowing you, but I have seen your character around.

Before I do a full review, I'll need to point out that you shouldn't hunt the Queen in the early part of the round, nor really hunt the Xenos before they become a big enough presence.
I appreciate it! I'll take that rule into consideration if I'm accepted. I'll probably spend a good long while observing the two sides, such as where they're making their strongholds, what their strengths are, the works. The last thing I would want to come off as is a dominating presence during the round - after all, each round should be about the characters and how they develop together.

I also neglected to mention in my application - I've had about 6 years of experience RPing, most of it on other websites. I thoroughly enjoy building and developing characters, particularly the honorable warrior archetype that's so prevalent in the ranks of the Yautja. If a marine can RP well enough during an encounter to make my character change in some way during the round... I think that would be ideal.
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Sarah_U. » 14 Oct 2016, 21:15

I'm actually interested to see more of you. The app itself is short and well executed in my opinion, with the elders dissaproving of the ascension of the predator through reckless mean as he owes his rank to his passed-away brothers.

One of my concerns though, is that you may cause situations where I have to retrieve your equipment or dive into the hive to detonate you due to having that mindset- Which isn't an entirely bad thing, but that I've had to do too often due to large amount of reckless preds around the server. (e.g. Often have to fight the entire marine force just for a vox caster.)

Try to stay active, be around and be considerate of how much you delve into the depths of your character, the code of honor is still important even before your pride.
Have a nice day, good luck in your app.

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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Monoo » 20 Oct 2016, 20:13

Sarah_U. wrote:-snip-
Big, big thank you for the kind words and the plus1, Sarah.

I'll also do my best to pay attention to my situation so I don't end up dead in the deepest part of the caves. As with most of my characters, I'm not super sure just how far I'll take Kuzal's personality until I've been in his skin for a bit, but I'll definitely do my best to maintain my common sense alongside the honor code.
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by SagaSword » 21 Oct 2016, 13:40

I won't talk much, name's familiar and i think i he's a good player and might deserve a chance in predatory. But i haven't seen him around since forever, you need to be more active pal.
Or maybe you don't log in when i do =/. I need more info about you.

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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Monoo » 22 Oct 2016, 11:01

SagaSword wrote:I won't talk much, name's familiar and i think i he's a good player and might deserve a chance in predatory. But i haven't seen him around since forever, you need to be more active pal.
Or maybe you don't log in when i do =/. I need more info about you.

Neutral for now.
You're still Saga Madrik in-game correct? Afraid I don't ever see you much when I'm on, so we might be active at different times.

Sadly a situation came up this week where I haven't been near my computer any. I'm doing my best to stay active on the forum to compensate.
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Casany » 22 Oct 2016, 19:01

Just based on what I've seen if you in game, I want to give you a +1. I used to see Jools on evertime I played. Reading through your app reinforces that. Great player, better RP-er,

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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Monoo » 23 Oct 2016, 00:19

Casany wrote:Just based on what I've seen if you in game, I want to give you a +1. I used to see Jools on evertime I played. Reading through your app reinforces that. Great player, better RP-er,

+1
Thank you, Casany!
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by doodeeda » 01 Nov 2016, 23:16

As it looks like you'll be interacting with Xeno players the most, do you have any ideas on how to make the round fun for them? What will you do if a capable Xeno player you try and hunt/duel clearly does not want anything to do with you, or how will you convince them that it'll be worth interacting with you?
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Monoo » 03 Nov 2016, 01:23

doodeeda wrote:As it looks like you'll be interacting with Xeno players the most, do you have any ideas on how to make the round fun for them? What will you do if a capable Xeno player you try and hunt/duel clearly does not want anything to do with you, or how will you convince them that it'll be worth interacting with you?
I'm really glad you asked this, as it's something I've given a lot of thought to and am looking forward to trying out and tweaking if I'm whitelisted. Nothing would make me happier than the ability to make the round fun for the xenos, since their rounds are usually plagued by sort of grind-y problems after half an hour or so. I think you'll also be happy to know that I have no interest in pursuing a xenomorph simply for the kill (thought that's how it will appear if I pull the RP off correctly). I'm hoping not just to hunt or attack them, but to give them something to do, a healthy diversion to the mid-round boredom of dragging hosts and stocking up on huggers.

It always drives me up the wall when, as a marine, I have to stand witness to my squadmates metagaming and chasing the xenos across the river on first contact. I've always preferred to give the xenomorphs time to react as well - marines are not the only ones that can benefit from those moments.

The very first thing I'll do is observe my potential target to make sure they (and I'm referring to playstyle more than anything here) have some capacity for thought and restraint, and aren't just a mindless killing machine. Most of the latter type of player is out strictly for winning and becoming the strongest they can, and I don't want to spoil this for them by killing them off because they happen to be skilled. A player that will react positively to RP or a duel-like situation and won't be salty is ideal. I believe for this phase I'll remain cloaked, though I may subtly drop hints of my presence to see if their behavior changes as a result.

Once I've made sure that the target I've chosen is worthy, I'll reveal myself a few times - if I do it right, I won't have to attack anything at this point. I'm just making a statement by being there and then disappearing again, letting that xeno know that I have my eye on them. I've read reports against whitelisted players where some of the main issues brought up against them is that the predator seems to show up out of nowhere to kill their foe before they know what is happening, and I'd like to avoid this for IC and OOC reasons. It'd be a stain on my predator's precious pride and honor, for one, and for the another it doesn't seem wholesome for either party.

At this stage, I'll try to spice things up for others as well - I'll definitely try to interact with at least one select group of marine players for a while, provided they don't shoot me full of holes as soon as I uncloak. I'll even poke at the other xenomorphs some, but again, no murdering sprees.

When the circumstances are right, I'll appear again and signal my target - likely with a melee weapon of some sort, or a roar. I haven't quite worked the details out here, but that's simply because I haven't had any time in the character's skin. I'll build on his manner of conduct if I have the privilege of assuming him. And then begins the fight, in which I will try to limit myself to whatever melee weapon I've chosen. The plasma caster will come out only in the event of something trying to interfere with the duel.

The important thing here is that I can't let up at his stage - my character's pride is on the line, and he is out to preserve it no matter the cost. Either he or his foe will die. However, if I've misinterpreted things and at this point the other player really doesn't want the duel, I'll mostly keep up the appearance of pursuing them until I can find a convenient distraction and go pick someone else.

If I win the duel, I may possibly select a new target, depending on the sort of time I have on my hands as well as the amount and competence of the aliens. If I think I've done enough, I'll focus more on RPing with the marines. I might trade with one who has distinguished his or herself through combat, or RP with some more who have been traumatized or frightened by the alien threat. If I'm still alive, have fulfilled my original task, and the marines are losing, I may also consider hitching a ride up to the Sulaco for the retreat/defense. This would only be with admin permission, of course.

The overall goal here is to make my opponent's round very interesting, and to do everything I can to make everyone else's round at least more interesting than usual.
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Re: Kha'bj-te Kuzal (Reckless Pride)

Post by Feweh » 07 Nov 2016, 15:05

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